DiRa FF 'Bonding on the beach' PART 4 ON PAGE 5

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I know that the forum already has some pretty cool fanfictions about DiRa and since our forum is so supportive and no one trolls anyone for their little mistakes ithought about writing a little fanfiction and see if you like it... if you don't please don't be offended... If you feel it's redundant then it maybe so because of a coincidence but I promise that I have cooked up this story on my own...Thank you so much...
Now about the FF... I want to make it a sweet and fluffy scene where I want Ratan to see that Diya can be the kind of girl that he will be able to fall in love with... and also a little bit of jealousy... I've based the FF in this one week that they have gone to Goa to sort out their differences and give their marriage a shot...

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"Diya baisa aapko yeh samajna hoga ki Daata hukum abhi sirf 21 saal ke hain... aapki nazar mein jo ek ideal wife ki qualities hain woh shayad unki nazar mein old fashioned baatein ho sakti hain... aapko agar iss rishte ko successful banana hai toh aapko shaayad thoda adjust hona padega..." "Hum aapki baat samajhte hain Yash banna... Hum koshish karenge ki hum daata hukum ki expectations fufill karne ki koshish karenge... Let's see if this marriage can work out or not..." "Oh come on Diya Baisa I don't honestly think that you can't manage this! Aap ek sherni hai aur agar aapne thaan liya ki aap kuch karna chahti hain toh kisi mein itni taakat nahi ki aapko woh karne se rok de" Saying this Yash ended the Facetime call with Diya after giving her the necessary tips that she had called to ask for so that she could make the trip with Ratan successful in bridging the gap between them...
Diya and Ratan had just checked into a hotel in Goa and Ratan was in the washroom taking a shower after the long road trip...
"Chahe jo ho jaaye iss trip pe hum Ratan ko dikha ke rahenge ki hum unki unn 20-21 saal ki ex girlfriends se kuch kam nahi..." she thought... She went and stood by the huge window overlooking the beach and pondered about what should be her next step...
Meanwhile Ratan stepped out of the shower and saw Diya all lost in deep thought... he said " Diya itni seriously kya soch rahi hai aap...?" Diya was shaken out of her reverie and she stuttered "Ratan woh... woh.. kuch nai chodiye naa... yeh bataiye ki aapke aage ke plans kya hai?" "Diya hum dono Goa mein hain! Sabse pehle toh hum beach hi chalenge..." he said and then quickly added "agar aapki koi aur preference naa ho toh.." "That's actually a lovely idea Ratan. Let's leave in an hour then that way we'll have plenty of time to get ready.." Diya said with a grin as an idea popped into her head...
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TO BE CONTINUED...


So how was it?? please leave your suggestions and comments... 😆 Should I continue or drop it?? And if anyone didn't like it please leave suggestions so that if I can improve... Thank you so much...

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DiRa_Love thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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definitely continue yaar!! this is awesome one!!
but do give a name to this amazing work!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: DiRa_Love

definitely continue yaar!! this is awesome one!!

but do give a name to this amazing work!!

thank you so much..😆 and I'll give it a name as soon as I come up with one...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Do continue. Am liking it! 😉
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Originally posted by: NK1865

Do continue. Am liking it! 😉

Thank you so much 😆😆
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Interesting, do continue soon. 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Interesting, do continue soon. 👍🏼

Thank you 😆
I will try to update by the evening...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is so gooodd! Really nice, and I am being very honest here.
Loved your writing till now, I can tell that you are a pretty good one and I would love to read it further.
Diya will surprise ratan in a good way, yayy Haha I am glad you chose this.
Also as sravani said, do give it a name 😊
And continue sooonn, yeh weekend bearable banado hamara 😆 😉

Btw May I know your name? Mrs_weasley! Potterhead are you?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

This is so gooodd! Really nice, and I am being very honest here.
Loved your writing till now, I can tell that you are a pretty good one and I would love to read it further.
Diya will surprise ratan in a good way, yayy Haha I am glad you chose this.
Also as sravani said, do give it a name 😊
And continue sooonn, yeh weekend bearable banado hamara 😆 😉

Btw May I know your name? Mrs_weasley! Potterhead are you?

Aww.. thank you so so much 😆 and yes to answer your question I am a huge huge potterhead ... Harry potter is my life... My name is Angel
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Originally posted by: mrs_weasley


Aww.. thank you so so much😆 and yes to answer your question I am a huge huge potterhead ... Harry potter is my life... My name is Angel


Are waah!! 😃
Harry potter toh khoon mein lagta hai 😉 😆
Same here!

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