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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Woww part ,2 was awsm
Kabir NE sab suna
Now kuchh alag hoga
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Aww..!!thank god kabir ne sunliya.plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
OMG!!!!
This is what I was talking about...!!!👏
Now I feel, the forum is back with a bang, because again writers have started to leave updates at the most crucial endings where the readers are left breathless with their hearts beating at a supersonic speed!!

Believe me, when Ananya said "Kabir Sir..." and the update ended, I went, "Oh man!!! This is just not done!"

Coming to the update, it was pure love man! ❤️
The way Ananya vented out her vexation, was so real that for a moment, I felt as helpless as Ananya!
And we are all aware of the fact how awesome a writer you are, I am sure you will cast your spell with the last update!!!

Way to go, yaar!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: vssdp

Part 2
Ananya started pouring her heart out. She started talking about everything she wants to talk to anyone.

A- Kya, kya samajhte hai aap apne aapko itni takleef mat dijiye aap mujhe plz kyu kar rahe hai aap aisa. Kya kiya hai maine. Pehle mere itne kareeb aa gaye ki main aapse pyaar karne lagi lekin jab pyaar ka ehsaas hua to pata chala ki aap mujhse itne dur ho ki main aap tak pahuch bhi nahi sakti hoon. (she started crying )ye duri mujhse sahi nahi ja rahi hai, maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main kisi ko is had tak pyaar karti sakti hu ki ab mujhe uske saath ki itni zaroorat hai ki uske bina main reh nahi paa rahi hu. (she started crying bitterly )8 saalo se aapki hero worshipping kar rahi hu, 8 saalo se aapka intezaar kar rahi hu main, lekin jab aapko mili to aisa laga jaise ye sirf worship ya intezaar nahi balki mera aapke liye pyaar hai jo in saalo mein itna bad gaya ki ab main apne pyaar ke liye puri duniya se lad rahi hu, aapke pyaar ne itna andha bana diya hai mujhe ki na mujhe apne best friend Ronnie ka dard dikhta hai aur na apni childhood friend Richa ki concern (she started shouting )and I want to know that why the hell this is happening to me, kyu kyu ho raha hai mere saath aisa, aakhir kyu.


I read re-read and again read this part. What a wonderful emotional passionate heartfelt breakdown by Ananya. Too good. Kabir's state of mind was also penned down well.
Now eagarly waiting for the final punch.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Emotional chapter

Poor ananya was so helpless when there was no 1 to understand her
Ronnie was angry & hurt that ananya didn't accept his proposal
Richa was forcing ananya to accept Ronnie & forget abt kabir
But kabir wasn't there to support ananya
Ananya outburst was really emotional
Thank god kabir heard everything what she said
Now what he will do?
Continue plz

Thankyou so much dear
Ya I have tried to show Ananya's state at that time
Hope I am successful in showing
You will get to know no what is Kabir going to do in next part
Hope you will like it
I will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: siramani

Emotional kar dia

Ananya kitni frustrated thi Sab chizo ko le kar
Good that kabir heard everything
PlZzz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Hahaha emotional hone ke liye thanks
I will continue soon
No need to thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

Hi

The up is really good
So Ananya is crying but kabir heard her confession
Yipee
Plz cont soon and pm me

Thankyou so much dear
Ya Kabir heard what all Ananya said
I will continue soon and I will surely pm you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sampa79

Nice emotional chap

Thankyou so much 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Kaushiki

Awesomeee!!! very nice update Vaishu...cont soon dear...😃

Thankyou so much Kaushi
I will continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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