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Posted: 14 years ago

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Yes rubina I have already seen it but thanks. Can u tell am taking it to a different direction

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HansaN

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: ayesha_78
Yes rubina I have already seen it but thanks. Can u tell am taking it to a different direction

sory i dont understand. what does that mean?

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Do u think am taking this ff the same way as the show ? That's what it means.
And I have seen that link u told me, I have seen it before u told me the link :D but thnks anyway

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Posted: 14 years ago

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ok my opinion will be u have to add more ideas of yours to make this ff fantastic. just think if gopi is a business woman and in one meeting there she will meet ahem and starting to have some dreams of ahem from previous life. like this

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Gopi has not been included yet, remember she going to come when the rebirth happens. And this time she is a student from oxford university when she will find out she's a rebirth of muskaan.
How she going to me ahem: she going to bump into him. And then that's how its going to start and find out the raaz. Get me, I just started the ff, and some ideas in the 2nd chapter are there and there be more u know that. Am not going to steal the show script, yea do u get me. So you will gradually find out the real story when I add more of my ideas in it, its just the start my friend
I gave u some hint above what's going to happen in this ff-

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

oh no dont get angry with me. i am sorry if i offend u. i didn't mean it. i did get u ayesha.once again sory for that. your ideas are mind blowing

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Originally posted by: rubinahansa
oh no dont get angry with me. i am sorry if i offend u. i didn't mean it. i did get u ayesha.once again sory for that. your ideas are mind blowing

its ok rubina

you didnt realize that the story am writing is far different from the original story which happened 7 years back. this ff has some same characters but different concept, i am taking it to a different line

its alright

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HansaN

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Posted: 14 years ago

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oh ayesha i just thought that i made u angry. sory for that. my heart is beating really fast for that. i just read the stiry too fast realise the story concept

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Posted: 14 years ago

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am not angry its ok, why dont you read it again with peace and you will get it this time while i update part 3 for this

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Posted: 14 years ago

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u know what i went to sewing class today and the sewing needle went into my finger. i just read it fast because it was feeling really pain in my finger. still paining. will surely read tommmorow

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