OS - Gopi confides in Aham - part 4 Pg7 - 24Oct10 - Page 2

this is superb shelly
i just hope the cv see this and change their entire script that they have gt

beautiful yaar....i'm speechless.....muahh...very well written and potrayed....so beautifully described...i can imagine each and every scene as if it is happening in real.....what a talent u have got yaar....simply superb(i coincidentally read ur post while listening to 'tu aashiqui hai' song...i can't describe the feeling i've experienced yaar)....

EXCUSE ME?!?!?!? Exactly WHY are you not writing an ongoing FF? Good Heavens woman, that was FANTASTIC! You certainly have a talent and I, for one, want more, more, more!

Sorry...I need an editor. Read and corrected some errors.

Originally posted by: suvaaslondon

shelly , Extremely good.

If If only the cVs pick a few out of this forum,The show would be even more intresting.

Keep it coming

wouldn't that be nice. Dear Cvs I give you permission to use this scene in show.

Originally posted by: Sillyweegirl22

this is superb shelly
i just hope the cv see this and change their entire script that they have gt

would love it.

Originally posted by: lovtv

Sorry...I need an editor. Read and corrected some errors.

we all would love to help u shelly and due to that can njoy the scene a bit more 😉

Originally posted by: saomom

EXCUSE ME?!?!?!? Exactly WHY are you not writing an ongoing FF? Good Heavens woman, that was FANTASTIC! You certainly have a talent and I, for one, want more, more, more!

m second here...
looking for More More More More More...................

Originally posted by: bubbly@12

beautiful yaar....i'm speechless.....muahh...very well written and potrayed....so beautifully described...i can imagine each and every scene as if it is happening in real.....what a talent u have got yaar....simply superb(i coincidentally read ur post while listening to 'tu aashiqui hai' song...i can't describe the feeling i've experienced yaar)....

Wow...Just listened to the song and it is fabulous. And it goes perfectly with the story.

Thanks for the suggestion.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zSHOcuAAvEQ

Originally posted by: saomom

EXCUSE ME?!?!?!? Exactly WHY are you not writing an ongoing FF? Good Heavens woman, that was FANTASTIC! You certainly have a talent and I, for one, want more, more, more!

Thanks Tammie....I will noddle round the idea of writing a FF.