GOHEM: The Love Story/pt22 pg18 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi everyone, last I left you wondering about the new characters entering the MM house hold, so here it goes

Kokila's brother: Kishanji
His wife: Rupalben (lol)
their son: Rahul

Rahul's fiance: Shruti
Her father: Pareshbhai
Her mother: Laxmiben
so back to the story:
Kokila: very excited, because now it is time for the second phase of her plan, everything coming togother nicely, especially since her mother and her nephews in laws will also be staying at MM, until they find house to live in
Kokila: mani ask Gopi vahu to come to my room please
Mani: Ji nana bhabhi
Gopi: in the kitchen working, thinking she needs to go get the clothes from the clothes line upstairs, but how to go w/o going past the guest room
Mani: Gopi bhabhi, Nanabhabhi is calling you in her room
Gopi: I have no choice now, I have to go past his room, she moves slowly towards the stairs, as she steps up she slows down seeing his doors wide open.
Ahem: this time he knows its her, he could hear her payal, he can tell its hers, because the sound is lower and lower as she is moving towards his door, but he is angry now because she did not come up all day and he knows that she is trying to avoid him. As she comes to his door she looks up, but seeing his angry face she quickly looks down and moves past his room fast. He realizes what happened and I need to control my temper if I want her to come close to me.
Gopi: enters Kokila's room and says Maji you called me
Kokila: yes, come in and close the door, I want to talk to you first
Gopi: ji maji
Kokila: looking at Gopi proudly, and think my Gopi has come long way, but she is still too shy, she need to be tougher, but after this move she will have more confidence in her self, because she can see that her son's feelings towards Gopi is changing.
Kokila: Gopi, we are getting some more guest for Kinjle's wedding, they are my side of the family, you did not meet them at your wedding because the live in america and that time they could not get away because their son was working on his MBA. Now they are shifting to India permanently and also their son is getting married and the girls family will also come with them for same reason, my mother is also coming
Gopi: (smart girl) already anticipating what her dear maji was going to ask of her, and thinks at this rate I am never going to be able to avoid him.
Kokila: Gopi, tame samaj gaya hu shu kehva magu chu (you know what I am trying to say)
Gopi: nervously anwsers back ji maji (thinking here it comes, he is going to be super mad)
(just imagine the loud BG music, that's how fast her heart is probably racing)
Kokila: Gopi don't be nervous, it is time for this mother to full fill the promise thad she made to her daughter. Let's go talk to Ahem
Ahem: in thinking mode, maybe she went to get the clothes and I could catch her there he was about to go but sees his mom coming towards him with Gopi.
Kokila: Ahem, I have something important to tell you
Ahem: giving Gopi a look from the corner of his eye, says Ji mom
Kokila: Your mama and family along with the vavai's(in-laws) are coming tomorrow, they will be staying with us until their homes are complete.
Ahem: looking confused, ji mom
Gopi: starting to shake
Kokila: I know you don't want to share your space with Gopi vahu, but we have no choice seeing as we are going to need the guest room, so you will have to move back to your room, also your Nani is coming and you know how she is, she will probably ask 100 questions about your marriage, and I know I promised u that Gopi will leave the house after Kinjles wedding, but you know I cannot help it right now (Koki with smirk on her face waiting for his reaction)
Gopi: really scarred now, eyes tightly closed her whole body shaking waiting for him to explode
Ahem: observing all this thinking my god she is really scared of me, now what do I do, but then thinks this is perfect, now I will have my chance.
Kokila: watching him waiting for his anwser, buy says, may be I'll send Gopi to her mama's house for now with some excuse
Ahem: quickly anwsers, No mom its ok I will move back to my room
Gopi: shocked just looks at him
Ahem: trying to reassure with a look and a small smile
Kokila: very happy observing this, turn to Gopi, I will send Mani up so you can move evrything in the room now, so we can clean and get the room ready for guests
Gopi: ji maji
Kokila leaves
Gopi: starts to go towards the door
Ahem: Gopi, how is your hand today, did u change the dressing
Gopi: looking guilty shakes her head
Ahem: looking at Mani, asking her to bring the first aid box
Mani goes to get the first aid box
Ahem: removes Gopi's pallu from her head and says don't put that on anymore, you don't have to, he then takes her hand walks her towards the bed and ask her to sit down/
Gopi: nervously sits down, thinking what is wrong with him lately, why is he being so nice.
Mani: comes in with first aid box, and says Gopi bhabhi I will start taking things to your room.
Ahem: take off the dressing and is looking at her hand, when he cleans it she feels the burn so he blows on her hand to take the pain away, he asks, did u eat breakfast, she nods her head yes,
Ahem: ok I will give u more pain medicine, and you don't have to carry anything from this room, I will move everything, your hand must be hurting. Finishes with the dressing and puts everything away.
Gopi: starts to move from the bed
Ahem: notices, asking where are you going>
Gopi: ji woh main kitchen ......
Ahem: no you are not going anywhere, you are going to lay down on this bed and rest, there is plenty of people in the house to cook. He makes her lay down and covers her with a blanket and goes back to his computer.
Gopi: still confused keep looking at him and finally falls asleep
Ahem: looks up with smile on his face thinking: ji Gopiji, now I got u where I want u.

