first tanks for the response guys, u will get ahem and rashi realization and also a
special treat for my friend princess and all raji lovers.
part9-1:
"My life is hell", this is the first thought of ahem modi when he wakes up. it had been 2 week since gopi left his life, 1 week since his mom entered back into his life and still ahem dint find peace in his life. How happy he was on the first day of without gopi . He dint
mind mani bringing a tasteless green tea 10 min late to his room. He dint mind having to learve for office without breakfast though he wass looking forward for his mom hand made dishes. He was on cloud nine on that day. His mother told him that whatever
requirments he have will be looked after mani and whatever he need he have to call mani as she will have the responsibility of the house even more now as both the DIL are not in the state of work. Ahem could understand regarding rashi but wht he dint get was
regarding gopi as he always knew she jumps at a chance to impress his mom. He waited for his mom to continue as she would always boast about her DIL inorder to make Ahem embrass but that day she left without saying regarding gopi's state. Ahem left the
topic thinking gopi might still be in shock and also the drama created by urmila is nothing less. Still his kaki and others are in shock regarding urmila behaviour and Ahem controlled himself to keep such situations back at his mind to prevent him from disturbing
from the work. This was the habit he cultivated since his day 1 of marriage to keep the unpleasent things and persons back of his mind closed in a chest. All his happiness was short lived for 1 day. From the next day onwards Mani's late arrivals or her delay in his
timely needs started upsetting him. Everyday she either brings the tea late or prepare his breakfast delayed or forget his lunch box or perform some other mistake regarding his work. This was going on this for a weeks and Ahem was totally frustrated by now .
He thought that the servants became lazy as his mom was busy in other works. Ahem often wondererd now a days how her mom managed every need of him before even he asked her. Then thought age might be catching up to her and what mostly intrigued him
was where did gopi go? But as always he cared less and called mani for tea and as usual mani brought the tea just he was leaving for breakfast and again got scolded by Ahem and left away. Ahem thought he should talk to his mom now as things are getiing
off hand and once done that he life will be normal back again as in perfect.
Part 9-2:
A very scared mani entered the kitchen and sighed a relief. The daily drama was getting on her and she knew that it will be a matter of days that Ahem bhai will slap out of frustration. kokila entered the kitchen and by seeing mani he got irritated. "Ye su che mani
how many times i have to tell u not to get afraid of ahem and do what i tell u to do". Mani replied "ji nani bhabi i am doing exactly the way u have asked me to do but ahem bhai is getting madder day by day and i am terrified of him". Kokila gave a stern glance
to mani and said "Ahem wont kill u and why are u gettng afraid of his scoldings, he oftens scolds u and and no need to worry and do as i say, now go". mani left and kokila smiled thinking of mani's terrified expression.but koki knew exactly that whatever ahem
do it will be a few scoldings for mani only or to say just a few words of anger and glare and matter ends. Kokila knew that all of Ahem temper is reserved for only one person. The only person where he can let his full frustration out whether that reason be herself
or others always ahem's anger target was his wife gopi only. Kokila could feel that is just a matter of days now to strike against Ahem. Though Ahem was not even aware of his state and his mental turmoil kokila knew exactly why was he in such a state. Though
Ahem never accepted gopi in his life he did accepted her unknowingly. kokila knew Ahem's childhood habit of being stubborn for every little aspect. Though at first he never accepts the gift given by anyone even koki he gradually starts gets used to it and inturn
gets addicted to it and never leave that thing in his life. What fault of ahem was he acknowledged the tings given to him as for now stubborn enough not to acknowledge the person in front of him . kokila knew that ahem took gopi for granted as he knew that somewhere
back of his mind he was sure that whatever or however he played with her she would gradually be back for him and this made him more arrogant towards her. Gopi was the only one person for ahem to let his all the frustration out on her, to be the normal with her
without any principles and obligations and as per koki's view by now ahem must be used to gopi or to say addicted to her as out of his habit. She have to just enlight him of this truth. kokila thinks herself as lucky this time as everyting went convient to her. First
rashi is out of the house as she would normally destroy her plans and second now the whole family is their with her in her plan. And her biggest obstacle is out of her way, her gopi vahu, she was the root cause of all her foiled plans but now even without asking
her gopi volunteered to stay away from ahem and this was the most needed thing for koki now. Now all she was waiting for Ahem's explosion.
Part9-3:(Raji scence a special treat for my friend pricess)
Rashi was countng every second of her life . Though she was lazy at the modi bhawan she got used to do some minial work in the house out of koki's fear. Now she understood how hard gopi worked and why always kaki used to praise her. Even a menial job for
a dozen people though not considered big at modi bhawan but here at rajkot it was like a entire day work. Rashi got unknowingly got used to work and now her idealness became her biggest enemy. Her mother dint let her do any work as to keep kinjal in the
kitchen loaded with work. What surprised Rashi was she took it chalenging and performed every task given to her. The more her mother made her work the more she worked and got appreaciated by dhawal bhai. Rashi thought may be this was the differrence of
upbringings of which kaki always used to barge infornt of others. She crubed away of responsibilites even though she never lived a life of luxury and here kinjal the apple of modi''s worked hard and made her adjusted to her new life and already earned a place.
