TS: A Simple Dinner! (Not) *Part 2 Updated* Page 1 (21/6/15)

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ShadowHearts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Omg! 🤪
I'm Going Mad Imagining KaYa!
It was awesome! 😳
Update soon!!!

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow very sweet update
Waiting to read more from ur side.

Love and prayer
Yogini

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praneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

it was so awesome

update soonest

pm me if you can

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Maria_TR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

You know what.. Reading THIS, not ONCE did I feel that I was reading an imaginary work.. THIS surely was one of the 'few' pieces of fiction that DID NOT fail to maintain the character.. I felt that this all was happening in real.. And TRUST me, I LOVED reading this a lot.. Officially a fan of your work now..🤗

Each and EVERY scene, from the KKN office to Kabir inviting her for dinner, his gesture towards Ananya's mom, though light yet KaYa's VERY POWERFUL encounters, it all touched my heart..

I myself felt butterflies in my stomach reading it and mind you, this happens rarely with me..😆

Kabir in towel..😲☺️ Poor Ananya, kaise control kiya?😆 That was sheer torture.. If just seeing him in a towel was not enought, she fell into his arms in that condition.. Kya Kahoon main?☺️

Then that Paani Puri scene.. Did he actually taste that water from her lips?☺️ God! My heart is running on a marathon..😆

Seriously Yaar, you must continue writing more.. 🤗

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Sagi97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Gosh...that was too good. Your descriptive powers are amazing. The whole scene was lke being enacted right in front of me.

Kabir miya in a towel? Ananya to gayi. Shayad saath main me too.

And a takkar: towel khul jayega...shameless of me!

Pani puri yummy...Ananya enjyoing it and Kabir indulging her! I just wish this would be there in the serial. ANd Kaya hug! hope it comes in reel life...

Please update soon. Nahi kiya to joothe padenge.

Sagi

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ssss97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Very beautiful. Nice to see kabir @ ease.Pani puri idea was really nice.

Romantic one. Thanks for posting.

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Afia Aisf Mahmood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Now I wanna eat pani puri 😆

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LaviDovey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

awsome shot.
love it.
how finely kabir saved his friend
and Trisha...
teaching everyone how to eat...
👏
the sms part was really cute.
kabir's gift for her mom was so sweet.

and the towel and syrup scene was amazingly adorable and marvellous.
beautiful, cute, sweet.
do write more.
u write amazingly good.
lots of love.