Back in Kinjle's room, she is still trying to figure out how to get out of situation with Umang, she can't tell the family because she suspect Rashi and her mom are helping Umang. she thinks I have to do something before the family name is ruined and I loose Eleshji, she has to find an opportunity to talk to Gopibhabhi, she knows that Gopi will help her no matter what

that's it for now everyone please let me know what you think, Am I too detailed, should I add something or take something away. All suggestions welcome.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
That was awesome. Please update soon. We want more!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Girl, you are going with perfect pace and perfect set of dialogues...
Only complaint - as Eesha said... we want more😉😃
but we can wait....
Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Gopi must be really confused na? The beast is changing ;)
I believe you are shilpa? Thx for such a lovely story!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Thank you for all the wonderful comments.

Part 6

Everyone in the dinning hall, Ahem wakes Gopi up and ask her to freshen up in their room, he will wait for her to go downstairs,

Gopi: super shocked😲😲 yeh Ahemji ko kya hua hai, should touch his forehead to make sure his not running a fever.
Ahem: watching her face thinking I love surprising her, Gopiji you have lot more coming your way.

Finally they walk downstairs together surprising everyone, Rashi with mean look on face that get noticed by all three mother/son/daughter trio.

Rash: yea Gopi why is she coming down with Ahem, is she about to spoil our plan to take over the house hold, mummi ko batana parega.
Kokila: make announcements about her family coming, asking Gopi if they moved Ahem's things,
Ahem: yes mom, I helped Mani, Gopi was resting, her hand was bothering her.
Kokila:you did good to make her rest, otherwise she would have worked all evening, to Gopi she says after dinner I want u to go straight to your and rest I will send milk up for u to take medications with, don't worry about cleaning up Rashi can help Mani tonight.
Gopi: ji maji
Rashi:😡😡
after dinner Ahem take Gopi straight to the room and ask her to lay down, he was going to finish his work
Gopi tried to make her bed on the floor, but he stops her and brings her to sit with him, he hold both of her hands and says to her: Gopi please forgive me, I am sorry I treated you bad, but please believe me I want to make up everything to you, that means no more sleeping on the floor, from now on I want you to come to me with all of your problems, please lets start again.
Gopi: with tears in her eyes says I don't know what to say Ahemji, but so much has happened, I need time to sort things out, please be patient with me, I will try to be the kind of wife you want me to be.
Ahem: that's all I can ask for now, thank you for giving me second chance and Gopi please don't hide your face from me anymore, it hurts me everytime you do that.
There is a knock on the door, Ahem opens it, its Rashi with glass of milk, she is trying to look in the room, but Ahem says give me the milk Gopi is resting, and closes the door in her face.
Gopi: observing all this questions him,
Ahem: I know you think everyone is nice as you, but this world is a bad place, you need to learn who has you best intrest and who does not, I heard Rashi on phone this morning trying blame u for something they did, I am going to have talk to Jigar about her
Gopi: Ahemji, Rasiben, she is..........
Ahem: nahi Gopi, you are a very sweet person but I am not going to let anyone take advantage of you anymore, it is my job to protect my sweet wife, Gopi blushing, gives him a sweet smile
Ahem: wondering if her lips are sweet as her smile, if she taste that sweet everywhere, but finally he comes back to himself, saying its not time for that yet, besides he couldn't handle one more cold shower, so he better focus somewhere else
Ahem: takes the glass of milk to her
Gopi: i can't drink the whole glass
Ahem: you have to my sweets, you didn't eat much and you need take medication for pain
Finally she listens to him takes the medication and goes to change her clothes
Gopi comes out wearing her simple green sari (his favorite color) hair loose, and face devoid of make up
Ahem can't help but stare at her, she is even more beautiful, and his mom is right, that color looks great on her, he notices one of her chain is suck in her hair, so he gets up to help her, she sees him coming in the mirror, he slowly mover her hair out of the way and removes the chain, he bends down to hand her the chain, before he stands up he drops a small kiss on her shoulder, she closes her eyes tightly, Ahem is fascinated by her expression whispers in her ears, not time yet my sweet, i am going to make you beg for me.
Gopi: blushing gives him a sweet smile, he smiles back at her and bids her goodnight.

Gopi goes to the bed and lays down and is asleep in few minutes.
Ahem: changes in to his black sherwani lays beside her and goes to sleep with smile on his face.

Okay, guys I hope u like this, It is 2am here, time to go to sleep. Will update soon.
choti_rani thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Thanks so much Shilpa for the wonderful update. Can't wait for the next one. Please let it be soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😍... i don't know where you have sent me... will report once i am back...
more plzzzz
Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Definitely liked it to bits! Sweet Gopi... Cant wait for next part! Thx!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
@shilpa....first thing a small request...
plz do update ur title with the Part u updated and the page number...i missed all parts after second one as i could not check the thread from first page till last......so missed the treat reading ur FF...
so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update the title...i dont want to miss ur update even for a sceond once u update....

Originally posted by: upasana.diya

😍... i don't know where you have sent me... will report once i am back...
more plzzzz


me too with diya...just behind her dreaming and blushing reading ur fab fab updated...i read all the remaining 6 parts in matter of minutes....and still dreaming.....

update next part soon ...plz cant w8 long
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me too following diya and sadhli....too gud shilpa...a wonderful run up 2 valentines day.....update soon😊

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