FF:First Love~LAST PART~ page 81 12/9/11 - Page 56

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Posted: 13 years ago
An amazing chapter that would touch the most jaded of hearts, it was a beautiful reaffirmation of their bond which transcends everthing.I love the way in which you showed them unconciously preparing to take on the force that threatens to destroy them ,the bold yet silent statement of external forces only touching them on the surface never their hearts ,minds and soul came thru so strongly and beautifully. It was a meshing of their minds ,bodies , heart and souls to form a shield for their love.the part that really touched me was him making her aware their love for each other went so deep that nothing or no one could touch it .you were superb in showing the merging of two souls in perfect accord. To me this chapter went far beyond the passion and intimacy it was a vow of eternity . The last chapter showed an oath of togetherness , this chapter took that oath and this vow of eternity and created a weapon that is their deep, abiding love for each other.congrats shilpa as combined with brilliant creativity only a person who is in a secure and euphoric place could create such a sensual feast culminating in a ultimate promise of love that wil withstand any dark forces.
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Posted: 13 years ago

such a wonderful update , 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
what a wonderful update Shilpa. It was a captivating description of passionate gohem love making. I could it read more than once. The wait was worth and you gave us a fantastic update. Thank you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
shilpa it was smoking hot. great update. i was waiting for it eagerly and it was a pleasure reading it😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsum luvd da update
relii relii romantic plzz cont soon
fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
Are you sure your not a romance novelist because you discription of each scene is worthy of some of my most favorite authors. I cannot wait to read more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww amazingly haawwwttt chapter...loved it sooo much
beautiful description
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Posted: 13 years ago
THAT WAS A TREAT😆,loved it!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice :) loved it,,
wander what Nick does??
reserved!!


x.x.FAHIMA.x.x
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Posted: 13 years ago

Is this really U ?.. Gosh I just had to check... *superlikes*

Need I say more... u r there S... think about the book already...👍🏼

The scenes were just magical.. cementing their bond and ...creating memories to last a lifetime...Beautiful !!

Needless to say.. please keep them coming.. and keep up the good work...😃

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Message from your Dear Brother -

Hey ben..here is ur kind review...awesome..lol

I shall give put in a proper review soon..😎

Edited by angelirebelli - 13 years ago

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