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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mere khwabon ke jharokon ko sajane wali
O one who adorns the peep-holes of my dreams!
Tere khwabon mein kahin mera guzar hai ke nahin
Am I ever a passer-by in your dreams?
Poochh kar apni nigahon se batade mujhko
Ask your regard and tell me (or 'after due consideration
tell me', but I like the former version better)

Meri raaton ke muqaddar mein seher hai ke nahin?
Is there any dawn in my nights' destiny?
Pyaar par bas to nahin hai mera, lekin phir bhiTu batade ke tujhe pyaar
karoon ya na karoon?
I have no control over Love, but still, tell me should I love
you or not?

Tune khud apne tabassum se jagaya hai jinhenUn
tamannaon ka izhaar karoon ya na karoon?
These longings, which you yourself have awakened with
your own smile,
Should I disclose them or not?
😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
Now what was so special about Sudha Malhotra that the great Sahir took a fancy for her???
Edited by punjini - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great job Sangeeta!
But I think the translation for "pooch kar apni nigaahon se bataade mujkho" is not sounding right. Though I can't think of an alternative either. 😊
Edited by punjini - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: punjini

Great job Sangeeta!
But I think the translation for "pooch kar apni nigaahon se bataade mujkho" is not sounding right. Though I can't think of an alternative either. 😊



Ask your soul....? 😕
Nigaah : Attention, Care, Close, Custody, Glance, Look, Regard, Sight
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
Thank u Dawn-ji - ab apna bhi ek sher sunlijiye

Ae Shayaron ke shayar!
Pyaar ka muqadma banaatey yeh duwaa bhi karley
Ke aisey ashaar key layak
Koi aashik bhi pyaar karney waalon ko miley
Edited by sangeetaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hmmm... I agree with you punjini-ji... any suggestions anyone?? Aap apney
apney nigaahon sey pooch kar batadijiyey key 'nigaahon sey poochna' ka
kyaa translation dein? 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: punjini


Now what was so special about Sudha Malhotra that the great Sahir took a
fancy for her???



Maaf kijiye forumwalon.. baraa shayari ka mood lagaa hai apun ko 😛 to ek
aur isi baat pey:

Yahaan baat chali ke iski kiyaa baat hai
To wahaan shak pari ismey baat hi kyaa hai
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sangeetaa

hmmm... I agree with you punjini-ji... any suggestions anyone?? Aap apney
apney nigaahon sey pooch kar batadijiyey key 'nigaahon sey poochna' ka
kyaa translation dein? 😳


How about "ask your thoughts and tell me".
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sangeetaa



Maaf kijiye forumwalon.. baraa shayari ka mood lagaa hai apun ko 😛 to ek
aur isi baat pey:

Yahaan baat chali ke iski kiyaa baat hai
To wahaan shak pari ismey baat hi kyaa hai


😆😆

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