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Yes rubina I have already seen it but thanks. Can u tell am taking it to a different direction

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

Yes rubina I have already seen it but thanks. Can u tell am taking it to a different direction

sory i dont understand. what does that mean?

Do u think am taking this ff the same way as the show ? That's what it means.
And I have seen that link u told me, I have seen it before u told me the link :D but thnks anyway

ok my opinion will be u have to add more ideas of yours to make this ff fantastic. just think if gopi is a business woman and in one meeting there she will meet ahem and starting to have some dreams of ahem from previous life. like this

Gopi has not been included yet, remember she going to come when the rebirth happens. And this time she is a student from oxford university when she will find out she's a rebirth of muskaan.
How she going to me ahem: she going to bump into him. And then that's how its going to start and find out the raaz. Get me, I just started the ff, and some ideas in the 2nd chapter are there and there be more u know that. Am not going to steal the show script, yea do u get me. So you will gradually find out the real story when I add more of my ideas in it, its just the start my friend
I gave u some hint above what's going to happen in this ff-

oh no dont get angry with me. i am sorry if i offend u. i didn't mean it. i did get u ayesha.once again sory for that. your ideas are mind blowing

Originally posted by: rubinahansa

oh no dont get angry with me. i am sorry if i offend u. i didn't mean it. i did get u ayesha.once again sory for that. your ideas are mind blowing

its ok rubina

you didnt realize that the story am writing is far different from the original story which happened 7 years back. this ff has some same characters but different concept, i am taking it to a different line

its alright

oh ayesha i just thought that i made u angry. sory for that. my heart is beating really fast for that. i just read the stiry too fast realise the story concept

am not angry its ok, why dont you read it again with peace and you will get it this time while i update part 3 for this

u know what i went to sewing class today and the sewing needle went into my finger. i just read it fast because it was feeling really pain in my finger. still paining. will surely read tommmorow