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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love_goahem

yes this story is getting really good. Please update soon

Thank you dear... i want the GoHem track to be interesting as in the Post in real series...tooo
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kaka.lg



great dear...thanks so much especially for update in English 😉

hey sorry yaar i could not update it today... i will do it tomoorrow...
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Posted: 13 years ago
please update soon ff is going nice

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Posted: 13 years ago
looking forward to the next
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 34(1).

The whole Modis will stand watching the video... the person who could not tolerate seeing the video is none other than Jigar,,,,,,, his disappointment turns in to anger,, and he goes and throws the DVD on floor... in such a force it spills and spins on the floor... this action of Jigar makes all the guests to come out of their minds and every one will be shocked to see Jigars behaviour...

Hetal shock with tears and lot of questions in her face will be scared to see Jigar the son who never got angry on any person... will be highly worried to see him completely out of his stamina and his emotional fluctuation will make baa worried too...

Rashi and her mother urmila could not imagine the next few minutes what the fate has written for them,,, and will stand scared and they could not peep through their own eyes will stand their head bent and with tears flowing from Rashis eyes...

Gopi could not believe her own eyes that her Rashi and mami can go to this level that Rashi married Jigar in the name of Dhoka...

Parag and Chirag will stand like a still unable to do anything, Kokila's eyes widenend will be looking in to Urmila as if she is going to pierce a knife in to their stomach anytime...

Dhawal and Kinjal could not even imagine their greedy fayi can go to such a cheap level to get Rashi married to Jigar by spoiling someone elses life...

The guest who were the invitee for the party could not react to the situation... and will start speaking to themselves...

Savitha ben will tell to the ladies... "i also knew why kokila rejected Rashi for Aham, but Hetal ben how did she choose Rashi for her only son, the girl who is being rejected by her devrani for her son, did not hetal ben thought for the second before agreeing the marriage, what made kokila ben reject rashi for Aham.. if she have done a duty of a good mother than hetal ben would have not seen this day today"

Rama ben will tell savitha "savitha ben chup rahiye, Marriages are being decided in heaven, may be Rashi was in Jigar's Kismath... but the way she plotted to marry Jigar is very shameful no one on the earth will never manipulate in such a way to get married to rich guy"

Savitha ben "teek kaha rama ben, this is the first marriage on this earth which is not decided in heaven, its being plotted on the earth by two evil ladies, think of Sonal and her mother, how insulted they would have felt, this girl don't have humanity she can do anything to get married to rich guy, i cant even imagine what and all she has done before marriage"

Kokila and Hettal could not tolerate the words which were coming out of guests mouth...

Aham will see his mothers status and will come forward and will address the guests and says please forgive for the inconvenience , and the party is over for the day, ..

All the guests on Ahams plea will move out of MM... some of the close friends of Hetal will come near hetal and say... bagwan tume shakti de ...

The whole Modi pariwar and bhavan will stand in the Modi mahal with a pin drop silence... no one will be in a position to see or face each other...

Jetu bhai patience level will cross its limit,, he immediately goes near Urmila who was bending her head and standing next to Rashi...

"urmila why are you standing like this without even opening your mouth, what is this i always thought you were greedy, but i am ashamed to say this you were unfit to be called as a woman, being a mother of Rashi how can you teach and make her to spoil someones life,,, you are so cheap than what i thought, and you made Jigar to marry Rashi by playing such a shameful games with the poor girl... how can you urmila if Rashis life is spoilt in the same way as that of the sonal will you be keep quite,,,,, "

"dekhiye... its just a misunderstanding someone who cant see our happiness has done this... i know its all the plan of kokila ben she always disliked Rashi so she purposefully did it today"

"urmila ben just shut up, keep your bleady mouth shut, i don't want to hear even a single word... i know you and your daughter very well,,,,, jaisi karni waisi barni,... i never wanted to expose your daughter even though i knew the truth ... it is you and your daughter who always thought you can play any games with the Modis and get away with blaming others and to insult others.. but this time your daughters overconfidence made her life to be spoilt by her own hand... i had kept the original CD in my almirah... your daughter herself has exchanged the CD to put me in shame... but this time even kanaji could not save your daughter for the mistakes and the crimes she has committed"

Urmila could not utter the word... Rashi will go near Hetal and say "mummyji please say something, beat me, scold me you can punish me for all the mistakes what i have done,,, but mummyji don't ignore me and send me out of this house please mummyji kuch tho boliye..."

