FF - Karuna - Compassion - A story - Pt20/pg63

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Nidhi Chandrakar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

awesome part diya di
just loved it

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crms

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

diya

Very nice Diya. Enjoyed reading the chapters.

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tellyaddict

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

gr8 update diya.....
Anita aayi aur gayi bhi......hmmm....looking forward how and when Aham meets Gopi....

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saina

@saina01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Hey diya am at work right now.. I will read all the parts and comment when I go home.. Aur waise bhi.. Tum nai likha hai to acha to hoga hi..

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liza_beans

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Love the way you are retelling the story, connecting each part perfectly and creating a perfect picture. Can't wait to read more.

Liz

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Thanks for liking it Liza...
Though this is not the original story, it is too much inspired from there... my story doesn't have pining-for-anita Ahem😉

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: d_maan
GREAT PART.

Thanks Maan... hope that is your name.. and welcome to the forum

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: saina01
Hey diya am at work right now.. I will read all the parts and comment when I go home.. Aur waise bhi.. Tum nai likha hai to acha to hoga hi..

Sure aapi... take your time