Hello tanks everyone for ur lovely comments. Here u go Part-11
part11-1:
Gopi decided to help Ahemji and turned around to find Ahem standing infront of her. Both of them stood there facing each other. Gopi could not believe her eyes. Her Ahemji who was known for his perfection was standing infront of her like a person who was hit by a severe hurricane.
His attire, shoes, hairstyle!! "Kanaji he is looking so weak, so tired i think due to tension he is not even sleeping well!!". What gopi forgot was she kept staring at Ahem. Ahem who was keeping his frustration buried and consicious about his attire needed no excuse to snap at her
for staring at him. He shouted "wat are u doing here? Dint mom told u to leave me alone. Why are u always after me. Cant u leave me in peace. Always come here to disturb my day and my work.And what are u looking at? Oh yeah mockering me right that I cant even look after myself without
ur help.What do u want to prove that i am useless without ur help.And who told u to help me. Who told u to take control from my mom. Look stop these tricks with me understand like u care!! Gopi by now very terrified dropped the object she was holding and put her pallu sobbing.
Gopi thought "always, always u come into his way. Always with ur stupid mistakes u make him mad. Why cant u just leave him alone. Already he is so stressed out and u put an extra show in front of him. how many times gopi should he have to tell u. Mami was right i cant even do a
thing properly"Gopi tried to speak "woh.. mein... ji... woh" gopi thought "shup up gopi and leave otherwise he wil get really mad at u". Ahem who have finally let out his frustration came to senses and the sound made by gopi when she dropped the object made him to pay attention to the
surroundings."what is she doing here?" And then he saw the bed which was clean,neat and perfect. "Idiot, Idiot, Idiot why cant u keep ur trap shut, she was helping me. She was cleaning my room and as usual i barged and destroyed everything".How Ahem regretted now for his decision to
come home early and shouted at her before even realizing what was she upto.But the damage was done. Gopi clutched to her lifeline pallu and started moving out of his room."No no no please dont go"Ahem was mentally begging her.But this waas his fault. But Ahem thought "No i wont take
her help, no way". But looking at his mess made by him and the bed made by gopi Ahem felt whatever he might do he cant make things this perfect. All kinjal words hit his mind "
She will do anyting if u talk to her sweetly bhai. She believes anything ".Ahem thought "No way, i wont degrade myself
i am not kinjal," But the project and her mothers aspirations on him and the relief when he noticed a clean bed "No Ahem dont think about that No way ".Ahem spoke "stop".Gopi stopped right beside him, head down. Ahem thought "shit, i dint mean her to stop". Slowly Ahem turned towards her and said
"gopi look at me". Slowly she too turned towards him but dint face him. He can see the tears rushing from her eyes "If only i could keep my mouth shut"Ahem thought. Ahem gave one look at his room and spoke "gopi u can clean this room".
Part11-2:
Gopi snapped her head up. Her doe eyes became wide with surprise and tears stopped instantly. She knew what he meant. He was asking her help, her assistance exactly like in kinjal marriage. Finally there came a chance to help Ahemji, her help could make his life better. She only misunderstood
him. Gopi's stare was making him uneasy. Surprise was so evident in her face. Ahem thought "did she understood what i told her. Ahem spoke "Gopi i got a project to work on and i need to concentrate on it. Mom would be very happy if this project comes to us. So for 2 weeks i dont want any
disturbance in my life. So if u want u can help me!!". Ahem was shocked with himself" how did i utter these words. How can i ask her help. Please say no and just go away.pls". slowly surprised replaced with happiness in gopi's face. Instantly a beatiful wide grin took over her lips and her eyes shinned
with happiness and excitment. Ahem just stared at her capitivating smile, her eyes shining brightly. She spoke "ahemji u dont worry, i wil take care of everything. You just concentrate on your work. All the family members wil be so happy on ur sucess especially maaji. U dont worry at all". Ahem was
tongue tied. Ahem thought "how can she believe me! Just 5 min back i shouted at her not to show her face and no need of her assistance. Why is she not confused, not angry. Is she thinking that i really want to rely on her help. why is she adoring me. why cant she be mad at me. why dont she ask me to
appolozize for my behaviour. oh god wat have i done. She believed me so easily. she is really so naive like kinjal said. Now she might be expecting that i started to like her. What if mom knows about this. She will kill me, no dbout in that. "Gopi dont tell this to mom".Gopi spoke "Ahemji dont worry
i wont tell maaji, i know she wil get mad because i am not supposed to meet u. But dont worry i wont trouble u."Ahem felt somebody have slapped him hard. He was being so selfish and here she was thinking about him.How hard he hoped now to tell gopi that he just using her as his mom refused to
help.She dont have any place in his heart. Unable to bear her happiness a second more Ahem left the room. When he returned the room was sparkling clean. His clothes were laid out.But for the first time Ahem dint felt he dint deserve this treatment.It was morning in mm. Ahem woke up with conflicted
