DIRA (FF) : HUME TUMSE PYAR KITNA..UPDATE 13 on PG 39 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

Aru ,

normally Development team/Moderator check Weekly Activity in Forum ,
if only one/ two is Active that won't help
but yes if more r active atleast twice in Week then forum might be remain open.
Thanks A lot for this FF .


M doing watevr m able to do, Sana... Last week was busy, at work.. Today, i got the day-off frm work + I was missing diya and Ratan a lot, so wrote the first update of this ff today..

Hope Our other frens also stay active, to keep the forum alive.

Lets hope for the best... 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: arulya


M doing watevr m able to do, Sana... Last week was busy, at work.. Today, i got the day-off frm work + I was missing diya and Ratan a lot, so wrote the first update of this ff today..

Hope ur other frens also stay active, to keep the forum alive.

Lets hope for the best... 👍🏼

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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Arulya 😃 heart attack dene ka plan hai kya ?
Looks like you are missing DiRa alot. I am also my friend 😭

In one word awesome! It was a complete package, no loopholes, straight story, no DrAmA and all.

First, Ratan said I am married : If Ratan had married Diya at teenage he would never tell any friend that he is married . But as he was 9 years old, he frankly told his friends that he is married. Child's are simple, honest ,angel. When they grow up environment forces them to become devil.

Ratan is ashamed : When you hit a bar and see a hot girl in the dancing floor and have full ability to lure her but than you remember, "I am married 🤔", you will feel ashamed of your self. It is truly natural. I loved Arulya that you showed that Ratan was silent. If you had wrote that he argued with his friends than it would look unrealistic.

London & night club : Thank you Arulya that you have shown that Diya couldn't sit for a moment and went to see him in London. And Ratan in night club with friends - yeh moment story pe char chan laga di !

Kaki Masa, beyond guiltiness : KM is not villain here i.e. you want to fast forward the track in to RoMaNcE 😉 Thanks again for not dragging ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: nancy505

Arulya 😃 heart attack dene ka plan hai kya ?

Looks like you are missing DiRa alot. I am also my friend 😭

In one word awesome! It was a complete package, no loopholes, straight story, no DrAmA and all.

First, Ratan said I am married : If Ratan had married Diya at teenage he would never tell any friend that he is married . But as he was 9 years old, he frankly told his friends that he is married. Child's are simple, honest ,angel. When they grow up environment forces them to become devil.

Ratan is ashamed : When you hit a bar and see a hot girl in the dancing floor and have full ability to lure her but than you remember, "I am married 🤔", you will feel ashamed of your self. It is truly natural. I loved Arulya that you showed that Ratan was silent. If you had wrote that he argued with his friends than it would look unrealistic.

London & night club : Thank you Arulya that you have shown that Diya couldn't sit for a moment and went to see him in London. And Ratan in night club with friends - yeh moment story pe char chan laga di !

Kaki Masa, beyond guiltiness : KM is not villain here i.e. you want to fast forward the track in to RoMaNcE 😉 Thanks again for not dragging ...


Thanks NANCY dear... Tumhe achcha laga, m really happy..😆😆😆
Hope u will like the next part as well...😊😊
Chalo, jaldi likhna shuru karti hun, and lets bring RATAN back to Surajgadh...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancy505

Arulya 😃 heart attack dene ka plan hai kya ?

Looks like you are missing DiRa alot. I am also my friend 😭

In one word awesome! It was a complete package, no loopholes, straight story, no DrAmA and all.

First, Ratan said I am married : If Ratan had married Diya at teenage he would never tell any friend that he is married . But as he was 9 years old, he frankly told his friends that he is married. Child's are simple, honest ,angel. When they grow up environment forces them to become devil.

Ratan is ashamed : When you hit a bar and see a hot girl in the dancing floor and have full ability to lure her but than you remember, "I am married 🤔", you will feel ashamed of your self. It is truly natural. I loved Arulya that you showed that Ratan was silent. If you had wrote that he argued with his friends than it would look unrealistic.

London & night club : Thank you Arulya that you have shown that Diya couldn't sit for a moment and went to see him in London. And Ratan in night club with friends - yeh moment story pe char chan laga di !

Kaki Masa, beyond guiltiness : KM is not villain here i.e. you want to fast forward the track in to RoMaNcE 😉 Thanks again for not dragging ...


reg bold part ..why ashamed that u r married at age 21..lots of people get married at that age even in USA..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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If someone falls in love and marries a girl at 21 he will not fell ashamed of his decision . And Ratans marriage was more like arrange marriage. Ratan married Diya at 9 age and now he is 21 and was not in touch with Diya for 12 years . In this scenario if he walks in to a club and see there is a girl but can not buy a drink to that girl because he remembers he is married and if he feels ashamed of his position, I don't blame him at all.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...awesomeliciously you blend both parts of ppk and rlhn so well😃🤗...Superbbb...Superbbb🤗👏👏...I am so excited and early waiting for next part... Please update soon. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: VARUNI2014


reg bold part ..why ashamed that u r married at age 21..lots of people get married at that age even in USA..


Vijaya, lets wait for second part, dear... Lets get to know Ratan's POV first.. we dont know his state of mind at present...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: nancy505

^^

If someone falls in love and marries a girl at 21 he will not fell ashamed of his decision . And Ratans marriage was more like arrange marriage. Ratan married Diya at 9 age and now he is 21 and was not in touch with Diya for 12 years . In this scenario if he walks in to a club and see there is a girl but can not buy a drink to that girl because he remembers he is married and if he feels ashamed of his position, I don't blame him at all.


Nancy dear, we will get to know abt Ratan's POV in next part... We will see wats going on in his mind and Wat exactly he thinks of his marriage...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Wow...awesomeliciously you blend both parts of ppk and rlhn so well😃🤗...Superbbb...Superbbb🤗👏👏...I am so excited and early waiting for next part... Please update soon. 😉


Thanks Nags🤗
U r always so encouraging...❤️
M happy that u liked my mixing and blending...😆😆
Dear, next part is getting ready and i hope i will able to post it v soon...😊

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