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monalidp

@NotYourType

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Excelllent Diya.👏 Can't wait for the next part.😊

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simran15

@simran15

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

That was another good narration Diya...the Modi's in Mumbai....they will be in for a treat....lots of places to savour their delicacies.....is it a twist or is Rashi gonna be a very good vau.......am w8ing to know if Ahem may see Gopi in Mumbai.....😉 .

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br2499

@br2499

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Another wonderful update Diya! Enjoyed it! looking forward to the Modi's Mumbai visit.

BTW Diya -- Making something out of Rashi? Is it for your dear brother?

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tellyaddict

@Telly_Addict

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

amazing update diya.....loved it next part soon plz

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Hi Diya ... just caught up will the parts I mised ...

Wonderful story ..... love the progression .... keep it up dear ! 👍🏼

Waiting for the Modis to be zapped by the 'new-improved' Gopi !!! 😉

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

diya sorry for comment late. i just now got the time. woow five chapters. great. and the story line is so nice. after reading it slowly once again i will give my comment

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@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

wow what fascinating update all parts pls cont soon

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
awesome update........................

thanks dear... sorry for the late response😊

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: khansk
Great update! Ye Gopi abhi ready nahi huwi? Loved it babes!

naa re... coz Ahem is not changed yet... let her live in peace for a bit hun😉.... uske baad to angry young man is always there

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Miss my gal..
Aanamika? Oh u were a fan of bidaai? Gud..
Anyway nice update..

no not of Bidaai, but of movie Anamika...
teri bheegi bheegi si palkon pe reh gaye jaise tere sapne bikharke
jale mann tera bhi kisi ke milan ko, anamika tu bhi tarse....

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