FF-Lets Fall In Love,Last Pt#17,Pg35, GoHam Hug - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW Sadhli ... How did I miss this ??? ....it is beautiful !!!!
Everything we want to see in the serial is here ...
Wonderful ... plz continue !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
sadhli this is great. u portray the real aham's frustration beautifully
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rusha4003

WOW Sadhli ... How did I miss this ??? ....it is beautiful !!!!

Everything we want to see in the serial is here ...
Wonderful ... plz continue !!!!!


thanx usha....my moral boosted a lot...
....i'l update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

sadhli this is great. u portray the real aham's frustration beautifully


i tried my best to do so shruthi....as this is the only way for me come out of the anger cozed by his attitude in show.....
and believe me much more pain and suffering are there in future for Aham here..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye Sadhli dikhri... aapka fanfic bahuti Saras che...
iske baad gujraati nahi aati... so back to hindi or english or their mix...
hamara tonic kab bana rahi ho... i mean next chapter please😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'll update it soon yaar.....was not able to think abt it yesterday so may be tonight...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

i'll update it soon yaar.....was not able to think abt it yesterday so may be tonight...


Thank you 😊 and take your time
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sadhli yaar! I just read the update.. It's awesome as usual.. You should really write more often. Your update made my day as usual.. Keep it up hun and please torture Aham some more.. I'm really upset with him for what he is doing to Gopi on the show right now..
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Posted: 14 years ago
fiza u liked it.....cant believe......u are urself a gr8 writer and appreciating me....*feeling proud*


and dont worry......i'll tortuting him more and more and more....
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Posted: 14 years ago


Part 12

Aham is moving reluctantly, while Shashank is Observing Him Closely and then he calls him. Aham's eyes shine, he truns back with a hope that he will listen something expected but to his disappointment.

Shashank says: U dint invite me on ur wedding bt m not that much mean so i'll be w8ing for u on my engagement, but b4 that u hv to give me ur number and address so that Official Invitation will reach on time to ur house.

Aham: ohh...sorry for that, the situation was not like that I could inivite anyone plz forgive me.

Shashank: hey no probs buddy, i can understand, marriage is very big thing in life and Exciting too, so it happens when u forgot everything else for someone special in ur life. M sure same was with u. so give me ur number.

Aham (again in thinking mode) gives him number and address and moves towards the door.

Shashank: And yes dont try to hide my Beautiful Bhabhi this time, I wanna meet that Gorgeous Angel who was so lucky to have u as husband.
Aham nods sadly and leaves.

Aham sits in car and starts it and thinks abt each and every word that Shashank mentioned. Abt Gopi's luck, abt her Beauty, abt her being Special and he feels so numb and dead. He talks to himself that Gopi was not lucky to have me it was me who dint understand my luck and let it go by himself, who never felt her Importance, who never ever tried to Understand Her any other thing comes second. Just then he was passing by a Red Light and had to stop the car coz of Signal. Then he sees the same Lady who came to his car and gave blessings abt him and his married life, she dint tell him anything this time but Aham calls her, and gives her 500/- and says Last time I dint think that I'll be believing ur blessings in my life but today I want u to pray for me that i'll get my Life My Wife, Aham has tears in his eyes while saying all this. He gives money and drives the car w/o even looking at her again.
And the lady says u'll get everything son, everything but u hv to struggle enough to get it back, so that u will know how to contain that precious thing in ur hands for life time.


Shashank is happy to see Aham's pain and how he is suffering to think abt His Marriage and enters his room. But suddenly he remembers abt his cell which he left in Hall. He goes to hall and sees Gopi touching and feeling the place where Aham was sitting. Shashank gets shocked. and calls Gopi.

Shashank: what are u doing here Gopi.

Gopi: uumm....main wo....kuchh nahi...kuchh bhi to nahi...bas aise hi.

Shashank: no m sure u are here not just like that. Did u saw Aham here? Were u listening to all our talk? dont u know eavesdropping is not a good habit.

Gopi: no, i dint listen anything of ur talk, I just saw him leaving and could not stop myself from coming here. As still I consider him as my husband, whether he considers me anything or nothing, he does not want to see my face but still I fill my Maang with his Sindoor only. And leaves crying.

Shashank gets the whole picture that now the Fire is on both the sides, it seems Aham missed Gopi and felt her absence like Death, Gopi also cant keep herself away from Aham and his presence. So now he planned to do something to re-unite these two lovebirds who are missing each other badly but one does not know where to find his Life and other one knows but cant try to get her Love.


This is till now hope u'll njoy Aham's pain and sufering as much i did while writing.

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