OS: Understanding Relationships - Page 2

i was like HAWT os but then i was like no perfectly good kabir os

kabir is such a sweetheart here

malvika *I feel bad for the lady trying all her charm on kabir and receiving nothing*

awesome os

Writer hain bhi toh masha allah kaisi! 👏

Loved it. I can't really see Kabir and Ananya as a couple right now so I tend to skip the OSs which have them as a couple. But I couldn't skip this and thank god I didn't! This was amazing. You stayed true to their characters. Even when they are a couple they are behaving the exact same way they would behave in their normal lives. No cheesiness. Simple meaningful dialogues.

You are a great writer. Please write more and PM me the next time. :)

I would like to give a small suggestion. I think it will be better if you don't give references to the episode in brackets that you did here. They act as distractions, at least for me. I like to be in some other world when I read an OS so I kind of get distracted. Instead of that you can just give a lucid description of her attire and let your imagination flow. It's just a suggestion. Please don't take it your heart. 😭

Coming back to your OS, I needed few moments to catch my breath. It was hottt☺️ And what you stated about Kabir is highly possible. I think he would want to go slow with her. OMG M gonna die if they do scenes like that in the show.

Lastly, keep writing. :*

*Edited typoes*

Loved the rage and tenderness

Thank you for writing this