thoughts. He went to the jogging to clear his head which was not sucessuful but he felt glad his bussiness mind was working again.He already planned a strategy and decided to intimate his kaka about it. When he reached his room, he was surprised to see his clothes were ready ironed, with his shoes to
handkerchief everything was laid on his bed. Again Ahem guilty rose to its height. "She could have just cleaned the room",but somewhere his back of the mind he tooo knew that he was relieved by leaving the burden of choosing his clothes as he would have spend hours wasting deciding which tie or shoe
wil go with his dressing. Ahem mentally thanked gopi and hoped that she might not do something else for him so that his already unbearble guilt will be more. Ahem got ready and for the first time he was looking at his attire carefully. He had to admit her selection was perfect. Everthing matched perfectly
with one another. He headed to the puja hoping that she wont give her another captivating smile as alredy one was enough to make him to spend sleepless nights. But surprise waited him. No gopi.As soon as he reached the mandir puja began."why nobody was waiting for her". He was looking for her to see
whether she was hiding somwhere."nope no sign of her". But ahem noticed that his mom was watching him closely. He knew what she was thinking. His dikra who was in a disaster state turned into a charming prince overnight. So inorder to prevent further enquries he immediately left to his office
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Happiness radiated from her face though she was trying very hard not to show it. Gopi generally woke up early. But now-a-days she is waking too early. Inorder to not to make her maaji suspicious she woke up at 4 and prepared everything for her ahemji. From his green tea to his breakfast and lunch she kept everything
in order and took mani's help in order to deliver these things. How miserable she felt when she have heard that her ahemji left without any breakfast on 1st day of her help. She mentally cursed herself thinking not able to help him properly. Mani gladly accepted her offer and consoled her that she too wil keep this a secret
in front of nani bhabhi. Mani had enough of Ahem's basilisk glares and volcanic temper.It was decided between them that before heading towards her room she will drop ahem's green tea in his room and as the remaining time mani wil serve food to Ahem prepared by gopi . This had been going
since 2 days and both were glad that koki dint find until now.. Gopi would as usual go lock herself up in the room before Ahem got ready according to kokila orders. This way she helped
him daily without even being noticed. When Ahem leaves kokila let her out and at evening she prepares everyone's food including Ahemji and went into her room and wait for mani to bring her dinner and that was the end of her day. Ahem was in his office thinking. Everything in his life became perfect again. But still he
was unable to dedicate himself to his work. He never felt so guilty even on the day he slapped her, he throwed her from his room and the list goes on. This fact even made him worse. He ill treated her, never consider her as a human being but still she jumped at the opportunity to help him. She was helping him in every
possible way and he was totaly depended on her. This thought frustrated ahem. He even sometimes thought that was she deliberatley doing this in order to impress him so that he wont leave her. At previous times Ahem would have accepted the thought but this time he knew she just wanted to help him. if he dint knew
she was helping him, he would have never known her presence. Everything she does with utter perfection and secrecy and Ahem knew before his request, she wanted to clean his room secretly. How surprised he was yesterday on seeing a flask of green tea with cup and succer. His first instict was to throw away the green
tea and he might have done that but thought to talk to her later regarding not to do such acts but was glad that finally he was getting his tea on time. He drank the tea and again saw gopi missing the puja. Then it occured to him why the tea was in flask. According to his mother she should not face him so she cant directly
provide him and arrange everything. Guilt became unbearable when Ahem imagined at what time she might have got up to make his tea and prepare his clothes. Even felt more embrassed when he tasted the food, one bite was enough to know who prepared it and left Ahem again in thoughts regarding when she woke up.
His overburden guilt again unbearable and turned into anger and thought "i dint ask her to prepare food for me, i dint ask her to take care of me." in the evening after dinner he went to her room to tell her not to keep her spirits up but was astounshed to see her ironing his clothes neatly piled up. Again a thunder bolt struck him and he left without any sound.
Ahem slammed his table. "Why does she have to care." He closed his eyes and remembered her smile. This guilt was eating him alive. "no, i cant go on like this. There have to be a way to get rid of this guilt. I am not using her, She just helping me like everyone does. But still Ahem could not neglect the fact that he have raised
her hopes again. Like the previous 2 times, even he smiled at her she would take it wrong. The previous two times he helped her, her hopes rose, he asked her help, her hopes rose. He too was a human, he too knew how it would pain a person if one loses his love. But at that time he thought she deserved it. He inflicted her
feelings unintentionally and now he knew what the result would be.
