FF-Kalakarnian sister embark to India- ch 6 update - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

24

Views

2.2k

Users

11

Likes

54

Frequent Posters

-Nafisa- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: SK1991

superb guys...love it...
Adaa & Nafisa...u guys did a great job...👏
hei plzzz pm me ya...when u update...


Thanks mate, thanks for the Like too.
SK1991 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms


Thanks mate, thanks for the Like too.



anytime dear...
u both deserve it...😃
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Part 6 -

He opened the door, looking at her top to bottom. What could he do, he missed her. The past one year, he blamed himself for her death which now turns out was fake. He was pleased that Chote was smart and intelligent, and will not let Nafisa ruin her life at all. After all chote took out her revenge finally. He brought her in, as he needed to have a word with her privately.

Chote wasn't exactly ready at all. She knew there would be non appropriate stuff which he will speak out but she had to answer him, he needed the answers.

He told her to sit down and spoke: Why did you do this, you knew I didn't love Nafisa why?

Chote : weren't both of you married? what was the stuff going on between the two of you, which i saw. is that nothing? She already claiming her kid father is you. She doing that for fake. She can't get a grip.

Aham: what who told you that? That was nothing between us. We weren't even married. She wanted to know how much jealous you would be if i was spending time with another girl.

Chote is blank and shocked.

Aham : look, the whole world knows what had happened between us, no need to go blank about it. You still know we are still married. After all that happened, we didn't even have a divorce?

Chote: are you trying to say we need a divorce? We can't stay separate despite being married. Thats just lame stupidity.

Aham: am not asking for a divorce, am asking you to stay back and begin a fresh life here again. I can't even think of being married again.

Chote looked down, in ashamed and spoke: after all this happened and what i did, you are asking me to stay with you and begin a fresh life. I didn't expect that at all. Nafisa may go mad after hearing this.

Aham: let her, am not going to tolerate her once again for bringing a brick and a wall between us again.

Chote: She already planning to get me married of to someone else, and i completely refused to do so, you can't get married despite not having a divorce can you? Not possible.

Aham: hmm who gave her the right to decide what to do with your life.

Chote: God knows, i don't even live with her anyway. She lives in london while i stay in Spain.

Aham: seriously.

Chote nodded and both burst out laughing.

Aham: lets go outside, the cast of sns wants to see you again, all are shocked to know your still alive.

Chote had a terrible feeling inside her. She knows she can't face umang she hates it.

He took the BMW out and chote sat in it, he told her to get out of the trauma she had, and move on. He made her promise not to tell Nafisa whatever happened between them. After all it was a married couple personal talk.

Chote : She planning to do one thing, either she wants both of us to share you or me get married to someone else. I am not sharing the same man with her.

Aham: Don't you worry about that, Leave everything to me.

They arrive to the set, Aham walked towards the casts while Chote was standing beside the car. He yelled and called her inside. She walked in and everyones opened their mouth wide open.


-------------
Nafisa - take it from here.





vaishali667 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#14
hi ayesha i read your ff it was fabulous really nice one
-Nafisa- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#15
Part 7

Nafisa was at home with Ayesha junior (crap she was stuck with a 4 month baby) she had named after her supposedly dead sister to have a living memory of the said sister...but now the sister had returned from the dead and was back to her old tricks with Aham her baby's father...Nafisa hated her husband, it was an arranged marriage of convenience and she didn't allow him to touch her.

Ayesha and Aham had conveniently developed amnesia, they had divorced (refer this link part 5 of history...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saath-nibhaana-saathiya/1674265/ff-kalakari-students-embark-on-a-journey-to-india?pn=4) before Nafisa and Aham got together, Nafisa had insisted on 2 years separation of Ayesha and Aham before starting a relationship with him.

Now when Ayesha told her that she was going to see Aham, in Nafisa's mind they was the blame Aham had thrown at her for the death of Ayesha...Nafisa thought and still thinks he tried to shift all the blame of her sister death to her, that is the reason she didn't tell him about him being the father of her child anyway. As many times Nafisa had thought and thought what to do about this, when her child grew up she would have questions right...where is my father mummy...so Nafisa had sent a private investigator to India to find out about Aham's movements, to judge that perhaps she could allow him to know the truth or not.

