New FF - pt 9 pg11 - 21st Sept - Page 6

Originally posted by: ..anisha..

i completely agree with u.....just when the main part is about to come, u ran away...not fair😔
btw update soon...this part was awesum especially the ending which u dint finis😆😆

same dear...i was expecting some thing more to come and suddenly see her words m going....i was like what....??
still in shock of that incomplete scene....so just want her to come soon....

So is Kinjal engaged to Rahul? Hmmmmm..... Could be good! 😊

How can u stop like this yaar??? Pls continue soon:-)

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

same dear...i was expecting some thing more to come and suddenly see her words m going....i was like what....??
still in shock of that incomplete scene....so just want her to come soon....

i knw......even i was in shock...cant wait for the next part

Very nice Part!!!

Hey guys!! Am so sorry about yesterday... It was time for my prayers and I had ro run... You won't believe what just happened! I wrote a very long romantic update and I lost it😭😭😭 Now I have to try and wite it again... Please bear with me..

Part 6

He pulls her into his arms and snakes his arm around her waist and runs his free hand on her bare back as all her doris were still open.

Gopi gasped and blushes hard as she now knows she is not dreaming: Ahemji.. Aap yahan kya kar rahe hain? Koi ajaye ga..

Ahem starts dropping light kisses from her forehead to her neck and tells her that no one will come as he has locked the door. He then starts to kiss her deeply on the neck while running his hands on her back. Gopi loses herself in his embrace for some time but when she realises they both need to be downstairs she pulls out of his arms and says

Gopi: Ahemji... Humein... we need to go downstairs.. everyone must be waiting for us..

Ahem who is annoyed at Gopi for always thinking about others pulls her roughly against him and says

Ahem: tum bohot bolne lagi ho Gopi.. Lekin mujhe tumhe chup karana achi tarha se ata hai..

Saying so he kisses Gopi on her lips. Gopi who is stunned at first tries to resist but then she also loses herself and starts kissing him back and allows Ahem to deepen the kiss. Ahem holds her even tighter and Gopi puts her arms around his neck. Ahem releases her after sometime and smiles at her mischievously.

Ahem: Kya hua Gopi? Won't you say anything now?

Gopi who is all shy and red hides her face in Ahem's chest and hugs him tightly. Ahem hugs her back and kisses drops a kiss on her head.

Gopi: Aap ne abhi tak nahi bataya ke aap yahan kya kar rahe hain?

Ahem: Rahul ka rishta Kinjal ke saath hi ho raha hai aur hum aaj dinner ke liye aye hain.

Gopi: Saach? yeh to kitni achi khabar hai. Iska matlab ghar se sab aye hain? Aap niche chaliye main bas do minute main tayar ho kar ati houn.

Ahem holds Gopi tighter and looks into her eyes lovingly: Nahi Gopi.. Aaj mein apni patni ko apne haanthon se tayar karna chahta houn.. Please?

Gopi gives him a watery smile and says yes through her eyes.

Ahem then kisses her on her forehead and turns her around. He moves her hair to the front and drops a kiss on her nape. He holds Gopi's bare waist with both his hands and starts kissing her passionately on her back. Ahem then ties all her doris lovingly and kisses her on her neck before putting her hair back in place. He looks at Gopi who is standing with her eyes closed, breathing heavily and smiles lovingly at her.

Ahem then carries Gopi in his arms and makes her sit by the dressing table. He then takes the hair brush and starts brushing her hair lovingly. When he is done he keeps the brush back and starts looking for something desperately on her dressing table.

Gopi gives him a confused look: What are you looking for?

Ahem looks at Gopi passionately and says: tumhara sindoor aur mangalsutra kahan hai?

Gopi gives him a watery smile and opens a drawer for Ahem where he sees his picture alongwith her sindoor and mangalsutra. He takes the mangalsutra from the drawer and puts it around her neck lovingly and fills her maang with sindoor.

Gopi closes her eyes when she feels the sindoor in her maang and a tear escapes her eyes. Ahem wipes her tears and hugs her tightly and says

Ahem: Shhh Gopi.. I promise to give you so much love that you'll forget all your pain. Main tumse bohot pyaar karta houn Gopi aur tumhare bagair ek pal bhi nahi reh sakta.

Gopi looks into Ahems eyes and says: Main bhi aap se bohot pyaar karti houn. Aap jald se jald mujhe lene ajayiye.. Main ab aur nahi reh sakti aap ke bina..

Ahem: Haan jaan.. Mera bas chalta to tumhe yahan wapas aane nahi deta.. Lekin tumne mujhse pehli baar kuch manga and I can't refuse you anything. Abb chalo let me finish getting you ready.

Saying so Ahem picks up her jewellery one by one and places a kiss in its place before making Gopi wear them. When he is done Ahem hugs a shy and pink Gopi and kisses her lovingly on her cheek. They look at their reflection in the mirror and smile at each other lovingly.

Ahem: Aaj tum bohot zyada khoobsurat lag rahi ho. Bilkul pari jaisi. Meri pyari si pari.

Gopi turns around in Ahem's arms, she puts her arms around his neck and smiles up to him.

Gopi: Aap bhi bohot ache lag rahe hain.

Ahem: Sach?

Gopi: Hmmm...

Ahem gets a mischievous look on his face and says: Maine tumhe itni achi tarha se tayaar kiya.. Tum mujhe mera inaam nahi dogi?

Gopi: Main aap ko kya desakti houn? Acha aap hi bata dijiye.. What do you want?

Ahem pulls her closer and says: I want you to call me Ahem.. Sirf Ahem..

Gopi: Lekin main kaise.. I can't.. Mujhse nahi hoga..

Ahem: Kyun nahi hoga jaan? Koshish to karo?

Gopi shakes her head in denial: Nahi Ahemji main nahi keh sakti.

Ahem starts dropping light kisses on her face and kisses Gopi deeply on her lips. Gopi looses herself once again holds Ahem tightly and kisses him back with all the love in her heart. Ahem then starts kissing Gopi deeply on her neck and Gopi can't stop herself from saying Ahem's name passionately

Gopi breathing heavily runs her fingers through Ahem's hair and says: Ahem...

Ahem stills and looks into Gopi's eyes passionately: Phir se kaho

Gopi stares back into his eyes with all the love she had in hert heart: Ahem...

She then closes her eyes and hugs him tightly and says again and again: Ahem.. Ahem... Ahem

Ahem hugs her back tightly and drops a kiss on her head. They stay in each others arms for a long time and Ahem's phone starts ringing. Ahem holds Gopi in one arm and takes the call with his free hand.

Rahul: Yaar! where are you guys? It's been so long.. Everyone is looking for you now.. Come quick..

Ahem who is cursing Rahul in his mind says: Haan Rahul.. We are coming..

Ahem hangs up and looks at Gopi sadly: We have to go down now.

Gopi giggles and kisses him on the cheek before running off to the door.

Ahem smiles and runs towards Gopi and catches her just when she reaches the door. He turns her around and hugs her one last time before they both go downstairs together..


Ok guys hope you liked it.. That's it for today..

thats wt i called a kiss worthy update. So much romantic n passionate aham. Reciprocting gopi n ful of kisses.
Lov u dear for this mindblowing part. Update next soon.

loved ur update.
plz continue sooon.

This FF is so full of deep passion and love and I can't imagine Ahem doing all this .The fact that the current Ahem could do this fills it with even more passion in this.

omg!!!!!!!
this part is probably the best so far👏.....ahem and gopi kiss and hug and gopicalls ahem ahem 😳😳
i think the wait was worth it..lol😆

cant wait for the next part...update soon😊