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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: crms
Wonderful. I could feel the softness, the tenderness in the expressions. Too good. U are versatile, Diya. And at ease with both Hindi and English.

And yes, needless to add, it is for Gopi.

Thanks Madhu Kaki... tenderness is what i want ahem to feel towards Gopi... this is Ahem thinking about a sleeping Gopi....

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Naina2127
you are so darn talented diyaben....first stories, now poems! awesome awesome! thanks so much for the english translations! they totally helped me out in understanding...

you see, my hindi is only limited to these saas bahu saps and dramebaaz 😆

Cheers!
~Naina

i'll do my best to help you, mom, bee and others as well if they want translations...
Thanks for liking it hun... try watching some historicals and you will find better hindi there....

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: br2499
Hi Diya! Wonderful poem! I suits Gopi wonderfully! Thankfully you are out of melacholy!

i tried to Bee.... its still not too happy but i wanted to portray yearning...😉
Thanks for liking Bee

Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago

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Samiksha Birla

@Savi13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

that so cute diya

marvelous...👏

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: sam1903
that so cute diya
marvelous...👏

thank you Sam...
i am glad you liked it...

will throw in some more later once i write new one

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

I dont thnk shez ever gonna open her mouth.. Stupid gopi..
Beautiful poem, sis.. I beg you to write a romantic poem for Rashi..lol.. Ek baar likh de meri ben

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
I dont thnk shez ever gonna open her mouth.. Stupid gopi..
Beautiful poem, sis.. I beg you to write a romantic poem for Rashi..lol.. Ek baar likh de meri ben

bhai if i have to write something for Rashi...
it would be more on the lines "keep quite. you have said and done enough"... if she turns of better even for a while, i might try my hand at it.... thanks for not mistaking this one for Rashi....😉

thanks for liking the poem bro....

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Rafeal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#160

The 6th verse, i am thnking of copiyn and sending to my girlfrnd 😃..

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