Written update - 11-feb-2011

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi All, This is my first attempt at writing updates, so please bear with me and be nice J. It's mostly gonna be matter-of-fact way unless my humor clicks in me(which never happens when I want L).So without further ado, let's start, I have listed below short names for characters which I am gonna use:

Abhay - AB

Surbhi. - SB

Mai - M

Markandey - MKD

Pushpa - P

Tribhuvan - T

Seema - S

Vishnu - V

Kajal - K

Ratna - R

Nidhi - N

Surbhi's father - SF

Surbhi's mother- SM

Ranvijay - RV

Samrat- Sam

Abhay's home:

AB and SB enter home and M is waiting there, M starts scolding SB for being careless, not taking care of herself while being pregnant, also for going to servant's(Pratima) house. She also scolds AB for taking SB's side and going with her.After scolding nicely she asks them go to their room which they do.

R and RV room:

R is sleeping, RV touches her her hair.(He looks psycho especially with that crazy bg music).R wakes up and says "Arre, aap", RV- kaisi bivi hai meri, Pati kitani bhi badi mushkil mein ho, par aram se so rahi hai", R says assuring dialogues and says she will ask her maternal family to take back the police case on him. He asks what can she do for him, R says she can do anything for him, he just have to say it.RV becomes normal and holds R and lovingly says now I don't fear anything even going to jail as they are now janam-janam ke sathi., and cuddles her to sleep saying maine tuhe jaga diya, babu ab so jaa(achcha hai pahale uthao phir sulao).

Abhay's home:

Breakfast time:

Everyone(V,N,P) is sitting on floor for breakfast and S and K are serving. K complains saying her back is aching by bending to serve.her husband says he likes it, K gets angry.

S also says she too like it as it reminds her of childhood days, P gets angry hearing that.P says keep supporting SB like this and even worse days will come.Just then T comes angrily and says ab hamein chhote logon ki tarah zameen par baith kar khana padega, AB-SB come, T scolds AB for it. M and MKD come. MKD says not to take his anger on food and asks him not start morning like this.MKD goes and takes his place. M sits on bench saying she can't sit on floor because of her knee pain. AB and SB also sit for breakfast while S and T are serving. (how come SB is sitting while S and K are standing and serving, why this special treatment even after previous scolding ) SB says to P to pass the dish and she serve it, M says no need to do this, have your breakfast, she then asks seema to serve SB(Ohh, the special treatment of SB is because of pregnancy).

N asks for permission to go to college from MKD as due to not going its affecting her studies, MKD gives permission.N gets up and goes to her room.

Just then some namoona enters and he is thinking '"wow what a house and everyone is sitting on floor for breakfast instead of dining table, may be because of their financial situation may not be good, lagata hai mamaji ne kisi phaticharon ke ghar bhej diya hai,"

T stops him(who btw is still standing and not sitting for breakfast) and says :"abe chalati phirti dukan, kahan chala aa raha hai ghar ke ander, chalo jaao yahan se, humein kuchh nahin khareedana", Namoona tells them his mama has sent him here and he is sb's cousin brother, Rocky and has come here for collecting for repairs of Petrol Pumps which he manages but MKD owns them, so MKD has to pay for the repairs.T insults him and sb's father and family, MKD says ok. N comes and le Rocki ki dil ki ghanti baj gayee. N leaves for college.Rocky too leaves. M insults sb's family for sending namoona for collecting money, sb is mortified.

Road :

N is going to college with her friends, Rocky comes. He offers N ride,N says No. N's friends tease Rocky by saying all 3 of them can't sit on bike, so instead Rocky walks with them to college.

AB-SB room:

AB is excited about valentines day being next day.he says they both will go shopping where they will shop for each other and then they will go to a nice resteaurant, K overhears. MKD comes to AB and SB's room and informs AB has to come with him next morning for some meeting, AB asks if it's necessary to be tomorrow only. MKD scolds him and tells him to be responsible as he is going ot be father soon.MKD leaves. AB is upset. SB manaos him by saying not to be upset as by that one day it's not going to affect their love and valentine day or any day their love is going to remain same and everyday is like valentine day for them. AB is happy and says I love you to SB and SB too says I love you to AB. Staring session between AB and SB.

Precap ' voice overs says from Monday Surabhi's character is going to be played by Parul Chauhan, (Yayyyy). The same sbb scene . SB is sleeping and her arm has covered her face slightly and AB comes close to her. Petals showering on her.

Thanks for reading.

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Wonderfullife thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Is this your first attempt? Cannot belive it.😕

You have written so well.👏 👏 👏

Thank you so much and please continue your updates.⭐️ 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww Kritika, so sweet of you, thanks for liking.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww...tamushii greatttt jobbb haaaannn👏👏👏👏
verry well written..👏👏👏...keep it up👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks sms33, Prema and Sukanya for liking and encourangement, so very sweet of you all🤗. I will be updating on Mondays and Fridays.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tamushi thanks for your updates. So you started your work for Parul. How sweet. Keep updating dear. We will be with you. Thank You. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you dear!!!! It doesn't feel like you are doing this job for the first time......

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update !! I have to register the codes !! since there are so many characters in this show !
I will start catching up from Monday with Parul's entry !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks Tamushi.Very nice update .I can not wait to see on monday episode.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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welcome and thanks for liking Deepa,Elsa,Shanti and Lisandra:-)

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