A DiRa OS- The Kiss To A New Beginning! - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Yaha humare Ratan sa ko kuch feelings hi nai aare hai itni hot aur sundar biwi ko dekh kar par aap ne toh jr DH tak soch liye tey๐Ÿ˜†


Ab agar woh dono nai soch rahe toh kisi na kisi ko toh sochna hi padega na pranu!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

@ mrs.weasley, Dira_Love, Surbhi, Pranu, AngelicNee..and all those who liked the OS...๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you sooo much . I am soo glad you guys liked it... ๐Ÿ˜† โญ๏ธ

@Pranu.. you said that the story in the show is taking some similar routes. I just saw all the new segment videos where Diya actually kissed him in his sleep, left a mark on his cheek...and he finds out in the morning about it too... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I also saw one segment in which she goes and applies the ointment on his wounds and instead, sits on his hand and hurts him some more...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I am absolutely loving these about to come tracks... and really excited for them.. But I am still not completely able to read into Ratan's mind yet. I know he has great affection for Diya and his affection borders to love... only he doesnt realize that... BUT why is he still adamant to divorce her? ๐Ÿ˜• Why is he not getting confused at all?.. ๐Ÿ˜•
About his kiss demand...I honestly believe in the saying that 90% "I was just joking" type of sayings are NOT jokes and they are just cover ups... And for a "mere friend" to think to kiss you as a joke even shows you have the desires to be kissed by him/her in your subconscious anyway... ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜† So Ratan is getting those feelings... OKAY..GOOD.. its high time waise bhi... MAGHER why is he still acting as if he has completely friend-zoned her? Why is he not getting baffled by his own mixture of feelings? Is he having any mixed feelings, or am I reading tooo much into it? ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
It seems our gadha has got me quite confused! ๐Ÿ˜† What do you guys think is happening? Please koi tou mujhe help kere... ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†


They are showing us that Ratan is not in love and it is true. I won't be surprised if he still says ki " ap ka case solve ho gaya ap ab yaha sa jaiya " Ratan alag hi level ka banda hai, he claims her as best friend and wife at the same time but I so not see any lovey dubby or yo-bro type thing. I am going to write a post about it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh mere Ayesha!
You write so beautiful. You are an awesome writer. When you told me to read your OS I started reading your OS in a tortoise speed and was thinking," kitna lamba hai yaar!" Slowly slowly when I came at the middle of the story your words glued me and forced me to imagine the whole thing in front of me. Believe me, I couldn't stopped my self visualizing every word of your story. Mark my word- you have the potentially to attract readers and if you continue your writing you can reach another level.

P.S. I want your autograph. I do not want to wait in the queue for your autograph in the future so I want your auto graph now. Pls tell me how can I get it?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

Ab agar woh dono nai soch rahe toh kisi na kisi ko toh sochna hi padega na pranu!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰


๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I agree with you mrs_weasley... (sorry i dont know your name)... There is physical AWARENESS on both sides.. I am not sure if its is exactly the same as sexual tension...because clearly Diya is an innocent...but Ratan is not showing any sign of tension like that... Which is really odd for a 21 year old chap...I mean.. come on..we all know how boys are... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† So is he masking it all? Or is he not having those feelings in the 1st place and we are probably reading too much into his actions and jokes?
Its true that he likes to touch her hands, hold her all the time...rock her..spin her...etc. And she doesnt mind his touches too.. She likes it. Chalo her situation is understandable ... but what is Ratan's situation.. iss sawal ka jawab abh Ratan hi de ga.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ager gadhay ko khud se hosh ajaye tou. By the looks of it...i feel Yash will make him realize his true feelings for Diya... Which i didnt want.. I wanted him to figure it all out himself... But kher... Junior Daata Hukum laanay k liye jo bhi kuch ker sakay, ker le tou accha hai... ๐Ÿ˜›
I havent read Meg Cabot. I would love to read her now... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancy505

Oh mere Ayesha!

You write so beautiful. You are an awesome writer. When you told me to read your OS I started reading your OS in a tortoise speed and was thinking," kitna lamba hai yaar!" Slowly slowly when I came at the middle of the story your words glued me and forced me to imagine the whole thing in front of me. Believe me, I couldn't stopped my self visualizing every word of your story. Mark my word- you have the potentially to attract readers and if you continue your writing you can reach another level.

P.S. I want your autograph. I do not want to wait in the queue for your autograph in the future so I want your auto graph now. Pls tell me how can I get it?


๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Thank you nancy buddy for such sweet words...
Kitna lamba hai yaar...i can totally understand.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜† For some unknown reason, I just cant write anything short... I always end up writing long long posts โ˜บ๏ธ I know the readers can easily think, "kitnaaa pakaaty hai yaar!" ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
The reason why I asked you specifically to read my OS was that I wanted to hear your precious views on our own cutie gadhay's mind boggling behaviour these days...esp.his kiss demand. If you noticed, my OS had Diya's point of view only... because Ratan ka pov. mujhe samajh nahi aarha hai.. ๐Ÿ˜› I think Ratan ko khud bhi samajh nahi aarha hai.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Autograph..mujhse? ๐Ÿ˜ณ Kia keh rahy ho yaar?.. I am just a learner... Basically i am an avid reader...and because I am a book reviewer too, I think I somehow ended up into writing also. But its not my forte...and i know it.. ๐Ÿ˜† But thank you very much for the kind words.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doc.love


๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I agree with you mrs_weasley... (sorry i dont know your name)... There is physical AWARENESS on both sides.. I am not sure if its is exactly the same as sexual tension...because clearly Diya is an innocent...but Ratan is not showing any sign of tension like that... Which is really odd for a 21 year old chap...I mean.. come on..we all know how boys are... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† So is he masking it all? Or is he not having those feelings in the 1st place and we are probably reading too much into his actions and jokes?
Its true that he likes to touch her hands, hold her all the time...rock her..spin her...etc. And she doesnt mind his touches too.. She likes it. Chalo her situation is understandable ... but what is Ratan's situation.. iss sawal ka jawab abh Ratan hi de ga.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ager gadhay ko khud se hosh ajaye tou. By the looks of it...i feel Yash will make him realize his true feelings for Diya... Which i didnt want.. I wanted him to figure it all out himself... But kher... Junior Daata Hukum laanay k liye jo bhi kuch ker sakay, ker le tou accha hai... ๐Ÿ˜›
I havent read Meg Cabot. I would love to read her now... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Meg Cabot is a YA author... I read her books when I was in 14 years old ... You might not like her now... Btw my name's Angel... ๐Ÿ˜† And I like how you rephrased the sexual tension bit to physical awareness... that's better suited to their situation... I couldn't find a better word for it so I had to write that... ๐Ÿ˜†

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