Tanhayee, dard,bechain & ek dil ka rishta - 2nd FF - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

147

Views

44.2k

Users

14

Likes

313

Frequent Posters

-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#91

After a while Koki and hetal took Nani to baa room and sat there and chatted while the rest was decorating the house. The house was nearly done and there Daljeet and shaleen came and supported them. Daljeet took Kinjal to the beauty palour and Shaleen took kinshuk to his room and helped him to get ready. It was almost 5pm, the guest will start arriving so the womans went to change while the mens were outside. The womans came an the mens changed.

It was half 5 and the guest has started to arrive. There Kinjal came with Daljeet from the back door. Kinjal looked gorgeous just as any bride would and went to her room.

Chapter 15

The guest has arrived. Kinshuk came with Shaleen, Angad, Sushant and Ayush. They came in with the dancers while Daljeet was upstairs with Kinjal getting ready. Nani was getting annoyed by the fact that the girls are taking so long even the groom is here. On the other hand, There was romancing going on between rashi and jigar. Nani saw them and went up to them. She pulled his ears and spoke: what did I say last night to ur brother? No romancing but in ur rooms. That applys to u to.

Jigar was shocked to here this and Aehem came behind and spoke: ab kya ho ga tumhara, yesterday u were laughing at me now I am, surely nani is getting irritated but take my advise lets annoy her more so that she gets fed up.

Jigar looked at him and became happy, he spoke: fine lets do it,but where is ur wife?

Kinjal comes downstairs and took everyones blessing. There that minute, music started and the dance began. Kinshuk and kinjal Exchanged rings after a while and everyone had food. Aehem was glancing at Gopi, while Jigar was smirking behind with Rashi. Gopi looked at him and blushed. Nani saw them and got irritated.

As the Sangeet finished, the guest left. Nani called Aehem Gopi, Jigar and Rashi to her. They all came and stood there and was frightened. Nani pulled his ears and spoke: kya huwa aehem, can u not live without ur wife? I know everything what had happened between you two, made her leave the house init. Speak, romancing with her, arent you, kya baat hai

Aehem was shocked to hear what nani said. Nani was total hilarious. Kinshuk burst out laughing behind and said: nani, Aehem to aehem hi hai, pur Gopi os bechari nai kya kiya, os ko kyu daant rahai ho

Nani: badmaash, what are you saying, u are telling me what to do?

Jigar, spoke: Nani, I will explain everything to you, but you have rest first.


will continue from here later on

enjoy

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
shruthi2010 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#92
wow ayesha i just give it to you




it was go sweet and terrific. i read the whole thing in one go.



-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

wow ayesha i just give it to you




it was go sweet and terrific. i read the whole thing in one go.





thnks shruthi

upasana.diya thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#94
you did a gr8 job again hun....
would love to see how Nani Throws the baat

Please update soon
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: upasana.diya

you did a gr8 job again hun....
would love to see how Nani Throws the baat

Please update soon



aww thnks hun
honestly i dont know how to make this nani thing superb, like making the whole tamasha out for romancing totally, anyone give me some tips for the next part for the tamasha romance as i seriously dnt know what to write so i can make it entertaining to read
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#96

As the Sangeet finished, the guest left. Nani called Aehem Gopi, Jigar and Rashi to her. They all came and stood there and was frightened. Nani pulled his ears and spoke: kya huwa aehem, can u not live without ur wife? I know everything what had happened between you two, made her leave the house init. Speak, romancing with her, arent you, kya baat hai

Aehem was shocked to hear what nani said. Nani was total hilarious. Kinshuk burst out laughing behind and said: nani, Aehem to aehem hi hai, pur Gopi os bechari nai kya kiya, os ko kyu daant rahai ho

Nani: badmaash, what are you saying, u are telling me what to do?

Jigar, spoke: Nani, I will explain everything to you, but you have rest first.

Chapter 16

They went to nani room while everyone left to go to sleep. Gopi an Aehem was sleeping in the same room just as usual as they did, Aehem on the bed and gopi on the floor. As time went passed they were asleep. It was 3pm and they still not accepted each other from the heart. All they have done in front of the family was a pretence. Aehem was asleep. Gopi notices something on the floor and it comes and stings her on her toe. She stood up and screams. She sits down on the bed in fear. Aehem wakes up and puts up the light. He was in Anger as usual.

He shouts at her: what is this, cant u let me sleep peacefully.

Gopi: ji... voh, cockroach just bit me on my toe, I mean... I just go after it.

Aehem: what!

He looks toward the washroom and sees the cockroach there and was still. He lifts up his sandal and was about to hit it.

Gopi stops him and he speaks again: now what, before you threw the snake away now this, what's the point of screaming? Now look its gone away. Before u speak let me tell u, gopi ji I need sleep, and dont make me angry, I don't care if it comes to on the bed. Go sleep.

He shuts the light and goes to sleep. While gopi was afraid to go back to sleep so she went downstairs, and sat there. Nani notices her, and sees her sweat and she was crying.

Koki comes behind and notices too. They both goes up to her and says: what happened why are u crying?

Gopi tells everything what happened in the room and also tells them that Aehem and her are not husband and wife just like before.

They were shocked to know, and Nani planned something to bring them together.

She tells Gopi to come with her and takes her to her room. Nani notices that she sleeps on the floor. She gets really angry at him and says: he has not changed at all now I will fix him tomorrow.

Gopi goes and sleeps and nani goes to her room and sits down on her rocky chair and thinks what to do, and that minute Koki comes and says: Ma, now u know what is going on between them, I have tried so much to bring them together but it all failed and my son has stopped listening to me about Gopi now you do something?

Nani: don't you worry I have planned something and fix him tomorrow, how dare he? But listen no one should know what happened between them today.

Koki: theek hai

will continue from her friends -


madhu_sridhar thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#97
OMG!!!....Ayesha....dat was shocking....dat idiot ahem hasnt changed at all...ur update just took me by surprise...i wasn't expectin dis...dat was a super twist...oh wat will happen next?? my hopes lie wid naani....
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

OMG!!!....Ayesha....dat was shocking....dat idiot ahem hasnt changed at all...ur update just took me by surprise...i wasn't expectin dis...dat was a super twist...oh wat will happen next?? my hopes lie wid naani....



accept it he a stoned heart patar ka dil
next - nani will sort him out the next day, she wont let him leave the house for office, will tell, jigar and kinshuk to go and sort the business out while she is sorting.
Hope the next chapter will engage the readers and you and hope u will love it
sorry for the unexpected twist. x
madhu_sridhar thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#99
arey... the twist was just a brilliant move...isnt der a saying....." expect the unexpected"...it was lik dat...
and no doubt i'm gonna love the next chapter...
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

arey... the twist was just a brilliant move...isnt der a saying....." expect the unexpected"...it was lik dat...

and no doubt i'm gonna love the next chapter...



there is a saying ' expect the unexpected'
surey u will love the next ch

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".