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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur


Are waah!! 😃
Harry potter toh khoon mein lagta hai 😉 😆
Same here!



Really!!?? wow... great to meet a fellow potterhead on the forum...😆😆 :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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^^
Same here same here!!
I just want to say one thing ab toh, ki tumhara writeup padhke my heart went wingardium leviosa 😆 😆

Isse bura kuch nhi keh skti thi main hahahahaha shit man. Sorry yeh ghatiya joke ke liye angel.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Angel,
I loved your fiction, but do take time for next part and do continue.
After reading your fiction I felt I should also start writing though my previous writing was a disaster one. That's why I am telling do continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancy505

Angel,

I loved your fiction, but do take time for next part and do continue.
After reading your fiction I felt I should also start writing though my previous writing was a disaster one. That's why I am telling do continue.

nancy u should write one!!!
im waiting for urs😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: DiRa_Love

nancy u should write one!!!

im waiting for urs😃


I have no consistency in my writing, after writing one I forget what I have wrote earlier. Mere sa to romance he nahi hota 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancy505



I have no consistency in my writing, after writing one I forget what I have wrote earlier. Mere sa to romance he nahi hota😆


Hahahahhaha nancy so cute yarr!
Tum start toh karo 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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One word -
W.O.N.D.E.R.F.U.L 👏
Pleaseee continue dearest Angel. ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm sorry for the delay but I will try my best to update tomorrow... Thank you everyone for your compliments and support... you guys are the best!! This is my first fanfic and your support and appreciate has boosted my morale a lot... Thank You so much all of you...😆😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I like the name "Bonding on the Beach ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 2

(The scene begins right from where it had been left off)

** Flashback **

"Diya hum dono Goa mein hain! Sabse pehle toh hum beach hi chalenge..." he said and then quickly added "agar aapki koi aur preference naa ho toh.." "That's actually a lovely idea Ratan. Let's leave in an hour then that way we'll have plenty of time to get ready.." Diya said with a grin as an idea popped into her head...

**End of Flashback**

Diya knew that if she wanted to execute her plan she would have to act very fast and very intelligently. However she also knew that when she'd be through with the preparations it would be totally worth it... Not only would it make it pretty clear to Ratan that she could be the girl of his dreams but also give them a chance to spend time together without much exertion (as she knew that by the end of the day both of them would be pretty tired as they had travelled a lot )


"Ek kaam kijiye Ratan aap pehle taiyaar ho jaiye. Aapke baad hum taiyaar ho jaayenge..." "Alright no problem." Saying so Ratan picked out a change of clothes to put on while going to the beach and stepped into the washroom. As soon as he did that Diya very quietly stepped out of the room and went to the hotel's gift shop to get what she wanted. Maybe it was sheer good luck or perhaps even the divine forces wanted her to succeed because she found exactly what she needed for herself. The minute she saw that white floral full length dress she knew that it was the perfect one for a beachside date... She quickly paid for it and rushed back into their room and luckily Ratan hadn't left the washroom yet 'Pata nahi Ratan itni der se andar kya kar rahein hain' she thought ' arre but accha hi hai ki nai nikle ab tak warna sau sawal puchte ki hum kahan gaye the aur kyu' .


As if on cue she heard Ratan opening the door and she hurriedly stuffed the dress under the blanket on the bed as that was the closest plac to hide it at that precise moment. Ratan stepped out wearing a white coloured half sleeved shirt paired with denim shorts and said "Main toh taiyaar ho gaya hun ab bas aap bhi ready ho jaaiye so that we can leave soon... Main ek kaam karta hu reception par jaake ek gaadi ki arrangement karta hu to drop us at the beach and then pick us up at 7o'clock." "Hume bas 15 minute hi lagne waale hain. Aap ek kaam kijiye car arrange karke reception par hi wait kar lijiyega hum seedhe wahin aapko milenge." "Thik hai but yaad se apne shades aur sunscreen carry kar lena wahan zaroorat pad sakti hai" "Okay"

As soon as Ratan left Diya got to work and freshened herself up and donned the dress that she had just purchased. It fit her so well that it almost felt as if it was made just for her. It hugged her curves perfectly and in a very classy and elegant way. She put on some light make-up highlighting her gorgeous eyes with a slightly smokey look and just a little dash of lip gloss. Luckily her hair didn't take much time as she left her long wavy tresses open. She also put on a pretty necklace to shadow the fact that the dress kinda had a low neckline(but not too low... ). She put on her best chappals (because we all know that heels can't be worn to a beach..;)) and just looked in the mirror once (and she was pleased with what she saw) before picking up her purse and shades and dashing out of the room.

She went straight to the reception where some feet away Ratan was standing and was engrossed with his phone. Apparently he had made the arrangements for their ride to the beach. She quickly went to the receptionist and made changes in Ratan's return arrangements and asked the lady to arrange for what Diya had in mind. "And I request you to not mention any of this to Mr. Ratan Maan Singh in case he calls up at the desk. Thank you." She said finally and rushed over to Ratan. He had his back towards her and had no idea that she stood right behind him. She cleared her throat and a very startled Ratan turned around.
*Ratan's POV*

It took him time to register the fact that his ex-pehredaar his Mr.India had actually worn a very lovely western dress. Also he didn't fail to notice that the dress showed off Diya's figure in a most flattering way and not to mention the low neckline. He looked at her as if he had seen her for the first time ever. Ever so slowly his eyes soaked in all of her and he checked her out for almost 2 whole minutes till they were interrupted by the waiter who came over to tell them that their taxi had arrived.
"Wha.. huh?" Ratan stuttered in a strangled voice without taking his eyes off Diya. And then he realised that he had been gawking at her with his mouth wide open and eyes completely dilated. He quickly snapped out of his trance, thanked the waiter and lead Diya out to the taxi.

Like a complete gentleman he opened the door for her and helped her climb ( though he knew all too well that Diya didn't needhis help) shut the door for her and entered the car from the other door and took a seat next to his wife. When he had finally processed the whole situation he thought ' Oh my God! Yeh Diya ko kya ho gaya hai. Aaj pehli baar mere saamne aisi dress pehni hai... but wow kya lag rahi hain. Meri koi bhi ex girlfriend iss dress ko itni regally nahi carry kar paati shayad. 30 year old toh kahin se nahi lag rahi hai yeh she's lookingso hot that she can easily pass for a 20-22 year old girl... Wait main yeh sab kyasoch raha hu.!? Okay Ratan calm down and first of all acknowledge how good she's looking.' He turned to Diya, smiled and said "Diya aaj aap bahot acchi lag rahi hai... That dress really suits you. I mean it."

*Diya's POV*

"Diya aaj aapbahot acchi lag rahi hai... That dress really suits you. I mean it" Diya smiled (and blushed slightly) and thought 'chalo aadha plan toh successful ho gaya. Bas ab aage bhi aise hi sabsahi ho jaaye'...

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that's the second part of the story... I had initially planned to make it a 3 part story but I feel that it will turn out to be better if I write it in 4 parts...
Anyways... Tell me in the comments if you like this story and if you have any suggestions tell me... Thank you so much 😆😆
Edited by mrs_weasley - 7 years ago

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