hai guys back again. tanjk u for ur lovely comments Part-10
part 10-1:
"i am lost", ahem was lying on his bed thinking to himself. How hard he have tried to keep himself and his room neat and perfect but all his efforts are vain. 1week of planning dint help him in the least. He was still in a rotten state and his room more messier than
the previous week.At first his frustration and temper were at peak stage. Nobody in the office dare to come near him. Now he dint even have the energy to yell at somebody. His presonal life started having effect in his professional life also. The Ahem modi who
was known for perfection now have to check twice before any presentation.No matter how much he planned some other mistake often gets in its way during his daily routine. What he dint know was koki would always interfere in between so that none of his
perfect plan would execute.Tired Ahem started to wonder how his mom used to take care of him and how she takes care of the household now. He was a utter looser in that department and "she" was a perfectionist. Ahem reaslized that the "she" he reffered was
gopi rather than his mom. Ahem hated to admit, she was indeed a perfectionist regarding the family issues, not once he could have have guessed that the control took over from his mom to gopi. Ahem thought back those days how royally he was treated in the house
and now his mom was of no help to him. He knew that once his mom declares something ,she would stick to it. She wassnt going to help him. Jigar words echoed in his mind "
bhai have a caring wife who look after his needs without any saying". So it was true she
did take care of him and that too without any publicity, like the way he liked. Then why would she commit silly mistakes during some times. Then another words "
how we used to blame u and ur MIL and husband scolds u". Is that the reason she performs the
mistakes. Due to her mami she was put to blame. But how can her mami execute the plan...k rashi. "stop" Ahem demanded himself "why are u thinking of her, so what if she takes care of me, so what if she put into frame ,that doesnot means she is a nice person.
She is a gold digger, a liar and i wont forgive her and mostly not made for me".Now he understood why his mom became impressed with her. Because of her work. His mom found the qualities she was looking for, "but what about me, i dreamt of a life partner who
can stand supporting me and by what i have learnt upto now she needs somebody who support her constantly . No i am right no matter what dat girl will not be a match for me". Thinking Ahem closed his chest of unpleasant memories and sat up and saw the messy room.
Immediatley his temper calmed seeing the mess and thought "I am no mark upto her cleaning".
Part10-2:
Ahem was in his office sitting in a corner hoping nobody would look at him.He forgot to told mani to iron his shirt again and here he is with crumpled shirt, unpolished shoe, hazzy hairstyle and muderous looks. His kaka was discussig a project to jigar and ahem.
Ahem had to admit, Rashi intervention had defenitely brought a change in him. Ahem could easily see his duplicate in jigar now. His dressing style changed to suits now a days and his behaviour left everybody stunned. He was not downright unpleasant like him but
he was dedicated like him. Jigar participated well in the family business and all started to see his potential comming out. This left with Ahem's ego that his brother who worked under him was now capable enough to handle both his professional and personal life whereas
he got struck at both the ends. Ahem thought since his childhood Ahem concentration was uni directional. To impress his mom he forgot all his other requriments and habits whereas jigar handled his life well balanced. Ahem though glad at his brother started being
serious in his life but somewhere he thougt he was loosing to him. Both the times jigar saved him from commiting mistake and this made Ahem ego hurt to take help from his brother. A new worry entered his worries list that was he being incapable to handle the
business and if the power goes to jigar then...Ahem stopped there, he could not even imagine the picture of his depresseed mother. He knew that his mother takes pride in the family due to him and now due to his stupid mistakes he cant let her down. His thoughts broke
when his kaka called him.Chirag spoke "Ahem this is a major project and very important to all of us,so i am giving the whole responsibility to u and i have the total confidence that u would bring this project to us". Ahem promplty replied "ji kaka" and looked at jigar.
jigar was looking happy and proud by seeing him and Ahem thought "still some things dont change". Ahem felt confident of himself and started planning for the project as the deadline was within 2 weeks and thought to work day and night and thinking of night he
immediately lost his confidence.
Part 10-3:
Gopi was in the kitchen preparing dinner for every one except Ahem as she was afraid that he might recognize her cooking. This became the daily routine for gopi, not to show her before Ahemji leaves and lock herself up before Ahemji came. At first she thought her
maaji might get upset on her decision but instead she seemed glad and this made gopi's heart clench. Back of her mind she hoped that maaji would stop her but instead she encouraged her to do so and asked her not to step infront of Ahemji. How hard for her not to be in need for
her Ahemji and always ponder how he would take care of himself, but she knew her maaji would take care of him and thought that he might be happy now without her in his life. Kokila asked gopi to bring clothes from the terrace and she promptly left to do so. Hetal
immediately spoke when gopi left "kokila i think ur decision might not be right, ur making the children suffer. See the state Ahem is leaving the office and watch the state gopi is. She hardly speaks anything, eats anything. Kokila think again, there might be some other
way around, why are u not letting the 2 children meet." kokila spoke "nahi motha bhabhi i know wat i am doing, Ahem have to learn the importance of gopi. I want him to recognize her worth and this is the only way around. It will only happen when Ahem wil not able
to find her to help him in his needs. My decission is absolutely perfect and no mater what happens i wont let them come face to face and i beg u pls dont interfere and ruin it. No matter what Ahem should not encounter gopi".
