KaYa TS - No one messes with my girl!**complete - Last Part on Page 7* - Page 4

• Malvika hitting her exactly where it would hurt
• Him immediately sensing something was wrong
• The conversation with Tarini - that was perfect - showing him what it was like from Ananya's perspective and then coaching him ke bolna zaruri hota hai - must be overwhelming for Ananya to be loved by a man like him - all her inscurities will come up
• Coaxing her with ice cream and Ananya's antics
• The best part telling her about his past - a synopsis yes but all the meat was there - "Beat his Bosses" - didn't see that coming
• Would love to see how he sets Malvika straigh
  

Originally posted by: eternalasha

Loved it Mish - May I call you that? - I am Sneha btw

I could really see this happening

• Malvika hitting her exactly where it would hurt
• Him immediately sensing something was wrong
• The conversation with Tarini - that was perfect - showing him what it was like from Ananya's perspective and then coaching him ke bolna zaruri hota hai - must be overwhelming for Ananya to be loved by a man like him - all her inscurities will come up
• Coaxing her with ice cream and Ananya's antics
• The best part telling her about his past - a synopsis yes but all the meat was there - "Beat his Bosses" - didn't see that coming
• Would love to see how he sets Malvika straigh
  

Itni Chhoti story mein itna kuchh - Love the way you write

- Loved how

Originally posted by: aash2302

Mish you need to update a part three as well for this amazing fic of yours😳

You are an amazing amazingly talented writer...I have always been a crazy fan of your writing and you know that right????

Coming to the story

The first part was amazing the way kabir understood that somebody told something to ananya...

Second part was toh mind bloblowing tarini's explaina too to kabir was very good . I'm glad tahy kabir has got such an amazing frnd in tarini

Love

Aashritha

Originally posted by: krazykaju

superb. Tarini darling as always gave perfect advice to him. and KAYA'S phone convo for ice cream was so cute. ananya told him everything and how smoothly he made her understand his pov was amazing. it will be intrestng to see how he deals with malvika. awsome. update soon. keep smiling

'Ice cream khaane chalogi, Miss Kashyap!

'' Phir Miss. Kashyap! Magar aap toh ice cream khaate nahn'

'Ananya tumhari tarah har roz ice cream nahn khata. Im not allergic to it , I do occasionally enjoy an ice cream' - he smiled to himself ready for her tirade

'What nonsense! I don't eat an ice cream daily. May be weekly magar har roz nhan khaati. Waise achanak se ice cream?'
' Ananya tumne toh ice cream khana meri 9 baje ki bulletin bana di. Ab man kar raha hai ice cream ka.

I'd really like to see such scenes in the coming week.. Keeping my hands crossed but thanks for including such natural n sweet dialogues and instances in this TS...

Rahi baat Malvika ki usko kal main theek karta hun'

Love the zeal in Kabir.. Sach mein bohot ziidi hain... Agar kuch karna hain to karke hi rehega... I actually love the way he makes Khalid dance on his finger tips i am scared Malvika also will get to that position🤣

She knew this tone. He had made up his mind. She just gave him a reassuring nod, not wanting to be in Malvika's place tomorrow!

🤣🤣🤣