short os - Tum bin jaaoon kahan last part page 4

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The story revolves around Aehem who loses his girlfriend Muskaan in a road mishap who blames himself for her death. He then goes into a state of depression and tries all means to get in touch with her but fails.

Then he meets a guru who teaches him how to communicate with the dead through a planchette, a board that sends messages under spiritual guidance. This is when the action starts which gets spookier as the proceeds throughout this fan-fiction

The casts in this ff are below :

• Aehem - main lead
• Muskaan (Aehem's first love who dies and rebirths' as Gopi)
• Shweta(rashi)(Aehem's was-to-be fiance who later dies)
• Gopi (Muskaan's rebirth, becomes antagonist)
• Guruji (a priest that senses evil things)
• Durga (Aryan's wife)
• Guruma (a priestess that has thoughts about people)
• Mahir (Durga's son )
• Timir (Muskaan/Gopi son and has a spirit of a demon, antagonist)
• Dhruv (supposed to be Gopi's second husband then died)
• Shalini (Muskaan's mother)

ayesha i think your ff is based on reincarnation

yes shoiab its based on rebirth. rebirth of muskaan who is Gopi. 😉
but i hope u all enjoy it.

1- previous days of Aehem and Muskaan

Aehem and Muskaan were in love with each other. They both used to go for walking at the mountainsides. But one day it was raining heavily, they were walking in the middle of the road, cars were approaching really fast and knocks both of them at the edge of the road and Muskaan falls down the mountain. She was hanging to the edge, further down trying to read the top of the mountain while Aehem wakes up and see her slightly down the mountain trying to get up. He kneels down and leans his hand forward, trying to reach her hand and Muskaan trying to reach his hand. Rain was pouring heavily. A small wee temple was beside the incident which had happened. Muskaan trying to yell for help. Aehem trying to shout saying try to reach forward to him. But it was a misfortune. It was bad luck. Muskaan let her hand go and falls down the mountain. Aehem screams her name out loud. Muskaan dies from the road mishap. But Aehem did not know what to do. He found a cell phone beside the small temple and calls the police. He was badly injured. The police comes and gets some details from him as how the accident happens and then they leave and goes to find Muskaan. Muskaan was lying down beside the river. Dead. The police searched the jungle the whole night, but they found no clue about her. But what could they do. They spent 3 days and nights finding Muskaan's body but then eventually found it beside the river. They take it to the hospital and the doctors confirm that she is dead since 3 days.

Aehem goes into depression and blames it on himself for the death of Muskaan. And tries so many ways to get in touch with her, but he fails. As he was in depression, he eventually comes across this guru and teaches him how communicate with the dead through a planchette - a board which sends a spiritual guidance.

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(back to the reality - his marriage fixed with shweta(rashi), which leads him to more depression.)

As he gradually learns this planchette, his mother fixes his marriage with Shweta( Rashi). Shweta who is, a modern girl, who understands every problems, and fixes it straight away. After Aehem hears this, he becomes more hurt, and in difficulty he agrees to get married. He kept his work private, and didn't let anyone know. As this was going on, After a few days, he starts to feel something. Something weird. He did his spiritual guidance and a voice comes up. It reveals that a rebirth has come. Which will gradually come face to face to him after a few years. He was clueless, Whose rebirth. He ignored it.

what will happen.
when will the rebirth of muskaan come face to face with him. Will they ever. Or has the rebirth of muskaan has come to someone who already in their childhood. What is it.
Find out while i go through this concept
sorry its short.

thats ok though the update is short but enjoyed it. oh i really loved that drama from zee tv i think. keep continue. ayesha u are super duper mind blowing writer. keep writing

Its ok rubina, I knw it was short, I made it, just to let u know how muskaan dies, so the real story just begins now,
Omg I used to love that drama, I dnt even remember the story but only a wee bit, so I thought I use the concept but in a different way, in ayeshas way lol :D
Thanks for liking and thanks for appreciate

After a few days, he starts to feel something. Something weird. He did his spiritual guidance and a voice comes up. It reveals that a rebirth has come. Which will gradually come face to face to him after a few years.

2-

Aehem had come out of the trauma of Muskaan's death and finally accepted the marriage willingly from the heart, but he was still into the spiritual guidance and was still taking help from the guru. He was lonely from inside. But then he started to talk to Shweta and decided to tell her the truth but he did not get the chance as she was talking to much. He did not want to hurt her but he was still blaming himself for the death it happened.

He started to hymn the song him and muskaan made up but muskaan wasn't alive so he gave the lyric sheet to shweta and they began to sing: (all in blue are the lyrics they are singing):

male - aehem:

tumhari liye mera dil bekarar hai

tumhari liye mera dil bekharar hai

mujse sirf tumse, tumhi sai pyar hai

female - muskaan/shweta:

tumhi mera pyar hai

tum dil karar hai

janeman janeja

tum bin jaaoo kahaan

tum bin jaaoon kahaan

male -aehem:

tum bin jaaoon kahaan

tum bin jaaooon kahaan

female - muskaan/shweta:

jaise bazeehai phoolo(flowers) main kushboon

jaise fizaaoon main rang khele (spread) hai

male - aehem:

dil aur dharkhan miltai hai jaise

pyaar mein hum tum

female : muskaan/shweta:

tumhe mera pyar ho

tumhe dil ka bekharar ho

janeman janejaa

tum bin jaoon kahan

tum bin jaoon kahan

male - aehem:

tum bin jaoon kahaan

tum bin jaaon kahan

male - aehem:

jab se hui hai tumse muhabbat

choole hai maine chand sitare

female - muskaan/shweta:

sare sapne sare armaan

likhle maine naam tumhaari

tumhe mera pyaar ho

tumhe dil ka karar ho

janeman janeja

tum bin jaaoon kahaan

tum bin jaaon kaha

male - aehem;

tumhare liye mera dil bekarar hai

tumhare liye mera dil bekharar hai

muj sirf tum se ha tumse pyaar hai

muj sirf tumse tumhe se pyaar hai

female - muskaan/shweta:

tumhe mera pyaar ho

tumhe dil ka karar ho

janeman janeja

tum bin jaaoon kahaan

tum bin jaaoon kahan

male - aehem;

tum bin jaaoon kahaaan

tum bin jaooon kahaan

after he finished the hymn, Shweta fell in love with it. And then they went home.

Shweta told everyone in his family that he sings fantastic. Everyone was shocked. Koki, Jigar, Hetal, Chirag, Parag, Kinjal, and baa was all shocked. They asked him to sing but he refused. Everyone forced him. But then he say ok but later on. He went upstairs and freshen up. They all went and sat down and began to eat dinner. Shweta hymned the lyrics and the tune, and everyone turned around but then she stopped.

will he sing in front of the family. or will he not.

lets find out - when i post the next update tomorrow

enjoy

thanks ayesha for the update. i loved that drama. i think it's 6-7 years ago

6 years ago and i have no idea what the story line was i forgot it all, anyway this is different from the original story
how was the lyrics

ok here is the URL of the website where u find the information. its more six years


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tum_Bin_Jaaoon_Kahaan