Member of the week-Jaadoogar!! - Page 55

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

Still 2 more days remaining.😉

it's not 2 days, it 48 long hours, 2880 never-ending minutes, 172800 waiting seconds...

jadoo ji bahut bahut dhanyavaad mere liye itna acha acha bolne ke liye. par aapko nahin lagata aapne kuch jyada hee bol diya? mujhe lagata hai aisa. par phir bhi tareef to jhoothi bhi acha lagati hai. isliye ek baar phir se shukriya.

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

Manju:

Kaise bayaan karoon main mere paas alfaaz bhi nahin

Seekha hai main ne inse ke kaya ghalat hai kaya sahi

Izzat se inko log sab kahte hain manju didi

Hum log pe inke payar ki barsaat ho rahi

Originally posted by: manjujain

Shady tum kitne kharab ho, itni mehnat kee meine, aur jadoo ji kareeb kareeb rhyme bhi kiya, ab mein eng ke itne shabd kahan janti hoon hindi mein asan hota, phir bhi dekho kaise bol rahe ho. tumhe jara bhi ek baar ko laga nahin ki tumhe aisa nahin kehna chahie shady?

Arre Manju di, main to aise hi bol raha tha.. jadoo ji shayar hai na isliye.. waise main aapke translation se kaafi khush tha.. usko rhyme karna bahot mushkil tha, lekin aapna poora translate kiya.. woh bhi dil se.. yahan kaan kheechne ka emoticon hota to main aapko deta ki mujhpe use kariye.. 😳

ab tumne itna haq de diya to ab mujhe koi shikayat nahin aur ab mein kuch keh bhi nahin rahee kyonki ab tumne yeh kehkar mera munh band kar diya.

ab tumhari parties khatam ho gayeen na? aaj tum aa gaye to adi gayab ho gaya, yeh kya hai? tum dono aankh micholi khel rahe ho kya?

Originally posted by: shadyhtown

Arre Manju di, main to aise hi bol raha tha.. jadoo ji shayar hai na isliye.. waise main aapke translation se kaafi khush tha.. usko rhyme karna bahot mushkil tha, lekin aapna poora translate kiya.. woh bhi dil se.. yahan kaan kheechne ka emoticon hota to main aapko deta ki mujhpe use kariye.. 😳

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

Tumhare question ka answer to main PM mein bhejoonga MOTW finish hone ke baad bhi. Kaha na chaahe 7 janam lena pare zaroor reply karoonga.😭

I was kidding
that is nhot my Friday's question

like I said - Firday's question = fusion of Math, CT< English

Originally posted by: shadyhtown

Arre waah Jadooji, aapne to poem rhyme bhi kiya, jabki woh requirement bhi nahi tha..

To phir main aapko gaana translate karne ke liye doonga, kam se kam ek rhyming to niklega.. Manju di aur Bhaskar ne rhyme bhi nahi kiya tha

Shady,

tum ne jo gaane diye tthe..woh hazaar kokshish karke bhi rhyme mani kiya ja sakta tha, atleast Bhaskar wala..manjudi ka mein dekha nahi..

agar rhyme sach much ho sakta hain..then why don't you do and show us how???😛

Jadoo bhai,

👏 Aapke translation of my poem is really mind blowing...bahut mazaa aaya....it even rhymes...😆😆

And Vinnie ke sawaalo mein aapne jo sher likha hain sabke liye...sach much bahut accha hain...👏

mein ayunga aapse tution lene..mujhe yeh sab bilkul nahi aata..

jadoo ji aap thak gaye ho to thoda aaram karo. yeh yahan jawab dene se jyada jaroori hai aapka apni sehat ka shyan rakhna.

vaise bhi koi bahut backlog nahin hai ho jayega. aap so jao aaj, aisa na ho aapki tabiyat kharab ho jaaye. aajkal mausam vaise hee kabhi garam kabhi thanda, aise hee hai.

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

adi abhi kaye logon pe bacha huaa hai sher likhna, aor tiredness lag raha aaj.

ooh another question jadoo ji..

please write a shayari for me 😃 (more of a request actually)

jadoo ji, kisi ko janane ke baad bhi likhna mushkil hai. likhna sabke bus kee baat nahin, par aap acha likh lete hain.

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

Tanisha it is very difficult to write sher for somebody if you did not interact much or read the post or talked in PM. But I will surely write one based on what I observe about you. Did you like my comment on you?