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Posted: 14 years ago
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He comes to the terrace and sits down. Jigar had the quitar in his hand while kinjal was sitting beside the piano. He was shocked, they are serious, they really want me to sing. Oh no, he remembers muskaan, and then he sees her spirit and she nods at him so he began to sing with Shweta.

male - aehem

tumhari liye mera dil bekarar hai

tumhari liye mera dil bekharar hai

mujse sirf tumse, tumhi sai pyar hai

female - muskaan/shweta

tumhi mera pyar hai

tum dil karar hai

janeman janeja

tum bin jaaoo kahaan

tum bin jaaoon kahaa

male -aehem

tum bin jaaoon kahaan

tum bin jaaooon kahaan

female - muskaan/shweta

jaise bazeehai phoolo(flowers) main kushboon

jaise fizaaoon main rang khele (spread) hai

male - aehem

dil aur dharkhan miltai hai jaise

pyaar mein hum tum

female - muskaan/shweta

tumhe mera pyar ho

tumhe dil ka bekharar ho

janeman janejaa

tum bin jaoon kahan

tum bin jaoon kahan

male - aehem

tum bin jaoon kahaan

tum bin jaaon kahan

male - aehem

jab se hui hai tumse muhabbat

choole hai maine chand sitare

female - muskaan/shweta

sare sapne sare armaan

likhle maine naam tumhaari

tumhe mera pyaar ho

tumhe dil ka karar ho

janeman janeja

tum bin jaaoon kahaan

tum bin jaaon kaha

male - aehem

tumhare liye mera dil bekarar hai

tumhare liye mera dil bekharar hai

muj sirf tum se ha tumse pyaar hai

muj sirf tumse tumhe se pyaar hai

female - muskaan/shweta

tumhe mera pyaar ho

tumhe dil ka karar ho

janeman janeja

tum bin jaaoon kahaan

tum bin jaaoon kahan

male - aehem

tum bin jaaoon kahaaan

tum bin jaooon kahaan



Aehem and shweta stops singing and everyone was smiling, and they were shocked to see him singing the song. They were happy.

The next day, he went to see the guru to continue with the spiritual guidance but nothing happened. Shweta who was following him, sees him doing all the spiritual things and was shocked. She refused to get married. Aehem sees her there and goes after her, but she runs in the middle of the road and gets knocked down by the car and falls down the mountain just as it happens to muskaan. He was shocked. The same thing repeats but in a different way. This time he brings her up and takes her to the hospital. She was fighting her life. It was critical. The doctor comes out and says, that they could not save her but she made a wish, that aehem marries to her sister Durga. Everyone accepts it and Aehem and durga goes to the court and does a court marriage. This had hurt his feelings a lot.

After a few days, Durga goes to guruma and tells her about his feelings but she doesnt understand it, and she also speaks to guruji who senses evil things, and he says that aehem has been in a trauma, which has hurt him a lot. A trauma which you won't bear at all which you will have to clear his paths when his love comes after rebirth.

Durga: rebirth of his love?

Gurji and Guruma: yes rebirth of his love, he loved a girl called Muskaan. A wonderful girl who understands everyone, then a big trauma happened, One day it was raining heavily at night time, muskaan and aehem was walking in the middle of the road to get to their car, cars were passing by and then they met with an accident, aehem got saved but muskaan she fell down the mountainside trying to reach the top of the mountain with her hand trying to reach to aehems but she fails and falls down and she dies. After she dies this gives aehem a depression and trauma, and he blames all this to himself as he is the cause of Muskaan's death.

Durga was shocked, she was waiting for that day when Muskaan's rebirth comes and she herself will reunite them again. But she had to be caution. No one had to know this. She keeps this a secret and goes back home.

After 5 years leap: 5 years of muskaan's and shweta death, Muskaan's rebirth who is a oxford university student Gopi.

Oxford uni in UK- Gopi comes in to the room where she was going to get her degree. She finally got her degree in Psychology in law. She is now a doctor and got a BHD in it. She was proud. She goes up and gets her certificate and award and goes to the airport. She takes her luggage and sits in the plane. She was excited to go back to India finally. The plane takes off and she sits down peacefully looking outside in the clouds. She closes her eyes and sees her usual dream. Some girl has fallen of from a cliff(mountain) and a guy is trying to reach her hand and lift her up. She can see that its raining heavily and she only can see in black and white. She cannot see the man and the woman face. Then she sees that woman falls from the cliff and dies and the guy screams out loud "muskaan". She wakes up and sees everyone surrounded around her. She is sweating and the guy next to her gives her water. They asked what happens and she explains to them what she sees everyday whenever she closes her eyes. She cannot see the man and the woman face. Everyone was clueless. Someone had told her to go and see a guru to check what this all is, as only them can sort it out.