Ahem was about to leave when kinjal entered his cabin. Kinjal eyes popped out and Ahem mentally pushed her outside his cabin. "Ahem bhai wat happend to u, did u met with an accident?".Ahem glared at her and snapped "why are u here kinjal?". Kinjal suspecting
his foul mood replied "i am looking for kaka, i have come to ask him some work for dhawalji". Ahem spoke "No way kinjal dont ask him as we both knew that mom would not want to mix the personal and professinal relations. and kaka already left for home early and i am leaving too
so dont bother him and dont forget even u speak to him he wil come to us for the final decision and i wil speak to dhawal regarding this matter".kinjal spoke" bhai dhwalji dint knew abt this". Ahem spoke" then how come u are here?" "Bhai i thought that if dhawalji
worked with u then we too could live in luxury, u know how horrible that place is and that rashi is staying there". Ahem thundred "kinjal no matter how it is u have to adjust there, its ur home now".Kinjal raised her eyebrow and Ahem very wel knew what she was
hinting. How could he give her suggestin when he desperetly wanted to leave gopi. "Kinjal i am leaving now, leave this topic and i wil drop u home". Kinjal immediately accepted the chance thinking to attachd to her brother in someway.
Part10-4:
chirag, hetal and koki were discussing in koki room. Chirag spoke" koki i think its better to let Ahem loose now as his personal condition is taking a toll on his office work now. We have a major project ahead and i put Ahem in charge. But for the first time Ahem
seemed to be disturbed by the idea.He is not being able to cope up with both the conflicts and this project is important to our company." Koki was disturbed with the news but said "chirag bhai i have full confidence in my dikra, u just have to give some time to him and
i am confident enough that he will be able to cope up with this situation. But i wont move from my decision and also ask u not to violate my condition. Ahem should not get any help not from gopivahu especially".But what they missed was gopi listened to the entire conversatin
heading towards her room. Kinjal spoke praying to make a conversation "Bhai, r u not feeling well, why are u in such a state. Is maa not well?". Ahem spoke "no kinjal mom is fine, mom asked me to take care of myself and i forgot mani to tell to iron my shirt". Ahem thought
how dumb he sounded saying this, but he was desperate for help. Kinjal immediately spoke "wat happend to gopi bhabhi?" Ahem thought "oh so she too knew it, it seems i am the only person who dont knw that gopi takes care of me". Ahem spoke" She is not in my life". kinjal
was happy, she feared that gopi might get close after rashi left the house but glad that gopi in the same hatred line. Kinjal thought this was the time to mend the relation with her brother. She knew her mother wont help him so "Bhai if mother wont help u then take gopi's help!"
Ahem head snapped at her "what nonsense are u talking kinjal, why would i take her help, we are not even seeing each other. We are living sepearatley even in our own house"."i know bhai but why do u think that asking her help u have to start a relationship with her". Ahem spoke
u dont know her, even i take a glass of water from her, she thinks i am in love wid her".Kinjal spoke "bhai think u cant live in this state, so just use her, speak a nice word to her daily and she would happily assist u without any doubt. Bhai she is very naive and dumb, she believes
everything anyone tells her, u need not to worry bhai and after getting ur work done u can just ignore her like u always do". Ahem was shocked. How can his sister speak like this. Then he remembered the day gopi came and told everyone kinjal being missing and later kinjal found
in store room. Is this how she used gopi. was gopi telling the truth dat time. Ahem shouted "shut up kinjal were r ur manners, how cheap u r thinking rit now. I wont and never do such thing like this". They reached kinjal house and kinjal was irritated with her brother who thinks
himself better than her. Before leaving kinjal spoke "its ur choice bhai, i know its taking a toll on u but as i see the way ur going it wont take u long to come down in front of maa eyes." Kinjal left leaving a desperate and confused ahem. Gopi was thinking abt the words her kaka
spoke." It means Ahemji is in trouble and needs help but How can i help him and if dont who will help him. what if he fails, maaji and ahemji will be so upset and their will be huge loss." Gopi dint knew that deep in thought she entered Ahem's room and her jaw dropped. "Kanaji!
wats a state this room is! This is the reason Ahemji is so upset.Immediatley out of habit gopi started cleaning the room but halted midway"shall i clean it, but what abt the promise i gave ahemji and maaji.".Then it struck her"kanaji i told maaji that i wont show my face to ahemji
and wont bother him, but by helping now it wont bother him but will please him and there is a chance that he might think that maaji have helped him". So deciding to clean the room gopi held an object and turned around and stood petrified facing her Ahemji!!
did it became too long
how many hate Ahem ??? did gopi ruined koki plan again??
suggestion welcomed and tell me ur views
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