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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chapter matlab no words what to say👏
And u r such a tease matlab tumhe maza aata hai humaari curisioty badane me
par dheere dheere hi sahi par story bohot interesting ho rahi and i am feeling that shreya told this lead to regina in order to get kabir but didn't get that if regina was lying abher mother's illness or telling truth... and ya i didnt get who is this Rajpal aur kahan se tapaka ye beech ki story main... And Kabir is trying hard to remember what happened last night and last part is telling me to think again and again about it.
So overalll the chapter damdaar and i was feeling like am watching reporters itself

PS: Shiny di waise isme romance waghara bhi hai ya sirf romanch hi hai aapke dimaag main kyunki mujhe ye story bohot serious lag rahi hai toh is phase ke baad kuch romance waghera likh dijiyega😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chapter matlab no words what to say👏
And u r such a tease matlab tumhe maza aata hai humaari curisioty badane me
par dheere dheere hi sahi par story bohot interesting ho rahi and i am feeling that shreya told this lead to regina in order to get kabir but didn't get that if regina was lying abher mother's illness or telling truth... and ya i didnt get who is this Rajpal aur kahan se tapaka ye beech ki story main... And Kabir is trying hard to remember what happened last night and last part is telling me to think again and again about it.
So overalll the chapter was damdaar and i was feeling like am watching reporters itself

PS: Shiny di waise isme romance waghara bhi hai ya sirf romanch hi hai aapke dimaag main kyunki mujhe ye story bohot serious lag rahi hai toh is phase ke baad kuch romance waghera likh dijiyega😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello One man army,😊

Firstly I am really really sorry for the late comment, but I was very very busy from last 2 days...

but here I am with my comment...(lol)😆

first of all I can't see Kabir in this condition like his body is aching with pain, blood and all but I have to say this yaar, Mr. Kabir Sharma is so so sooo much intelligent ...the man is drugged but still his mind is working with full force...very intelligent Kabir Sir...😳

Awww...Kabir's imagination is right...Even I am agree with Ananya, Mr. Sharma please never compare Ananya with Shreya...😲


God, look I guessed right. I always sensed this Regina is not a trustworthy person, from chapter 1 I found her weird ... I smelled something fishy...and my doubt was cleared on the previous update that time I really thought that maybe she is also involved with Shreya...you know crime partners types thing...Or maybe she has her own plans n plotting for her career...whatever it is but I knew Regina isn't good for Ananya...🤢

Ananya for god's sake...open your eyes and sense what is happening around you and don't trust that cat(no actually not cat, I love cats and found them cute) Regina Marcus anymore... this time please don't behave impulsive n immature...you are a smart journalist so please use your brain Ananya...

Inspector Khurana yes please...Kabir is alive and he needs help so please search for our astute Editor-in-chief...


And Shreya that bloody bitch,🤬😡 If I get a chance I would like to murder her...(just kidding), I don't believe in violence...non-violence is one of the thing humans should practice...😊


Now I think Kabir didn't slap Ananya...this is what Shreya is saying and we were believing but I don't think that Kabir can slap Ananya...no never...


And well well...what to say about this guy, Manav...you are just amazing Manav, he stole the whole show(here your update) at last...I knew it, Manav has manavta inside his heart and we all can see this when it needs...great Manav Bhai...I expected this from your side, itni help toh banti hai yaar...👍🏼😉

I hope Ronnie and Richa will help Ananya in future, guys please find Kabir...And I am still waiting to see my sexy astute Mr. Kabir Sharma, I know he will be back with the bang...


One man army, I have no words left in my dictionary to praise your writing darling...👏

it feels so much thrilling and I loved this part so so much...finally some suspense was revealed in this episode(honestly I am feeling like I am watching Reporters)...⭐️and I am eagerly waiting for your next update...😃



Do I need to say it that you are a wonderful writer and your writing is getting better n better day by day...❤️



Merry Christmas to you Shiny Baby...have fun... lots of kisses on your way... with a big tight hug...🤗🤗
Edited by cuteprateeksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kavikas

Sorry shiny im not able to comment on ur ff fast.. par bhai comment karne ki zaroorat kya hai u r beyond words!!!

First the idea bhai sahab tumhare dimaag ke ghodhe bahut dohtein hai!! and thats what makes shiny special😉
Second ur mind blowing way of expressing!! Lov u for that!!

Update soon!

That's very sweet of you kavika !!! You always manage to make me so happy with your comments!! Its absolutely fine.. The very fact that your reading my ff means alot dear!! Thankyou so much dear!! Will surely try to update soon... Assignments are left to be completed 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Choclate...