The plane reached india, and she comes out. She sees her mother and goes to hug her.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its fantastic yaar. Pls post the next part. Nice concept dun no frm where u ppl get dese ideas!
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She hugs her mother and recollects the memory she was having in black and white. She thought she must have lost her memory or something but what could it be. Her mother shalini, meaning Muskaans mother was her mother. Shalini had adopted her. She knew Gopi was the rebirth of muskaan so she adopted her. Shalini waited for 5 years for Gopi to tell her that she was really muskaan. Muskaan goes to the guruma and guru and she sat down with them. After the guru finished the sacred pooja of the spiritual guidance they open their eyes as something was telling them, a rebirth of someone had come to them. Gopi was sitting down with lowering her eyes, Guruma tells her to speak and gopi tells them what she been dreaming since the last 4 years. A man and a girl met with accident in a windy, heavy raining day, the girl falls down the cliff and tries to reach the top to the mans hand but fails to reach and falls down and dies. The man cries out loud and says her name out loudly.

The guruji heart beating faster and asks who was the girl, can u see their faces.

Gopi speaks out. I cannot see their faces its all in black and white, its like if I have lost my memory and the girl name is...........

Guruma: bolo

Gopi : …......................

Muskaaan ........................... she speaks out

Both stands up and says to god : a rebirth has come, a rebirth of muskaan has come in front of us, oh kali maa, you have brought muskaan back to us. I can't wait to tell Durga about it. Oh wait a minute how will I tell her she has a son called mahir which means light. How will they face muskaan, kali ma, give me strength to tell this girl.

Gopi looking at them wondering how do they know muskaan, and who has rebirth of her. She was confused. Her heart starts to beat faster. Behind the temple was Dhruv who was listening to all this, no one knew he was there. Dhruv who is Gopi future husband. He was listening to them.

Guruma goes up to her and says: the girl you see muskaan is non other than is you. Yes you gopi. And the man you see is non other than is your lover Aehem. Aehem. After muskaans death he has been in all sort of trauma and tries to connect to you in front of kali ma, but this is what turns out, Kali ma has given the rebirth of Muskaan, which is you, Muskaan is you. Kali ma has brought you two back once again. There Durga behind them listening to them happy, that muskaan is alive, and she was in eager to tell Aehem. There Dhruv comes and stops them, saying she cannot be muskaan, shes my fiance,

There comes Mahir with his spiritual light and sparkles it on him heavily and he dies there. Mahir had a spiritual light as a gift from Kali maa. Dhruv is dead. Gopi isn't ready to believe she is Muskaan. She tries harder to recollect the memory and tries to see their faces but she still can't. She then tries more and then it comes flashes out. She could see it clearly the faces, of muskaan and aehem. And the temple beside them of Kali ma. She sees the sames scenes clearly, the rain hitting against them, winds going hard, cars beeping, then suddenly they meet with accident, she falls down the cliff, tries to reach her hand in Aehem and he tries to pull her up, she doesn't have the energy and she falls down and flat on the ground beside the river dead.

She was shocked. She saw his wife and son near her, while Gopi mother brings her son Tamir with her in the temple of Kali ma. Timir - who is an antagonist and has the spirit of the demon in him. There she finds out the real father of Timir.

Will they come face to face, or will they not.What will happen, will Durga be sacrificing him for the love story of Muskaan and Aehem. Or will Gopi sacrifice her life and her sons. what will happen, you will find out soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh that was nice. ayesha please continue.
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She finds out, the father of Timir, she was shocked. Durga was happy. She was, over excited that his love has come back so she goes home quickly with mahir and tells him everything. He could not believe it. Muskaan has come back again. the guru was right, the rebirth will happen and it happened.

He was shocked, total shocked. Muskaan was back, he ran to the temple of Kali ma. He called her name out loudly but no one heard anything. Then He saw nothing around him but a girl with her son sitting doing the pooja in front of Kali ma.

After the pooja had finished, Gopi/ Muskaan turns around and sees him. Both looks at each other. They were surprised.

Timir had the spirit of a demon, suddenly it showed on him, and the ground started to shake. Durga, Timir, Mahir and Gopi was there in the middle. Durga and Gopi was telling them to to stop it at once, but it gone worse, The demon comes out and the light of mahir sprinkles on him, which made him loose more hope. Timir demon hated light. He stayed away from daylight and electricity.

Both Timir and Mahir fight went strong. Durga surrenders herself saying i am sacrificing my love so that these to lovers can once get again.

The ground opens up and suddenly Durga, and Timir who was a spiritual demon falls in it and the ground shuts by itself and they die there.

There was left Gopi and Aehem.

Both face to face, tears in their eyes. They both hug each other tightly. Once again they are reunited again. Gopi there adopts Mahir as he was only a small child and they marry right there in front of Kali ma. There wish had become once again fulfill.


Sorry its short, now this chapter finishes right there.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
loved it...thnx 4 da pm.. (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
that was nice....sad ur finishing all ur ff's so quickly

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