Round 3 - Feedback Thread - Page 4

Originally posted by: arunsampath

Top Grades ⭐️

Kiti_g - OK comments on your rendition in my next post 😃 I had to choose between your rendition, coollama's and rocknroll's to give some detailed feedback. It is based purely on how many commentable aspects are in the rendition as opposed to how well/poor the rendition actually is. Anyway, finally I settled on yours this time.


Arun

Thanks a bunch Arun for putting me in the top grade! And i do feel honored that u chose me as the bakra for detailed analysis 😛 ... will come back after ur post to tell u whether i really felt honored or not 😉😆 ... j/k 😆 ... ur most welcome to scrutinise and would love to hear the comments!

Originally posted by: Megha25

Kiti g- You need to work on projection of high notes. The chorus and beginning were off but you were singing really well near the end of the song. You seem finalist material to me. 😊

Thank you Megha! Points noted!! 😊

@ Sunita - Pls pls f/b complete kijiye aur humara bhi gana suniye 😛

@ Ritu and Sarah - Waiting for ur f/b ... pls do post them 😊

@ Rasny - aap kahan gayab ho gaye??!! is baar hoping for a full f/b from u 😳 😊

Take ur time folks, all your efforts in taking the time to listen to us and provide f/b is much much appreciated!! Thanks a ton!!

I am giving my feedback, but I am totally zero in music 😳.

To start with, all have done really good job👏. To sing without any track/music is very difficult, so you have done a wonerful job indeed !!

1) Lavanya - You have a very sweet voice and the song that you picked really suited your voice. There was a bit disturbance in background, otherwise it sounded perfect to me👍🏼

2) Mini - You sung the song really well👏, I missed only 1 thing here - the huskiness of the words "Pari hoon main". The song sounded very good to me.👍🏼

3) Kiti - What a powerful voice you have got girl !!!! I had to lower my volume to listen to your song😆. Subha mugdal's songs are really difficult and you sung it so perfectly. All the highs and lows were so perfect for me.....very well done👍🏼

4) Suhana - Your voice is very sweet !!! you sung the song well except the start of first para, first line.... though you covered it up nicely later. Well done and good luck👍🏼

5) Tabu - You have a sweet voice and this song suited you well. In some places, it sounded bit shaky at some places....overall it was good 👍🏼

6) Coollama - Wow is the only thought that comes to me .....very well done👏....you are too good👍🏼....I am a simple layman type of person, so it sounded absolutely perfect to me...

7) Rockn roll - I listen this song often coz its on my ipod and its a really peppy song. I liked your version but you sung it more like a classical song than a peppy song. Your voice , sur all are perfect👍🏼

8) Naughtynnice - You sung it really well......I enjoyed the song .The start of para was bit shaky, but you covered it up later.....very good effort👍🏼

9) Mala - Very good try. I like the attitude that comes out in your singing. You sung well. The only problem was pace of song. It was geting slow somewhere and fast at other places......if you kept the tempo of song same, it wud have been perfect...👍🏼

10) Evileye - You selected the song that suits your voice really well. Very nicely sung. Can't find any fault.👍🏼

11) Donny - I never heard this song before. It sounded perfect to me. The song suited your voice and sounded very good to me. ....👍🏼

12) Kalpana - You got a very sweet voice. You sung the song really well. One proble with Nazia Hassan songs is that it always has the effect of that "double sounding" type of voice that gives Disco feel. Obviously you can't get that in singing without any music or track. Keeping that in mind, you did a fab job👍🏼

I hope I have not left anyone. Please PM me if I skipped someone. Sorry to refer most of you by the name that appeared on Audio coz I don't know your names😳 .

