OS - Saviour - CH5/PG13 - Page 12

Originally posted by: desisrock

Super cool update, Diya!! Ah that Urmi will never change.......Is Raashi turning over a new leaf?? It will be ery interesting to see how things turn out....

Thanks, Diya!!

Thanks a lot Mita... when Urmi changes, Lord Brahma will have to rewrite his whole book by which the world runs...

would you like Rashi to turn a leaf??? whatever you say hun, but you gotto let me know soon... but i believe a second chance won't go amiss....

Originally posted by: sam1903

gr8 update diya.....👏

thanks a lot Sam

Originally posted by: Eesha2

Awesome update Diya. Can't wait to see what happens when Modi's visit Mumbai.

you reminded me of something...
so here is a question for everyone, do you want Modi's to see Gopi on their Mumbai Visit. if you leave it to me i won't let Modi's browbeat Gopi😉

Thanks for liking the story so far hun

Originally posted by: monalidp

Excelllent Diya.👏 Can't wait for the next part.😊

Thank you Mona... will write as soon as i give some shape to "Karuna's" next chapter

Originally posted by: simran15

That was another good narration Diya...the Modi's in Mumbai....they will be in for a treat....lots of places to savour their delicacies.....is it a twist or is Rashi gonna be a very good vau.......am w8ing to know if Ahem may see Gopi in Mumbai.....😉 .

yup... i want to see ahem unable t enjoy anything, because he didn't let someone even enjoy a free breath...

Do you want rashi to be good??? as i said before i would give her another chance

Originally posted by: br2499

Another wonderful update Diya! Enjoyed it! looking forward to the Modi's Mumbai visit.

BTW Diya -- Making something out of Rashi? Is it for your dear brother?

😆😆😆 kind of trying to stop his incessant Ganga Jamuna or he will flood the forum.... lolzzz
Thanks for liking the story so far Bee... i hope i can satisfy all of your expectations about Modi's Mumbai visit

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

amazing update diya.....loved it next part soon plz

sure dear... let me give a rough sketch to Karuna for next chapter and i'll be back with more here

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Hi Diya ... just caught up will the parts I mised ...

Wonderful story ..... love the progression .... keep it up dear ! 👍🏼

Waiting for the Modis to be zapped by the 'new-improved' Gopi !!! 😉

Hmmm... i have a question then.... do you guys want Ahem to accept Gopi for what she is or for the change that has taken place... i would rather hide her till Ahem accepts her

Originally posted by: sbp1971

looking forward to next.

Sure Shilpa... thanks for liking this FF

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

diya sorry for comment late. i just now got the time. woow five chapters. great. and the story line is so nice. after reading it slowly once again i will give my comment

no problems hun
Thanks a lot for liking the story line... wanted to give Kinjal a chance😊
Sure take your time and let me know if you want to see some scenario ...