GOHEM: The Love Story/pt22 pg18 updated - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it dear
u r torturing us too much for the big night
i will prefer non-censored
if possible plz post the next part today
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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely update shilpa, next part soon plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shilpa! very nice updates. Now I want more! soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hope you enjoy!!!


Part 20

When Shruti and Gopi come back from shopping Rahul tells them to get ready since they were going out for dinner. Shruti take Gopi to her room and offers her the gift box, Gopi opens is and inside is a teal green sari with tiny diamonds (stone) through out the sari, with heavy work on the pallu, the sari was sparkling like thousands of stars in a dark sky, it was beautiful, but Gopi hesitated when she saw the matching blouse, the blouse had no sleeves, it had two tiny hooks that would sit in the middle of her back and tow thick strings that would tie around her neck in the back. Gopi says to Shruti I can't wear this, I have never worn anything like this. Shruti says to her just wear it for your BD celebration, there is no one to see you here, Gopi tries to argue about it being too open in the back, Shruti pointing out the blouse was had lining inside, she was perfectly safe. Shruti pulled out another box and says I have one more gift to you. Shruti thinking your Ahemji knows you so well, he know you wont's out wearing something that will live you exposed. When Gopi opened the gift inside was a beautiful silk wrap to match the sari, then she finally agreed to wear the sari.

Rahul, Shruti, and Gopi goes to the hotel and shown straight to a private dinning area on the rooftop. It was decorated with red and white candles everywhere, and there were at least 3 to 4 dozens of roses everywhere. From the roof top you could basically see the whole city of mumbai, Gopi immediately, intrigued by the view goes to rails at the edge of the roof top and is lost in the scene in front of her. The sky was clear, with millions of stars shining, she could hear the noise of the cars and people, but she ignored all that closed her eyes and felt the small breeze in the air and she wished Ahemji was with her at that moment.

Gopi is so lost in thought, she was not aware that both Rahul and Shruti has left and Ahem was standing behind her watching her. Gopi had taken her wrap off and placed in the chair at the table. Ahem was amazed at how beautiful she looked in the sari he had picked out for her, her hair was flowing around her and at his suggestion, Shruti had made her wear bengali style instead of her usual Gujarati style. Ahem was thinking good thing he bought the wrap for her, he would not want anyone else to see Gopi like this.

Ahem slowly move towards her, he puts both of his hand on the rails beside hers and cages her in, he leans forward and says, if I had known you were going to look good enough to eat I would have skipped ordering dinner and feasted on you. Gopi is so surprised she gasps and turns, and sees ahem standing there, he looked so handsome in his teal green silk shirt (to match the sari) and black taylor made slacks, he had left the first three buttons of his shirt open. She asks, what are you doing here? He takes her in his arms, bringing her closer to him and says you didn't think I would let you spend your BD without me, in fact I want to be the first one to wish you Happy BD, so the surprise. Besides if we were home, someone would have beat me to wishing you happy birthday first on purpose to tease me.

They stay in each others arms for a minute not saying anything, then he slowly brings her closer and kisses her on her lips, after kissing her thoroughly, he looks at her and says, did you miss me? She looks down and nod her head, getting shy with him again, he slowly lifts her chin and just looks at her, he is amazed at how much he had missed her the night before.

Shruti and Rahul comes back to say bye, Shruti comes over to Gopi and says I hoped you liked your surprise, Jiju is going to make you very happy from now on. After teasing them both for few minutes they leave.

Ahem goes over to the radio and turns on romantic music and then take Gopi in his arms and starts to slow dance with her, they are both lost in their own world, happy to be together at last.


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Posted: 14 years ago
@ MeetPremeer, I hope you like the next part, this was as uncensored as I could get, after all this is supposed to be a Indian story.



Part 21

After dinner Ahem take Gopi to the room has reserved for them for the night, when they get to their room he lift Gopi in his arms and carries her over the threshold. The whole room is decorated with flowers and candles, there is a romantic music playing in the background. Ahem sets her in front of the mirror and goes and close the door.

He walks toward her and pulls out a box from his pocket, and pulls out a chain with heart shaped diamond pendent out of the box, he goes behind and puts it around her and says Happy Birthday, my love, Gopi has tears in her eyes, she turns and hugs him and finally says the words that she has been waiting to say to him I love You!, Ahem very happy to hear her finally putting words to her feelings.