Amazing chapter matlab no words what to say👏
And u r such a tease matlab tumhe maza aata hai humaari curisioty badane me
par dheere dheere hi sahi par story bohot interesting ho rahi and i am feeling that shreya told this lead to regina in order to get kabir but didn't get that if regina was lying abher mother's illness or telling truth... and ya i didnt get who is this Rajpal aur kahan se tapaka ye beech ki story main... And Kabir is trying hard to remember what happened last night and last part is telling me to think again and again about it.
So overalll the chapter damdaar and i was feeling like am watching reporters itself

PS: Shiny di waise isme romance waghara bhi hai ya sirf romanch hi hai aapke dimaag main kyunki mujhe ye story bohot serious lag rahi hai toh is phase ke baad kuch romance waghera likh dijiyega😆

Aww thank you!! Lols you will know how much fun it is when you start penning down !! Trust me !! It brightness the experience of writing!!

Read more to know abt Regina !! And ya rajpal was an eyewitness... His shop was present in the road that lead to ronara forest.. So during the process of investigation he shares his observation with kurana !! ( he was sure abt the people who did it becz he himself was a gangster years back)
Ya Kabir has started to remember what happened.. But due to the trauma and drugs he thinks he is dreaming them...

That means a lot ... Thankyou!!

Lols !!! I am really not good at romance... !! But keep reading !! Romanch katam hone do... Fir romance ayega !!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteprateeksha

Hello One man army,😊


Firstly I am really really sorry for the late comment, but I was very very busy from last 2 days...

but here I am with my comment...(lol)😆

first of all I can't see Kabir in this condition like his body is aching with pain, blood and all but I have to say this yaar, Mr. Kabir Sharma is so so sooo much intelligent ...the man is drugged but still his mind is working with full force...very intelligent Kabir Sir...😳

Awww...Kabir's imagination is right...Even I am agree with Ananya, Mr. Sharma please never compare Ananya with Shreya...😲


God, look I guessed right. I always sensed this Regina is not a trustworthy person, from chapter 1 I found her weird ... I smelled something fishy...and my doubt was cleared on the previous update that time I really thought that maybe she is also involved with Shreya...you know crime partners types thing...Or maybe she has her own plans n plotting for her career...whatever it is but I knew Regina isn't good for Ananya...🤢

Ananya for god's sake...open your eyes and sense what is happening around you and don't trust that cat(no actually not cat, I love cats and found them cute) Regina Marcus anymore... this time please don't behave impulsive n immature...you are a smart journalist so please use your brain Ananya...

Inspector Khurana yes please...Kabir is alive and he needs help so please search for our astute Editor-in-chief...


And Shreya that bloody bitch,🤬😡 If I get a chance I would like to murder her...(just kidding), I don't believe in violence...non-violence is one of the thing humans should practice...😊


Now I think Kabir didn't slap Ananya...this is what Shreya is saying and we were believing but I don't think that Kabir can slap Ananya...no never...


And well well...what to say about this guy, Manav...you are just amazing Manav, he stole the whole show(here your update) at last...I knew it, Manav has manavta inside his heart and we all can see this when it needs...great Manav Bhai...I expected this from your side, itni help toh banti hai yaar...👍🏼😉

I hope Ronnie and Richa will help Ananya in future, guys please find Kabir...And I am still waiting to see my sexy astute Mr. Kabir Sharma, I know he will be back with the bang...


One man army, I have no words left in my dictionary to praise your writing darling...👏

it feels so much thrilling and I loved this part so so much...finally some suspense was revealed in this episode(honestly I am feeling like I am watching Reporters)...⭐️and I am eagerly waiting for your next update...😃



Do I need to say it that you are a wonderful writer and your writing is getting better n better day by day...❤️



Merry Christmas to you Shiny Baby...have fun... lots of kisses on your way... with a big tight hug...🤗🤗



Pari My Pari!!
Don't say sorry love !! This Fan fiction is here to stay so take ur time baby!!

Aww.. Ya true ... Ut hurts being a fan gal !! Lols ya Mr.Sharma is a grey matter Alfa !!

You will know what really is the thing in the next chapter or so.. !!

Ya .
but you cant blame Ananya because Kabir has many rivals and its obvious that she might be suspecting a fowl play from them.. And not Shreya or someone els !! But now lets see what happens!!

Kurana has realised it.. But I hope he isn't too late !!

Aww Pari ur so cute !! But ur right Non violence is the thing !!

Manav!!! He is one guy or to say one antagonist who I just love !! I really don't know why!! I think its becz of sunny Hinduja and his style of acting.. He aced it man!! Toatally!! And I really wanted to give him a prominent role in my FF!! But in his style !! 😛

Hoping the same too baby!!

