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Posted: 19 years ago
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An old one, written sometiem ago. Am writing another one now. will try and post it later

Kabhi aap meri muskurahat pe hue fida...
Tabse bandhi thi usi muskurahat se rishtaa...

Aaj tum nahi, shayad dilon mein pyaar hi nahi..
par hoton pe woh muskurahat hai zaroor...
Shayad aapko phir se wahi muskurahat le aaye...

Aaj woh muskaan kar rahi aapka intezaar...
hoton ki thakaan karni hai aapko door...
jab tak aap nahi aate.. dil na muskura payega..
Dil ki muskurahat ruke khadi hai ... intezaar mein.. aapke liye...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: s.priya

Beauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful 👏

Loved the ending.......

god always says.... Never lose faith, never lose hope, there is always a shine even in a dark sky..... 👏 U bring tears to my eyes dear.

Anu, wonderful....just too good and at a time so appropriate when I have just witnessed what hope and faith can do....👏

Thank you Priya, for making me believe in it....👏

Edited by adi_0112 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow! That was another good poem di 👏👏👏

Here goes one of mine - a hindi version of the previous poem:

Dil mein liye aas baithe thee hum,
lekin aap nahin aaye...
Dil ne aapko pukara,
phir bhi nahin aaye....
Dil ne phir se yaad kiya aapko,
phir bhi aap nahin aaye...

Abhi humne chodi thi umeed,
toh aap rasta dikhane aaye
kahaa aapne umeed na chodo,
main rahunga wahaa jab zaroorat hain tumko


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Posted: 19 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: adi_0112

Anu, wonderful....just too good and at a time so appropriate when I have just witnessed what hope and faith can do....👏

Thank you Priya, for making me believe in it....👏

Thanks adi... 😊 posted an hindi version too

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Posted: 19 years ago
#35

wah wah..wah wah... Anu & Priya...carry on..

bahut accha lag raha hain..

Vinayak..where r yours???

I woish Bhaskar bhai and Barnalidi was around to contribute as well.They also writes some wonderful poems..👏👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
You gave us a platform to read
You gave us a platform to discuss
You gave us a platform to make friends
You gave us a platform to meet people across the world
You gave us sweet memories

After some time passes by,
You may forget us,
You may get new people,
But we can never forget you..

What platform is this?
Railway platform? Road platform?
Windows NT? Windows 2000?
No, this is a platform of India-Forums..

Virtual though it is, but makes us feel the real world...

IF, We thank u from the bottom of our heart...




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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ans24us1

You gave us a platform to read
You gave us a platform to discuss
You gave us a platform to make friends
You gave us a platform to meet people across the world
You gave us sweet memories

After some time passes by,
You may forget us,
You may get new people,
But we can never forget you..

What platform is this?
Railway platform? Road platform?
Windows NT? Windows 2000?
No, this is a platform of India-Forums..

Virtual though it is, but makes us feel the real world...

IF, We thank u from the bottom of our heart...






Anu.......... u r on a rolll today 👏 flippant words interspersed with those which touch ur heart 👏 brilliant combination and great use of the words
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Thanks di 😛 as u said, all expressions frm the bottom of heart when converted to words give the beautiful meaning...
greatmaratha thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ans24us1

Thanks di 😛 as u said, all expressions frm the bottom of heart when converted to words give the beautiful meaning...



I was very disappointed with God when he took one of my closest friends, my young lil sis from us earlier this year. Today, I thank him for giving me another lil sis 🤗 Thanks dear.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: s.priya



I was very disappointed with God when he took one of my closest friends, my young lil sis from us earlier this year. Today, I thank him for giving me another lil sis 🤗 Thanks dear.



Didi, that was really sweet and made me so emotional... I dont have siblings.. And I have always regretted for it... But now i think, jus to give you all, he didnot give me any siblings... I really thank god from the bottom of my heart to give me such a wonderful elder sis like you... 🤗

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