It was evening and dhawal just returned home. Kinjal as usual promptly brought him tea and some pakoras which her mother ordered her to make and gave to dhwal bhai and sat beside him also enjoying her pakoras. Dhawal bhai as usual started his irritating
talk without head and tails and rashi clearly knew that kinjal willl soon snap at him as every modi's knows both kokilas children are known for their temper aslike koki herself. But what surprised her was though kinjal was annoyed the instant Dhawal opened his mouth
she was hearing him without any interruption. THe more he spoke the more she gets irritatd but she listened on. There was a look of waiting for something but rashi observed dhawal dint brought anything for her. Finally dhwal stopped and handed the cup and kinjal's
eyes brightened for the first time in the whole conversation. Then dhawal spoke "kinjalji tea was very nice and the pakaros were the best n best in taste". Kinjal face immediately lit up and a proud look beamed into her face and she throw a look at rashi. Reaalization
hit rashi and she thought earlier regarding her behaviour in the same situation (fb). She was reading a magzine and jigar entered from office and said "rashi i have a severe headache please make me some tea".Rashi immedialtely snapped at him thinking never brought
her any gifts but expect her to work for him, she said "oho jigarji i have a very severe headace myself and ur asking me to make tea, i have just returned from work and u want me to go to kitchen again. GO and ask ur gopi bhabhi she will make tea for u and pls dont
eat my brains".She could see jigar was hurt with her behaviour but she cared less, jigar immediately reasoned with her "its k rashi i wil ask gopi bhabhi u take rest". And started towards the door and stopped and turned to rashi and said "who rashi can i ask u one thing?"
"what" replied rashi rudely. jigar said "how can u get a headace as only people having brains gets the headache na?" Rashi shouted "jigarji" and before she can hit him with a pillow he dashed outside laughing.(fb ends). Rashi now had both tears and smile. Smile because
it was a attempt made by jigar to make her smile that day but she sulked at that time and tears because of her slow realization of her husbands care for her. Kinjal gave a smirk to rashi and left away. Rashi thought she herself made kinjal her worst enemy and that will
never change. Now she knew why kinjal worked so hard in the kitchen. Not only to prove herself but also gain her husbands support and appreciation. Now she understood whenevr her mom used to tell her any work she made it only for herself and dhawal. Her mother
was actually making kinjal life pleasant than miserable. Her whole day of work was recognized by her husband and thats all she needed to keep dhawal under her control and also her house. Rashi knew now that its kinjals house now and everyting related is regarding
her household and first time rashi realized she is a stranger in hr own house.
Part9-4:
Ahem in a full blown temper. His room was looking as though hit by tsunami . He never knew he kept his room so messed up. Ahem got used to perfection and tidiness and this was out of his imagination. All the 2 weeks presurre hit me at once and his lack of proper
diet and frustration blew him out. "MOM, MOM" he shouted making the whole modi mansion shake. Mani was standing at the door trembling from foot to hair thinking how gopi bhabhi handled him everyday. Kokila came rushing towards the room saying "kya hua
Ahem dikra, why are u shaking the house". Ahem shouted "MOm tell this mani to behave properly, she became out of hands now a days. she never performs a work correctly and because of her i am alwasys either skipping the diet or late for work and now see my
whole room is in a messed up state and i asked her to clean up the room but still there is no response from her. Please mom control her and from tomorow onwards dnt make her get tea to me. U only come and give me tea . This girl became useless now-a days, not
fit to work at all. Mom no need to make mani do the work for me, u can do it directly na as u always do like always. I will hire extra two servants for u to help kaki in the kitchen so that there wont be any burden on u. Just make this mani stay away from me". Kokila
waited till Ahem pour down and when he stopped she said "what are u saying ahem dikra, i am not able to understand why should i take care of u when i stopped taking care of u since 7 months". Ahem was shocked beyond words "what are u saying mom u used to
provide me all the needs daily and it never changed, i have never sensed any change so pls mom come back and stop lying".kokila said" ahem dikra why wil i lie to u, i have never looked after u for months and now suddenly u sprang upon me saying u take care of
u. And what is this ahem dikra u r not a chid rit now, that ur mother have to take care of ur every need, i thought when u stopped asking me u have understood ur responsibilites and started according to it but what i see is u have never learnt it. It was just someone
was looking after u." Ahem attention turned towards mani and said "but mom i have always thought that mani whenever brings things to me i thought she did on ur orders". Kokila turned towards mani and said "mani dufford what happened to u. if u have carried
ur work perfectly since 7 monts then why r u disarranging things now.". Mani spoke "woh nani bhabhi i just work under supervision and previously u used to guide me and after that gopi bhabhi used to take care of ahem bhai". Ahem was shocked to know this.
Mani continued "gopi bhabhi always knew when ahem bhai needed anyting and she prepares everyting before hand and whenver ahem bhai needs anyting she just used to send me to give him whatever he needs. Nani bhabhi i never organised anyting it was alwasy
gopi bhabhi direction. She knew exactly at what time bhai arrives and when to heat and prepare his food. I just deliever things around". Kokila asked mani to leave and looked at a schoked ahem. Ahem could not digest the fact that he lived comfortably in the care
of gopi. He turnd towards his mom and said "k mom though u might have not done this but u can now there is no change at all". Kokila spoke "now this is ridiculous ahem dikra, i got u married so that she can take care of u but u never let her. now i dont know
how gopi took care of u during these months and i knw that u got into her ways. Anyways i cant change my ways for u now as it wil lead to more choas and i think its high time for u to take care of urself Ahem. Servants are only there to help u out but not to take
care of ur needs. U should not depend on others. The only thing is tell mani to do any thing at a time and keep ur room tidy urself as servants shuld not be allowed inside our rooms. Now u dont have ur wife to take care of u so take care urself and if in need call
mani tikche". Kokila turned towards ahem standing there like statue in a havoc room and thought "strike one"
k hows this
any suggestions or scenes to u want to include are welcome
waitng for ur coments
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