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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: br2499
Wow Diya! Nice poem on Gopi! What to do? The way SNS goes you can never hope for a happy poem for Gopi!

i know Bee... although i can't be consistent with the happy note, but i'll try...

thanks for liking the poem

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Sujata

@rahuldravidfan

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

wow that was superb Diya.... perfect for Gopi... especially the 1st 2 lines were too good......
aankh se aankh tumne aajtak churaayi kyon thi
dil ki baat apne labon par na laayi kyon thi

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: sujji0609
wow that was superb Diya.... perfect for Gopi... especially the 1st 2 lines were too good......
aankh se aankh tumne aajtak churaayi kyon thi
dil ki baat apne labon par na laayi kyon thi

thank you sujji for the wonderful comments... am glad you are liking them....

Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago

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tellyaddict

@Telly_Addict

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

wowwwwwwwwwwwww diya.......too good...and just loved it....
so apt for Gopi...kaash wo muh khole...

keep writing and sorry for late commenting....

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-
wowwwwwwwwwwwww diya.......too good...and just loved it....
so apt for Gopi...kaash wo muh khole...

keep writing and sorry for late commenting....

der se sahi par aapne padha to sahi
thank you for liking it sweets... will try to write more pretty soon