Aww baby thankyou sooo much !! Means a lot !; love you!!

Merry Christmas to you too love !!

Love hugs and kisses to you Pari !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
i know i am late this time too... sorry
i think Shreya's drugs are exactly like her... CHEAP..
Shreya is thinking that with the help of drugs Kabir uska ho jayega.. how idiot she is...
she is forgetting the major fact that he is THE KABIR SHARMA... kisibhi drugs ka uspe koi asar nahin hoga...

Ananya should dig more about Regina now.. her receptionist will surely help her..
she can't trust Regina now.. being a stupid reporter of Kabir.. she should start her reportergiri now..
Use uske depression se jaldi bahar aana hoga.. everyone is there for help her...
Ronnie, Richa, Khalid, Khurana... and most important Manav Bhai..

Whenever Kabirsahab is in any problem Manav bhai would always be there to help him by his own way... After Kabir i loved the character of Manav Gupta most... he has his own style... he is not at all a bad guy for me.. i know he will definitely help Ananya.. waise he already started with it.. he has given her most important clue... Jag ja Ananya aur Aankhe khuli rakh... she has already taken lot of time for understand actual situation... now speed up.. Kabir needs you.

and last but not the least.. our honorable writer miss Shiny.. you are giving me best Indian television experience through this FF... i am experiencing many emotions while reading each and every update.. i know i am repeating this( but kya karu lack of words...) truly you are an exceptional writer..
lots of love and hugs...🤗🤗

waiting for next...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good1 👏...
hope like always, Kabir is able to solve the mystery first 😊😊...& like him I am also getting doubtful if really, 3 years have passed 😛😆 may be its just 3 weeks or 3 months 😛😆...in either case, all the best to Kabir 👍🏼...hope he plans out a perfect, fool proof plan & nail down the woman & give her "Sheh & Maat" in her own set up😆😆😆 afterall Mr. Sharma ko *shatranj khelne ka kafi tajurba hai*
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrumi

i know i am late this time too... sorry

i think Shreya's drugs are exactly like her... CHEAP..
Shreya is thinking that with the help of drugs Kabir uska ho jayega.. how idiot she is...
she is forgetting the major fact that he is THE KABIR SHARMA... kisibhi drugs ka uspe koi asar nahin hoga...

Ananya should dig more about Regina now.. her receptionist will surely help her..
she can't trust Regina now.. being a stupid reporter of Kabir.. she should start her reportergiri now..
Use uske depression se jaldi bahar aana hoga.. everyone is there for help her...
Ronnie, Richa, Khalid, Khurana... and most important Manav Bhai..

Whenever Kabirsahab is in any problem Manav bhai would always be there to help him by his own way... After Kabir i loved the character of Manav Gupta most... he has his own style... he is not at all a bad guy for me.. i know he will definitely help Ananya.. waise he already started with it.. he has given her most important clue... Jag ja Ananya aur Aankhe khuli rakh... she has already taken lot of time for understand actual situation... now speed up.. Kabir needs you.

and last but not the least.. our honorable writer miss Shiny.. you are giving me best Indian television experience through this FF... i am experiencing many emotions while reading each and every update.. i know i am repeating this( but kya karu lack of words...) truly you are an exceptional writer..
lots of love and hugs...🤗🤗

waiting for next...😊

Its absolutely fine dear!!
Lols so true !! She keeps forgetting who her EX husband is and why he became her EX!! And why he moved on !!
Yes.. Its high time for Ananya to act... Now she knows that Kabir isn't angry and he has been abducted ... So she must think quick before its too late !!
Girl give me a high five !! Manav is one man I just love !! Lols I don't know why.. There is something really special and wicked in him !! And sunny is one hell of an actor !! Adore him so much ;;

Lols... When I read that line I was really smiling like hell!! That's really really sweet of you!! It means alot !!! Thankyou so much yar !!
Love and hugs to you too sweetie!!
Edited by shinyshajil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Good1👏...
hope like always, Kabir is able to solve the mystery first 😊😊...& like him I am also getting doubtful if really, 3 years have passed 😛😆 may be its just 3 weeks or 3 months 😛😆...in either case, all the best to Kabir 👍🏼...hope he plans out a perfect, fool proof plan & nail down the woman & give her "Sheh & Maat" in her own set up😆😆😆 afterall Mr. Sharma ko *shatranj khelne ka kafi tajurba hai*

Aww Purnima.. Thankyou so much!! Ya hoping for the same.. Yes.. Its really been only 3days since Kabir was abducted.. But Shreya lies to him saying that he was in coma for 3years .. Lols ya hope he does soon!!
Love and hugs

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