Few OS and FF: ***KABEER AND ANANYA---THE WAIT*** (COMPLETED)

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Magar1992

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Itne jaldi khatm ho gya
its nice, awsome
thank u for pm

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Sokool27
wow. ..
This update is like a sequel of "First meeting".
Maza aagaya!! 😊

You wanted punishment part right? And I promised you that you'll get it 😊 Here you are, enjoy it! 😊

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Aalina.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Always love KaYa😳 together...Do not matter whether they r fighting, arguing or in love.thank u for the update n pm😊😊

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: aalinaghosh
Always love KaYa😳 together...Do not matter whether they r fighting, arguing or in love.thank u for the update n pm😊😊

Yeah right. I can't imagine that someone can even think of hating them. Even though I have examples like Malvika😡😉😆

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Aalina.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

Yeah right. I can't imagine that someone can even think of hating them. Even though I have examples like Malvika😡😉😆

Malvika is frm different planet😆😆😆...nowadays she is in a trauma...but still 😡😡

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shinyshajil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Wow really nice !! Read I in one go and couldn't stop smiling !!! Lovely !! Pls update soon!!!

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: shinyshajil
Wow really nice !! Read I in one go and couldn't stop smiling !!! Lovely !! Pls update soon!!!

Thank you 😊 Glad it made you smile. 😊 I succeeded in making you to smile. 😊

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
hi
the up is really good so u made it a squeal to ur first ff the first meeting
i liked the connection the bridge u used in it
so Annaya is asking Kabir when he gave the punishment of not talking to each other then y he called her taking the excuse of the interview
Plz cont soon and pm me

Yup 'The Wait' is indeed a continuation of 'The First Meeting' I hope you'll enjoy it 😊

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

PART 6:

Placing the spoon back to place quickly, Kabeer takes his right hand towards her face to rub the tears off, but halts when he is few inches away from feeling her skin. Closing his eyes, he shakes his head, clearing his head, which is clouded with too much emotions, he places his hand back on the table and orders Ananya "aansu poncho".

They both stare at each other. Her red eyes, starts melting Kabeer's heart as the seconds

pass by, inch by inch. "Ananya maine kaha aansu poncho" he scolds more to himself for

losing control over his emotions after seeing her tears, than to her. Although she rubs off the tears but she doesn't stop crying, it wasn't in her control.

Getting angry Kabeer gets up and reaches to Ananya and taking her hand, he pulls her until they reach an empty room of the restaurant, meant for resting. Pushing her, so that her back touches the wall, Kabeer places his hands on her either side, so that he is hovering her."Ananya main tumhe nahi chunga, par iska matlab yeh nahi ki tumhe main rone ki permission de raha hoon. Apne aansu pohcho abhi, warna..." he scolds her.

"Warna?" Ananya manages to ask with her trembling voice, concentrating on his eyes with her red eyes. Without completing the line, he bends a bit more towards her, noticing that she is not protesting this time, a smile comes to his lips, and he relaxes. Then he blows away her tendril of hair, on her face. The slight blow makes her whole body to shiver but simultaneously it also turns her blood hot, out of excessive shyness. This contrasting feeling is new to her and she enjoys it immensely. Her heartbeat stops all together. This diverts her mind and hence results in ending up her cry. Then he whispers into her ear "dekha ho gayi na chup. Aur dekho maine chua bhi nahi tumhe". Listening to his words, she blushes and smiles. As a result he smiles back.

"Mujhse aur wait nahi ho raha Ananya. Hum kab baat kar payenge? Kya kahungi main

tujhse? Aunty se to wada le lia hai ki ki wo tujhse kuch na kahein, kyunki main khud tujhe sub kuch batana chahti hun, par ab soch rahi hoon ki kya maine theek kia aunty se promise lekar? Agar tujhe abhi pata lag jata aunty se to shayad abhi hum phone par baat kar rahe hotey. Shayad purani yaadein taza kar rahe hotey. Mujhse aur nahi raha ja raha" says Richato herself, laying on her bed.

"Bus main aur nahi kha paungi" says Ananya."Arey aapne abhi tak khaya hi kya hai Miss Kasyap". As soon as Ananya hears him calling her Miss Kashyap, a naughty idea strikes her. "Mera pet bhar gaya hai. Kya yeh bhi main apne punishments ke list mein add karun ki mujhe tab tak khatey rehna hoga jab tak aap mujhe rukne ka order nahi dete, Mr. Sharma?"

As soon as Kabeer hears the word Mr.Sharma, he raises an eyebrow, fully impressed by her forwardness. "Mr. Sh..." he says and shakes his head, thinking 'what should I do to her?' "Apko nahi lagta Miss Kashyap ki aap kuch zada hi free ho gayi hain mere saath inn kuch palon mein" says Kabeer, emphasizing on 'Miss'. Smiling they both concentrate on their food.

Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago