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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is awesome!!! 👏 👏
Ananya's emotions were so perfectly potrayed!!! Haaay! Dil le gayi tum mera!!!! ❤️

And don't even ask whether you should continue or not!! Obviously you should... and update soon!!!

I would love to see how this turns up! *fingers crossed*
I am waiting... Continue soon yaar!!!! 😃 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

please continue
thanks for pm

I will continue soon
No need to thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NanSi1802

This is awesome!!! 👏 👏

Ananya's emotions were so perfectly potrayed!!! Haaay! Dil le gayi tum mera!!!! ❤️

And don't even ask whether you should continue or not!! Obviously you should... and update soon!!!

I would love to see how this turns up! *fingers crossed*
I am waiting... Continue soon yaar!!!! 😃 😃

Thankyou so much dear
I will surely continue soon
I hope you will like the way that how the story will turn up
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Part 2
Ananya started pouring her heart out. She started talking about everything she wants to talk to anyone.

A- Kya, kya samajhte hai aap apne aapko itni takleef mat dijiye aap mujhe plz kyu kar rahe hai aap aisa. Kya kiya hai maine. Pehle mere itne kareeb aa gaye ki main aapse pyaar karne lagi lekin jab pyaar ka ehsaas hua to pata chala ki aap mujhse itne dur ho ki main aap tak pahuch bhi nahi sakti hoon. (she started crying )ye duri mujhse sahi nahi ja rahi hai, maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main kisi ko is had tak pyaar karti sakti hu ki ab mujhe uske saath ki itni zaroorat hai ki uske bina main reh nahi paa rahi hu. (she started crying bitterly )8 saalo se aapki hero worshipping kar rahi hu, 8 saalo se aapka intezaar kar rahi hu main, lekin jab aapko mili to aisa laga jaise ye sirf worship ya intezaar nahi balki mera aapke liye pyaar hai jo in saalo mein itna bad gaya ki ab main apne pyaar ke liye puri duniya se lad rahi hu, aapke pyaar ne itna andha bana diya hai mujhe ki na mujhe apne best friend Ronnie ka dard dikhta hai aur na apni childhood friend Richa ki concern (she started shouting )and I want to know that why the hell this is happening to me, kyu kyu ho raha hai mere saath aisa, aakhir kyu.

She fell down on her knees and started crying more bitterly. She was taking out all her frustration and anger in that cry. But she was unaware of one thing, one great thing that almighty had arranged for her happiness, her well being. She was unaware that one person had heard whatever she said. And the person who had heard everything was not believing anything. He was not believing that what he wanted to hear, he actually hears that only. He was in daze when he heard her angry love confession. But he came out of his world when he saw his angel crying bitterly, sitting on her knees. He looked at her lovingly, he decided that he will not give any more pain to this angel who came in his life and took away all his pain from which he was suffering.

He went upto her taking slow step, she was still crying. And he knows what he have to do to stop her from crying. He put his one hand on her shoulder.

Ananya heart beat increased as she sensed someone hand on her shoulder, she turned her head and saw the man who had taken control over her life. She was shocked to see him and she was scared to think also that Kabir had heard everything what she said. And if he had listened everything that she said what will be his reaction. She was in a state where no one can help her except him. But looking at him she was not able to name the feeling she was seeing in his eyes. She was very shocked about all this that only one word came out from her mouth

A- Kabir Sir...

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So this is the 2nd part and 3Rd part will be the last one
I will post it tonight or tomorrow
Hope you all liked it
Edited by vssdp - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Emotional chapter
Poor ananya was so helpless when there was no 1 to understand her
Ronnie was angry & hurt that ananya didn't accept his proposal
Richa was forcing ananya to accept Ronnie & forget abt kabir
But kabir wasn't there to support ananya
Ananya outburst was really emotional
Thank god kabir heard everything what she said
Now what he will do?
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Emotional kar dia
Ananya kitni frustrated thi Sab chizo ko le kar
Good that kabir heard everything
PlZzz continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Hi
The up is really good
So Ananya is crying but kabir heard her confession
Yipee
Plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesomeee!!! very nice update Vaishu...cont soon dear...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
awesum it is
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nice part
But part 1 is same a reporters epi
Let's see what stores in other parts
Love to see some thing different

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