Jigar could not see that Rashi is begging Hetal for forgiveness and Hetal not willing to see Rashi's face..."Rashi ye kya phir se naya drama you have started i always knew there is something wrong with you from the beginning of the marriage, as you always went missing in the mid nights , whenever i use to find you , you were always on the phone... planning one or the other thing,,,,tell me Rashi what and all you have done this house from past one year... i cant believe even a single thing which went wrong in this house did not had any of your hands ... tell me Rashi... tell me before i know it..."

Rashi will be very hurt because of jigar strong hold on her arms..."jigarji please its paining"

Urmila could not see her daughter in pain...and on seeing Aham holding gopis hand and standing will irritate Urmila...

She immediately goes to Jigar and says "beta i know you are mistaken, i will tell you all the truth... please listen leave rashis hand please dikra atleast give respect for my age"

Jigar will leave Rashi in a force that she will fall on the floor... Urmila will go and confront Rashi and will help in getting up... Rashi will see urmila in the longing way as there is any kalakari to save her marriage... urmila will make a ishaara and says i have one kalakari,,,,, don't worry daughter...

"vevanji... i did not want to say this... since i am not only mother of Rashi but also to gopi even if iam a mami of her, i always raised gopi as my own daughter... today i caould not stop myself to tell this truth to you all, as i cant see my rashi in pain anymore, whatever you have seen is only half of the truth but ...its all happened because of this Gopi... after the engagement on mehendi day this gopi told she don't want to marry Aham... and i and my daughter tried to tell her it is very late... it will bring the honour of both the families down...so my daughter rashi took the help of Jigar in knowing whether Aham wanted to marry or not, because kinjal has shown gopi some photographs of anita with Aham and this stupid gopi believed kinjal... and later my rashi started liking jigar for his good heart... and on the previous day of the marriage a letter came to our house in the name of Aham that he did not want to marry gopi... and my daughter with lot of difficulty has convinced gopi to marry Aham and she even read the letter wrongly to gopi, since she knew it is Kinjals plan to stop aham marrying gopi... if my daughter would have not been, kokila ben gopi would have refused to marry aham, and you would have got anita as your bahu, and kinjal would have got married to umang... its all the luck of my daughter that you have gopi as your DIL."

"vevenji, after kokila ben refused rashi for Aham, my daughter was totally broke down, but she started liking Jigar, when i came to know about of this...i could not imagine my daughter if Jigar got married to sonal... so i tricked sonal so that she refuses to marry jigar... but vevenji, i know my daughter she loves your son, it was all my fault.. that i misguided her, i am mother so i became selfish... please forgive my rashi ...it all happened because of this gopi, my dikri tried to help gopi and her own life got spoilt"

"urmila i knew it you are such a fallen person, to save your daughter you will put an blame on gopi, i always knew you hate gopi, and you have not left even a single moment all her life to bring tears in her eyes... you made her education to drop, and used her as servant all her life, but i am very sorry for myself, that i could not rescue my gopi from your kalakari,... gopi dikra instead of saying to them you would have told me... did you came to know about your mami that she is not trust worthy don't cry dikra i am so happy that at last aham and you are living happily... damadji please don't listen to my wife she is trying to create misunderstanding between you ..."

Aham will assure Jetu bhai by holding his hands...

Urmila will be looking in to everyones face as someone will believe her... but this time she has told almost all the truth in a hurry to save her daughters life...almost all in the family has known the truth behind RaJi and Gohem marriage...

