FF:First Love~LAST PART~ page 81 12/9/11 - Page 57

that was such a aawww!!! so lovely update..

do cont soon
mwah!

Shilpa that was an awesome update. At least 98% of Gohem !! Well done!!

He skimmed his hands over her breasts while moving the blouse out of the way, making Gopi's breath hitch in anticipation of his touch. To her disappointment he left her breasts to soon and once again moved to her waist. She felt him push her skirt down her legs, then lift her and push her against the wall in one swift move.

😃The above line is my favourite😆😳... ok i took my time... but i really wanna take tym and read esp since u asked me to be kind...😆... Awesome OS... Just loved it... I hope u will wriote more

Originally posted by: sks21

omg wow shilpa ben that was brilliant...and for ur late update this update was worth the wait...excellent update...loved it a lot
and gohem scenes omg i dont know what to say about it coz it was soo good i'm not getting any words to say😍...
and what's this nick going to do now??
waiting for the next update...




-kavya

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Nick is being handled in this next and last update. Glad you enjoyed the story.

Originally posted by: rsk16

amazing update.loved the naughty ahem n ur romantic update.just was fabulous.

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the romantic and naughty moments, it took a long while to write, but your comment tells me it was worth it.

Originally posted by: vinaben

liked oh liked alot thanks

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: ANJ4

WOW shilpa that was great. now I need a cold shower. I am home alone, I knew I should not read this. You even posted a waring , but I ignored it...

Thanks Anju, I am glad you enjoyed it. Too bad you were home alone, but hope you made up for it once hubby came home.😉

Originally posted by: vaasanthi

super fabulous !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: taniks

An amazing chapter that would touch the most jaded of hearts, it was a beautiful reaffirmation of their bond which transcends everthing.I love the way in which you showed them unconciously preparing to take on the force that threatens to destroy them ,the bold yet silent statement of external forces only touching them on the surface never their hearts ,minds and soul came thru so strongly and beautifully. It was a meshing of their minds ,bodies , heart and souls to form a shield for their love.the part that really touched me was him making her aware their love for each other went so deep that nothing or no one could touch it .you were superb in showing the merging of two souls in perfect accord. To me this chapter went far beyond the passion and intimacy it was a vow of eternity . The last chapter showed an oath of togetherness , this chapter took that oath and this vow of eternity and created a weapon that is their deep, abiding love for each other.congrats shilpa as combined with brilliant creativity only a person who is in a secure and euphoric place could create such a sensual feast culminating in a ultimate promise of love that wil withstand any dark forces.

Awe...this is just a one very fabulous review, and thank you from the bottom of my heart. 🤗 You are very sweet and generous in your feedback, and I thank you for giving me this feed back, and yes for me also it went beyond the physical intimacy, it showed the genuine love between two people, and the the intimacy is the physical expression of this genuine love. It is bringing two people, so in love, together and making them one. Their love is being tested time and again, and each time it passes this test it gets stronger, strong enough to withstand anything.

Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed this update and enjoying the story.

Originally posted by: vrsharma

nice part

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: rsshree

such a wonderful update , 👏

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: _Precious_

what a wonderful update Shilpa. It was a captivating description of passionate gohem love making. I could it read more than once. The wait was worth and you gave us a fantastic update. Thank you.

Thank you so much precious. I am glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

shilpa it was smoking hot. great update. i was waiting for it eagerly and it was a pleasure reading it😉

Thank you so much Shruti, I am so glad you liked the smoking, hot update. Thanks for your patience, it was getting very late, but was having hard time getting all the scenes right.

Originally posted by: soni4eva

wow awsum luvd da update

relii relii romantic plzz cont soon

fanx 4 da pm x

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: Bidaaifan09

Are you sure your not a romance novelist because you discription of each scene is worthy of some of my most favorite authors. I cannot wait to read more...

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update. No I am not a writer, tell you the truth I have never written anything fiction at all until I started watching SNS. I don't think I can write a FF for any other couple either.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

awww amazingly haawwwttt chapter...loved it sooo much

beautiful description

Thank you so much Tina, glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

THAT WAS A TREAT😆,loved it!!!!

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the treat.

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

great update!!!

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: famzii05

very nice :) loved it,,
wander what Nick does??
reserved!!


x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

Thanks so much Fahima, glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

Is this really U ?.. Gosh I just had to check... *superlikes*

Need I say more... u r there S... think about the book already...👍🏼

The scenes were just magical.. cementing their bond and ...creating memories to last a lifetime...Beautiful !!

Needless to say.. please keep them coming.. and keep up the good work...😃

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Message from your Dear Brother -

Hey ben..here is ur kind review...awesome..lol

I shall give put in a proper review soon..😎

Hey Angel, thanks so much, and yes it's me. You don't know how I struggled with this part, it was very hard to get the words just right.

I think this will be my first and last attempt at sensual scenes, it is very difficult to come up with the correct vocabulary.

@book, just don't have the time, Kids keep me very busy these days, and with my recent rotating schedule it is getting harder and harder to keep the updates going.

@Message, thanks so much.

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

that was such a aawww!!! so lovely update..

do cont soon
mwah!

Thank you so much Jazzgal, glad you enjoyed the update.