A DiRa OS- The Kiss To A New Beginning! - Page 2

Originally posted by: AngelicNee

sp beautifully written.. all emotions 😳

Originally posted by: DiRa_Love

It's so beautiful!!!😳

Awesome work yaar!!

Originally posted by: sanateju

This is amazing..hayyy diya's innocense and ratan's naughty behaviour..jusy loved it..hope we can see something lije this😛

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Thank you buddy.. 😃 You are Sravani, if I am not mistaken?

next i m thinking to write a LOVE OS on GhuMo... i.e. our very own Thakur Ghumiyo sa and Mohak ghar jamaii saa.. 😆😆 Kia khayaal hai?😉😛

Originally posted by: DiRa_Love

Haha yeah!! Omg!! Bhuvan sa pe OS😲 side mein mujhe bhi dal de na😉 please!!!😃

U r ayesha right??

Hahaha...sure sure... tumko zarur daalun gy.. 😆

Yes I am Ayesha.. 😊

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Awww.. coming from you,an awesome writer yourself, this is a big compliment😳😃.. I have read your fan fic and it was absolutely amazing.. 😊👏

I wanted to venture Ratan's feelings too.. I wanted him to question himself atleast as to why in the world did he even think about a kiss from Diya if she was just a friend and he has NO romantic feelings towards her? If it is all platonic, why is he giving mixed signals to Diya and to us also? Whats going on in his mind? Samajh nahi aarhy thy so I didnt include his pov ... 😆

Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

Thank you that you took the time to read my fanfic...😆

Also you are a wonderful writer yourself!!! ❤️

Your writing style is really vivid and absolutely amazing!!

About Ratan... Ughhh kahan se shuru kiya jaaye!? Woh apni feelings ke baare mein itna unaware hai ki mann toh karta hai ki ek thappad lagaaun aur collar se pakad kar bataaun ki he is extremely attracted to Diya...!!!He likes her so much and really wanted to kiss her!!!! His eyes reflected the desire that he had for Diya!! I'm quite sure that in his unconscious mind he has kissed Diya millions of times already !!! Kab samjhega yeh Gadha!!! Good thing though that Diya has realised her love for him... kam se kam dono mein se koi toh samajhdaar hai yahan ...😆

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Thank you soo much for your kind words about my writing style. It has been heavily influenced by two of my favrt.authors, Judith McNaught and Nora Roberts... Have you read them? 😊 I subconsciously pick up their way of story telling... 😳 But promise..no plagiarism... 😊

AAAH RATAN!!! I swear agher mery itni pretty and sexy si biwi hoty, I would have kissed her in reality by now a million times.. Yeh humara anmol ratan abhi tak bass iss sabko jokes mien le raha hai... facepalm! I want to strangle him too...and ask him, Dude! You are a boy,right? A whopping 21 year old whose hormones should be all raging and raving... WHY are you NOT taking a step ahead with your wife? Kuch tou kero yaar... Why is he not getting into the hanky panky mode? Also, since he should be thinking like a boy, why is he still thinking to separate himself from her? Physical attraction was his theory of love... If hes attracted to her, why isnt he thinking that he is probably in love with her? And its not only physical attraction, hes sooo emotionally connceted with her that I dont think he can live without her ever... Even if by some twist of fate, they get separated, I dont think he can spend one minute of his life without missing Diya... So iss shadeed walay ehsaas ko kia naam doon? And mien kyun dun,yeh Gadha kyun nahi de raha? 😆😕

Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

No I haven't read any of those authors unfortunately... I'm more of a JK Rowling, Meg Cabot, Paolo Coelho etc kind of a person... But now I will try to read those authors too... And I understand how sometimes some of the authors can influence our writing style 😆 Infact my style of writing is mostly inspired from Meg Cabot since I had been reading her books when I had started writingand discovered my interest in it... 😆 (No plagiarism here too)

About your points on Ratan... I agree with every single point that you made... He's a 21 year-old man who has returned from freaking London!! How can he not have any hormones!? He has a sexy woman sleeping in his bed every single day... she keeps falling on him all the time... they have some seriously hot sexual tension going on between them and yet if he feels nothing then the writers have their facts wrong and need to be a little realistic... No 21 year-old in his right mind would have missed a chance to kiss a girl so gorgeous...Why is a 21 year old man not turned on is beyond my understanding...

However if Ratan did wish to kiss her when he asked for it and if he backed off sensing her hesitation then it's good because we don't want a hero who does not respect his lady's boundaries or who uses any kind of pressure (since he teased her saying that he wanted the kiss as a fee for his work to get her out of the case) to get lucky with her... (and I know that he was just kidding(and wishing that she'd kiss him) and that he would never force her to do something she doesn't wish to do or is uncomfortable in doing)

But still now that Diya loves him I hope we get to see a turned on Ratan too... After all junior Daata Hukum chahiye yaa nahi Kesar Mahal walon ko?!