TS: A Simple Dinner! (Not) *Part 2 Updated* Page 1 (21/6/15)

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

U are expecting joote after such wonderful piece 👏 ⭐️ ...
I was wondering why dinner is simple(not) 😆 ...how on earth can anything be simple after imagining Kabir in towel 😳 😳 just wondering how did miss kashyap managed to have dinner 😆 😆 when chef himself was tempting enough who cares abt food 😆 😆

Just wanna know when next Kabir is cooking ...can I join

😆

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Aakujaveer

@Aakujaveer

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Ahhh good job. Loved it. When is part 2 coming? can't wait.

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

For part 2: Gods Are Crazy! part infinity..

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onie

@TurnThePage

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

God's P.O.V was hilarious...🤣
You are too good...plz write more.😳
BTW thanks for updating...😃

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sanswons

@sanswons

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

👏👏That was freaking awesome!! It couldn't have been better. I am sure anyone who reads it will have a smile on their face.Hats off!⭐️⭐️

Edited by sanswons - 10 years ago

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aashritha

@aash2302

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Amazing princess diva kya update hain aap ko jotha chappal nahi bas aap ko bahut saare in kisses loves and hugs milne chaiye 👏🤗

KaYa were amazing in your story I love them and your special guest was also good

Waiting for the next update

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praneeta

@pd786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

oh my god this was beyond perfection

i liked the god's point of view idea

really just beautifully amazing

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Oh my Godji 😃 he too KaYa Shipper like us... Welcome to the gang Godji ...& thanku for bringing this cute couple together 😃 😳 ...special thank you for that almost kiss in the car...wud b waiting to see actual kiss ...may b after meeting at 10 in kabir's cabin

Kabir saab jealous 😆 of manav bhai ...thank god ananya didn't over reacted & handled everything naturedly...
😳 😛

Loved the part ...hoping to read many more part (s) 😛
Keep them coming 😳

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yoginisahakari

@yoginisahakari

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Cute update

Love and prayer
Yogini

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

amazing...I love GOD..he's my favorite character

amazing KAYA..u write wonderfully

kiss nai hua..?!!

next part I want kaya's kiss and nd if u want to add little make out scene..with pleasure ;)

update soonish :)

Khushi