He says I love you too, and thank you for loving me back, he then starts kissing her, soft romantic music in the background, candles flickering. He walks her towards the bed as he is kissing her, he takes her pallu from her shoulder and starts removing her sari, Gopi gets shy and turns and walk away from him little with her arms crossed her chest and eyes closed. Ahem looking at her with passion and love in his eyes, still holding her sari, slowly starts pulling at her sari and at the same time walks near her, as he is pulling Gopi is turning with eyes still closed, finally the sari comes off and she is standing only with her blouse and skirt to the sari. Ahem is next to her, he slowly removes her arms from her chest and starts placing small kisses on the exposed skin, as he is kissing her he slowly removes the hooks on back and unties the tie, he then lifts her up and places her on bed.

Gopi eyes closed tightly, looking at her he smiles and thinks my shy wife, you will truly be mine tonight, he removes his shirt and get on the bed and straddles her putting his weight on his arms and begins to kiss her body, Gopi is lost in the pleasure Ahem is giving her, she has the sheets fisted tightly in her hands. Ahem comes back to her lips and takes both of her hands in one of his and lifts them above her head and continues to kiss her passionately, after awhile he lets go of her hand and she begins to touch him on his face, chest and back.

Ahem slowly undresses her rest of the way, Gopi is so lost in the pleasure she doesn't notice this, she looses her shyness as Ahem continues to kiss her everywhere and pleasure her more, and so it continues until Ahem makes her completely his.




OK friends I will leave rest to your imaginations and I know some of our forum members have some wild imaginations so I hope you enjoyed Gopi's surprise (Her first night).


One more chapter after this. Comments and Suggestions are welcome. Thank you in advance.


Edited by sbp1971 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my Shilpa! ☺️☺️ and *fanning*

Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome dear
thanks for making it as uncensored as is possible here
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was fantastic. Loved it.
Edited by Eesha2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update dear....
as always its wonderful

so whats next for Gohem romance
Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago
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Hi everyone this is the last part. I hope you enjoyed this story.



Part 22

Next morning Gopi and Ahem wake up early and get ready. After breakfast Ahem take Gopi to mandir and then they go to meet Rahul and Shruti. After spending time with Rahul and Shruti, Gopi and Ahem leaves for airport to go back home.

Everyone at MM very excited that Gopi and Ahem will be returning, they know their Gopi is going to be with them for always now, there is no fear of her leaving ever and there is going to be nothing but happiness in the house from now on.

When Gopi and Ahem are at the door, Koki asks them to wait, she comes with aarti and blesses them and then ask them to enter with their right foot first. After they enter the house they take blessing from everyone and hug Jigar and Kinjle. Then they go to the mandir where Koki hand Ahem sindoor to put in Gopi's part to start their life from the beginning.

Later that night Kinjle comes to see Ahem and confess the necklace incident. Ahem did not get mad, he had suspected something like this when he found out about Umang. Gopi with tears in her eyes goes to them and says there is no need to bring this to the family, and it is all forgotten anyways. She says all we have to worry about is Kinjle's wedding now.

Later that night Gopi and Ahem discuss plan to get Jigar and Sonal, the girl he loved, they decided to talk to Hetal and Koki to invite her for Kinjle's wedding that way they could get close again.

In the coming week the whole house hold is getting ready for Kinjle's wedding, all the invitations are sent out, shopping is complete. Gopi feeling tired lately, one day she was in the kitchen helping getting sweets ready when she started to feel dizzy, Koki quickly told her to go lay down and called Ahem to call the doctor to come check her because she was not feeling well lately.

The doctor comes and gives happy news to family that Gopi was pregnant she was four week along. Ahem hearing this jumps up and runs straight to his room. Gopi is laying down when she sees him she gives him a shy smile he goes to her and kisses her forehead and says thank you, I am so happy today, my life is complete.


One week later Kinjle and Elesh get married without any problems. Two days later Jigar receives call from the detective informing them that Umang and Anita were jailed for like and Rashi and Urmi were in for 7 years at least. Jigar thanks him and tells the whole family. His divorce will be finalized in coming weeks, then he can propose to Sonal.


Eight months later Gopi gave birth to a beautiful baby boy, Koki was over the moon, everyone in the hospital room playing with the baby, while Ahem is sitting beside Gopi holding her hand, he was with her thru the whole delivery, he would not leave her seeing her in pain. He puts his other arm around her and says thank you for the happiness you have given to me and my family. I love you, Gopi replies thank you for giving me a loving family I always wanted and your love I will always treasure you and your family.


The End!!!


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