Whilst Ayesha went to meet Aham tonight, she received a call from her PI and when Ayesha told her where she was going, Nafisa wanted to receive the news alone, away from Ayesha, the PI came that evening and rang the bell, Nafisa opened the door and let him and his photographer in the apartment/hotel...

Nafisa asked them are you sure...the PI said they is no doubt, he has had 2, 3 opinions from abroad, his travelled to the US, far east all are saying the same, Aham has 6 months to live if that, his contacted a deadly disease, meanwhile since he has had the confirmed news his been acting weirdly, he doesn't take care of his life or the lives of people around him...as he has nothing to live for. As he was too macho he ignored the symptoms until it was too late...I'm afraid Miss Nafisa, Ahemji has very little time left a couple months that's it.

Nafisa picked up her phone and rang Aham, he answered listen don't boss me around, Ayesha and I have decided we are not going to listen to you, we are going to live together happily in India and Spain and you stay in the UK...I said okay fine, but come to the apartment/hotel, I want you to meet someone before you start living it up with Ayesha.

Aham said yah Ayesha mentioned you have a child and you say it's mine, Nafisa said Aham just come here and bring Ayesha too, I want to speak to both of you. Aham said Ok we are coming.

After they little rendezvous they came to the apartment/hotel, Nafisa let them in with a smirk and a shake of head in disbelieve at they behaviour. Well now that we are all here sit down, Ayesha stomped off and plonked herself on the one seater and folded her hands, Nafisa took the baby from the maid and showed it to Aham. He smiled and carried her, I introduced them Aham meet your daughter Jayshree, as you can see unfortunately she has inherited your lion features, which is very manly and on a girl...bechari, but what to do, I was in love ❤️ 🤣, Aham looked at Ayesha sitting moodily and looked at Nafisa with a pleasant expression for having achieved all she wanted for coming to India (getting the story for IF members and introducing her daughter to her father)...

Well Aham I understand from my investigators that you don't have long to live? Aham looked at Nafisa in defeat, you had me followed, Nafisa said yes.

Then you know I have 4 months left max, Nafisa said I thought it was 6 months, that was last 2 months said Aham. I would like to get to know my daughter, I don't have any child or living soul from me when I leave this earth my hereditary line will exist only through Jayshree (folks I changed her name, I didn't want my daughter to be named after my sister anymore)...Nafisa said yes, but Aham said I feel for Ayesha she killed her child, and fought so much to be with me, Nafisa said that's true and I only wanted a kid, which I do have now...lol.

Aham said how about this for the remaining 4 months we spend it together, I get to know my daughter, Nafisa said that's the best solution, also you can leave her things like messages to open on her birthday, videos of yourself, also you can see all her little foibles and habits might be therapeutic for you during these next months.

Agreed so started the love triangle, I told Ayesha, just fall pregnant then you will have his face in your child forever when his dead, she said no thanks who wants a lion face in a baby girl like your child....

So as the days started going, Aham's health deteriorated and and on a bright morning he breathed his last and Nafisa and Ayesha informed the authorities and arranged the last rights to be done, they attended from afar and watched the cremation and said they last goodbyes. Took the ashes and scattered them in the India ocean as was Aham's last wish.

------------The End-----------
Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 14 years ago
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#16
i hate you nafisa, you ended it, 😡

no more tension for me to write the next season now ...



-Nafisa- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

i hate you nafisa, you ended it, 😡


no more tension for me to write the next season now ...


ayesha, did you really think I was going to let you keep him...lol

I told you before you wrote your part in pm's, b4 you updated it, you have two choices, we either share him or he dies, and you went ahead to try to take him for yourself...you gave me no choice mate...you'll get over it...it's all fantasy.😛
Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 14 years ago
rsk16 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#18
really very nice ff.interesting one.
soni4eva thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#19
read ur ff itz awsome
relii relii intrestin x
xxsanaaaxx thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#20
awww great update girls!!!! keep up the good work, can't wait for the next entries..:D

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".