Jetu bhai will come near Hetal and Chirag will ask for their forgiveness as he could not be a good father or husband who could not keep them in control,,,, and it is all his fault which made Modis to suffer and he will promise chirag that from today onwards he will not sit like a coward anymore if he does so don't know this Mother daughter duo will do what and all in the society...

Hetal and chirag will see each others faces and say that "jetu bhai ,,,, i don't want to see your daughter in my house anymore please take her along with you..."

Urmilas heart will think of coming out of her mouth when she hears these words from Hetal...

"haan mummy even i don't want rashi as my wife anymore i cant bear her as my wife"

Gopi will feel sad that seeing Rashi crying profusely...and will think of moving towards Rashi but kokila will see Gopis expression and will hold gopis hands and will widen her eyes saying that don't interfere today... kokila will call Aham in eyes movement and will order him to take gopi to their room... as urmila will be worried about of her health... Aham will take gopi to their room...

Urmila on seeing Aham taking gopi out of the scenes will bite her teeth...

Jetu bhai will ask Urmila to come along with Rashi... but Urmila will loose her mind and will start shouting all the things...

That she made all these things for not to go out of the house so easily... Rashi is legally married to Jigar, they don't have any right to send Rashi out of the house... if they do so she knows what she will do ... that she will file an harassement case against the Modis and will bring their pride come down...

Jetu bhai will give two tight slap for Urmila... Urmila will be shocked to see Jetu bhai in that anger... and will shut her mouth immediately without even uttering the word..."urmila i am going home if you don't come immediately with me along with your daughter... it is your wish you can live with your daughter on the streets... since i am your husband and father of rashi... i am giving you last chance to be in my house"

On saying this Jetu bhai will walk out of the house...

Urmila will hold Rashis hand who will be profusely crying... and will pull her and take her out of MM...and Urmila for the first time has seen Jetu bhais anger all her life she always dominated him... but for the first time when she sees Jetu bhai... she will be totally astonished moreover shocked to see his reaction in such a storm way...

Rashi will be remembering the day when she entered the house as a bahu for the first time... and today the way she is being sent out of MM... while travelling in an auto...

Gopi will be profusely crying Aham will get water for her... and gopi will drink it... meanwhile Kokila will be worried about of Gopi and will see gopi and Aham in their room... and will ask gopi to take rest and gopi will nod her head...

Kokila will tell Aham to take cae of gopi... and will tell Aham not to come out of their room andshe will send the food to their room itself and will tell Aham to make sure gopi will eat it... Aham will nod his head saying yes mom.. i will take care for her...

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do click the like button if you liked it and please add your comments and suggestion and share your idea if you want to see any scenes to be added...PART 34(2) will be updated
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Edited by bhavya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great job Bhavya. thanks for this awesome update. Finally this mother daughter duo's truth came out. 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

great job Bhavya. thanks for this awesome update. Finally this mother daughter duo's truth came out. 👏

Thanks yar you liked it...
ya since it is ME you will have double post today one in the evening i am already preparing it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooow!!!! nice... i luved it...👏👏👏.. please make rashi repent dearly... in the real show she is not even repenting now... please make her really really sad.. will she ever be able to go back to mm????will she have any way for that???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi.krishna

wooow!!!! nice... i luved it...👏👏👏.. please make rashi repent dearly... in the real show she is not even repenting now... please make her really really sad.. will she ever be able to go back to mm????will she have any way for that???

Thanks dear for the suggestion... ya eveni want Rashi to get some brain atleast now after being exposed... cant understand her kracky character sometimes...
that girl dont know what she wants within 5 minutes she gives all feelings for money, marraige, jigar, behen love, mummy love-hate, kalakari, without kalakari... it is tough to reform your rashi...
RASHI IS COMPLICATED
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: taniks

Very interesting pls continue

thank you yaaar...

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