OS - Gopi confides in Aham - part 4 Pg7 - 24Oct10

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Awesome & Fantabulous !!!! ...

Loved Aham reacting to Gopi .. Without even realising it he has got comfortable with her !!!! ... he's telling her we'll continue this talk later !!!

And the Photo and the journal !!... 👍🏼👏👏👏👏

BTW ... journal as in personal diary right ? .... I know I'm being very greedy .... 😉

Wont you ...please ... give us a teeny-weeny peek at the entires in his journal ???

OK, Ok , I know you've ended this OS ... but you can start another wherein Gopi ...inspite of herself reads Aham's diary ( lets just imagine Gopi can read the alphabet ... at least that she knows the basics ).... How does that sound ??.....

and WHAT will Gopi find in Aham's diary ..... 😍😍😍😍

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tellyaddict

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

m just behind u usha.....asking for more from shelly...
as Ye Dil Maange More......

plzzzzzzzzz shelly write something moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Usah, I like the way you think..... Shelly, please?...

Edited by saomom - 14 years ago

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Thank you everyone. I hope I took the story far enough to give everyone what they wanted a better way for the show to go. I hope the not so creative CVs take some ideas from here.

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Sorry I didn't read all the post before I replied.

Usha, have you read my Goham diaries, right?

You all want more hmmm....I didn't want this story to continue on..

I will definitely write something soon. This is good practice for when I retire to the south of India and write novels on the beach.

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Okay, if tomorrow's episode is crummy, Shelly, please write what should have happened! In great detail. Including an eyelock, blowing wind and a kiss on the neck. Can you have him also dress down to some jeans and a nice button up? Let your imagination go WILD! Heck, we're getting nothing from the CVs. Maybe you can satisfy our demands for some (clean) romance!😆😆

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

At this point I would hyperventilate and drop dead like all the 16 year olds on the forum if Aham kissed Gopi on the neck.

Hubby and I are fighting bitterly at the moment so let's see if I can write a clean make up or romantic scene later tonight..

hmmmm....thinking!! Thinking!!

Got to go!

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

@ Shelly .. Yes I've read you Goham diaries .... thst is why I wnat you to write what Gopi see in Aham's diary !!!

You can make that a totally diff OS .... take your time .. we're waiting !! 😉

And I loved your thot .. retire to the beach in S.India and write !!! WOW !!!

@ Tammie ... totally love your tips on how Shelly should continue ... I can almost see ... Sheely's going come up with a master-piece !!!

Edited : Shelly ... made up with Hubby ? Plz do ... that will put you in a better frame of mind to write the OS !!!

BTW ... I wint be in the forum for the next 10 days at least . My mom underwent a cataract operation and I going to be with her ....

I'll try joing you all in between ... but no net connection in my MOm's place ... so it may be a bit diff !!!

Got to go now ... have an early day tomorrow !!!

Till then .... take care all of you ... 🤗

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Hi Shelly... superb creativity.... would love to know the Happily-ever-after end in this OS atleast

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Hey Diya, I thought I would end with this one as Aham and Gopi start talking with each other as a beginning of their relationship and happily ever after. In the case of GoHam just talking is Romance.

I will continue to write One Shots as you saw my other one where Aham pulls Gopi into their bedroom. Which is almost the continuation of this story.

Not sure if I have the mind to keep a story going the way FF writers can. But I will write others with the same thread running through them!

Edited by lovtv - 14 years ago