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Koki entered the kitchen and turned towards mota bhabhi. Koki spoke "mota bhabhi i need to talk to u".Hetal replied "say kokila". Kokila told "did u help Ahem to clean his room".Hetal was confused and looked at koki "why are u asking me". Koki replied "Because mota bhabhi until 2 days ago Ahem barely could handle himself
and all of a sudden his room is cleaned, his clothes are arranged and only 3 ladies can do this. I dint help Ahem and gopi vahu barely sees him, so only 1 person is left i suppose". Hetal looked at koki and replied "I am sorry kokila, i tried to change u but u dint listen and i cant seee Ahem in this state. I am sorry i should have told u earlier".
Koki spoke "But mota bhabhi u very wel knew why i was keeping miserable. It is the only way he wil learn gopi's worth.Dont u want to see her settle with Ahem. If u go on helping him than he will never consider her in his life".Hetal spoke "Kokila i knew this but also i told u, Its getting on his work, we have a important project in his
hand and just consider due to ur stubborness if Ahem looses his contract, can he face u, can u ever face him. He will be devastated. Kokila we should be strict with children but also at the time crisis if we wont help them then who will. And dont wory i dint take Ahem's full responsibility, i just cleaned his room a bit, he still looks after
his clothes and daily needs.Have patience until his project is completed. U need not worry ur plan wont fail this time, i have confidence. Kokila simply shaked her head and left. Hetal sighed a relief and thought "Maaf karde kokila, i lied to u because i dint want gopi to suffer. I knew she couldnot resist herself avoiding Ahem, and since the last 2 days her happiness reflected in her
face..I guessed immediately who cleaned Ahem's room but if i tell u the truth then u wil place both the children in a fix and regarding ur plan i just pray kanaji wil make Ahem realize wat a diamond his wife is". "There have to be a way to get rid of this guilt. How to overcome my guilt.God wat have i become.Why this girl came into my life".AHem was
remembering every incident in his life until he asked gopi to help.How she helped him, how he helped her. His embrassement, his scoldings etc.Then it occured him "yes of course, why dint i think it before, a perfect solution.I cant take back what i have said but it doesnt not mean i cant mend it. If She helps in my every need so wil i. In this
way i wont feel guilty whenver she helps me.We will just repay each other and gradually i will make her realize the truth that i cant love her.That my thoughts and expectations are differnt from others. There will be no need for anyone to get hurt in this process and i am sure everything will go as i have thoought".Ahem immediately finished
his work and left home. He was happy that finally he achieved a solution to his guilt and a very long lasting problem. He patiently waited for the dinner and had a content meal today without any guilt. He waited until everyone retired to their rooms and then left to gopis room. He looked carefully around and knocked her room. She opened the
door and stood shocked facing Ahem. Ahem immediately moved inside and closed the door. Gopi immediately put her pallu overhead and spoke tremblingly "ji maaf kardijiye if i made any mistake". Ahem first could not get it why she was asking sorry. Then he remembered that whenever he talked in privacy he always scolded her. Ahem took a
calm breath and spoke "gopi u have helped me a lot in these two days and i wanted to repay u too. I too wanted to help u the way ur helping me now." Gopi looked at him in surprise/ Ahem continued "gopi is there a thing that u wanted in ur life that u wernt able to get it".gopi replied no. Ahem thougt" why am i talking in puzzles with her just get
this done". Ahem spoke " Gopi i am going to teach u. U will study and i wil be ur teacher". Silence filled the room for a second and immediately gopi's face lit up. Ahem felt really proud of himself. He remembered her mami's words "h
ow u used to beg me to study". "If she is good at cleaning then i am good at studying. She will help me and so will i"
Gopi spoke "Ahemji tanks a lot but", her face immedialtley put off and Ahem thought "oh god d0nt she want to study".Ahem spoke "but what gopi?".Gopi spoke "woh ur project". Ahem understood her "dont worry i will work my projct until dinner time and after dinner ur lessons will began secretly".Gopi was elated. How considerate he was and agreed
with him. Ahem was about to leave but stopped and faced her "gopi u have kept ur deal so would i .This is a pure give and return policy. As we both will help each other and both have to keep this our secret. so lets start this purely based on friendship. So now onwards we are friends. k". Gopi happily agreed and gave her brilliant smile. Ahem could not
resist but a small smile played on his face. He dint knew why he offered her as his friend but just thought it will be nice to offer her minimum respect. So gopi as ur friend now i ask u to do a thing for me. "what ahemji". "gopi stop putting that damn pallu on ur head" Ahem demanded .(old habits never leave)
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