Once again, I am so dumb in this area, ignore my comments please😆

Hey evryone!!Thanx a lot for liking my singing...i really appreciate the fact that u guyz are frank in ur feedback and donot sugar coat any of ur comments...it helps a lot in improving if i know exactly wat my faults are... 😊 Thanx a lot again..Ill keep in mind all the pieces of advice given to me and will work harder than ever so as not to dissappoint u guyz...thanx again! 😊

Originally posted by: kiti_g

@ Rasny - aap kahan gayab ho gaye??!! is baar hoping for a full f/b from u 😳 😊

sorry dear. due 2 some personal prob i couldn't concentrate. But i'll try my best 2 give fb asap.🤗

This time i'll give a full fb. coz last time i couldn't give😳

🤣 when BB is there, no fikar..😆😆

Originally posted by: Bhaskar.T

Hello Sunita DMG akela anaath mat chhor dena. 😆 Warna pit jayenge hum sab waha phir se. 😆 😆

You are welcome Nikhil.. this is my first time commenting but I will be here more often with my jhakaas FB...😆😆

Originally posted by: coollama

Hey Sunita,

Thanks a ton for liking my song. I am really happy to see a feedback from you.

Hope to see more of you in future.😊😊😊

Nik

Originally posted by: rock&roll

thank u very much for ur comments.......Are u sure u didn't have any more critical comments 😉......kuch bhi ho socho mat yaar,bol do......😃😆😆 hmmm, abhi tho jyada kuch nahi hai, lekin aage rounds main aisa fb dungi, ki u will kick me out of here...😆😆

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Naam hi laafi hai...darane ke liye...😈😊😆...j/k.. Heehee, Don brandname ka asar hai...😆😆

Thenkoo..for the nice feedback...its good most haven't listened to the original song...😆😆..*saved*...😛😆 ur voice definitely suits such genre and u should try that more often..

@ Mala, sure.. I will complete my fb soon..

I'm shocked that all participants took my comments positively. 😆 It was fun giving my feedback and I enjoyed listening to you guys. Hope to hear you again and even better than before. 😊

@rock&roll

Mini:

I liked ur voice very much and ur style of singing. U seem to have slowed the pace of the song. The original song is a li'l faster than this……u have also changed the "sruthi" or pitch at the end of the first antara….the reason for this is that u 've started the first antara at a higher note and hence the change thru out….Other than that it sounds fine….. It was a good effort 👏👏

thank you anitaji for the detailed feedback.I understand completely what you have pointed out and will improvise on those points.

@arunsampath

Minirulz: Nicely sung! You slowed the song a tad. You start off well in the mukhda. Your pitching is off in the antara. That affects the rest of the song. You have emoted very well. Your sur is mostly good except for wrong pitching in the antara. The second time you say pari hoon main, the ending is a little abrupt. The higher notes sound a little strained. That said, a nice rendition! 👏

Thank you arun for the feedback.I do miss ur songs.hope you are back soon with the wild card.and thanks for pointing out the shortcomings.will keep in mind for future.

@Megha25

MiniRulz- You need to work on holding your notes. You also need to work on projection the song should have been sung i.e. in a higher scale to make it sound sweeter. I don't think this song suited your voice quality. In my opinion, you could sing zindagi main koi aaye na rabba really well just work on holding the notes.
hi megha-thanks for ur feedback.can you please pm me in detail(if you get the time)as to what holding the notes means.I am not so well versed with these terms.I did understand the scale part.and will keep in mind for future.please keep listening and posting your comments.

@*Sunita*

Minirulz- Totally loved your singing and voice. I agree with Anu that you have reduced the pace of the song but commendable efforts and the alaap u took in the antara was wonderful.

Thank you sunita for the feedback.without the beat sometimes the pace gets slower but i definitely will keep that in mind for future.do keep listening and posting your feedback.

@tvfan1401

2) Mini - You sung the song really well👏, I missed only 1 thing here - the huskiness of the words "Pari hoon main". The song sounded very good to me.👍🏼

thank you tvfan1401 for your kind words.i agree that the huskiness was missing in the line pari hoon main.thanks for pointing that out.please keep listening in future and posting your feedback.