The gravity of Silence....

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Posted: 7 years ago
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How do I explain it?

T'was when his words burst into flames,
This silence was born.

The sound of it,
Deafened me.

Slowly the weight of its quietness,
Descended on me.

Such was its burden,
I floated like a leaf.

The breeze blew me,
Higher and higher.

So high,
I was dizzy.

Then it poured into me,
Strange musical notes.

It was a lullaby,
Though I scarce knew it then.

Begging a return to reality,
My heart beat wilder.

I hid myself,
But someone kept singing.

Serenity embraced me,
I didn't know her then.

I grappled around,
These routes begged exploration.

Afraid to journey,
I froze the moment.

Would there be a secret unfolding,
I am yet to be aware of?


Dedicated to Anami 's journey to realisation that she is in love.
Beautifully and delicately portrayed by the makers.
Hats off, guys! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow!Soup👏🤗
Glad to see Anami's plight moved you to write poems 😆

Mahima was awesome! From the dazed way she walked into LM and how she tried to explain to Poonam in her own style to pulling the blanket over head...beautiful!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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These routes begged exploration.

Afraid to journey,
I froze the moment.👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran_singh_24

Wow!Soup👏🤗

Glad to see Anami's plight moved you to write poems 😆

Mahima was awesome! From the dazed way she walked into LM and how she tried to explain to Poonam in her own style to pulling the blanket over head...beautiful!


Ha ha! 😆

Thanks, Sim.
Been a while since I wrote poems. Started with Ahil, actually. I was just reminded of QH 2 when I tried to remember when I had started writing poems. 😉😆

Yeah. Mahima was awesome! The whole sequence was too good.

And Adhiraj walking into his house regally... 😳

Ah! What contrasting expressions of the same love! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Only from QH2? Am happy that nightmare had a positive impact on you Soup.😃😃
Ah! What contrasting expressions of the same love!

indeed! I'm excited to see her journey. He never wrestled with his feelings or the fact she's from the enemy camp.The fun is in watching someone like Anami growing up and realising her feelings

Please keep writing more as she journeys into love.🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

How do I explain it?


T'was when his words burst into flames,
This silence was born.

The sound of it,
Deafened me.

Slowly the weight of its quietness,
Descended on me.

Such was its burden,
I floated like a leaf.

The breeze blew me,
Higher and higher.

So high,
I was dizzy.

Then it poured into me,
Strange musical notes.

It was a lullaby,
Though I scarce knew it then.

Begging a return to reality,
My heart beat wilder.

I hid myself,
But someone kept singing.

Serenity embraced me,
I didn't know her then.

I grappled around,
These routes begged exploration.

Afraid to journey,
I froze the moment.

Would there be a secret unfolding,
I am yet to be aware of?


Dedicated to Anami 's journey to realisation that she is in love.
Beautifully and delicately portrayed by the makers.
Hats off, guys! 👏👏👏

WOW this is a masterpiece⭐️⭐️

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