OS: Understanding Relationships

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Okay this is my first OS on this forum and I would like to dedicate this to Krazykaju who happens to share her name with me and as I promised my first OS here will be for her. I would like to apologize beforehand if you do not like this and I'm not pretty sure if the content is for everybody but I just felt like writing about this. So here it goes:

Ananya and Kabir have been in a relationship for almost a month now and they both decided to keep it a secret on Kabir's insistence so they behaved very normally in front of everyone but surprisingly he behaved normal even when they were alone. He talked very casually with her, he had slowly started opening up a bit to her even though it was through telling her about his likes and dislikes, his interests and all but she was happy knowing these little things about him and to her surprise every revelation about him surprised her, the first one that shocked her was the fact that he absolutely loved chocolates and secondly he was very fond of kids. The pace of their relationship was really slow and Ananya enjoyed it but sometimes she wished that Kabir would actually take a step forward and kiss her atleast or hold her while they talked but to her surprise he always kept a very safe distance from her and he had only hugged her twice ever since they started dating, the first time was when she had said yes to her proposal and second time when it was her birthday a few days ago. And she could still feel the warmth of his hugs till now. She just wished he would hug her more often but nevertheless she was ready to wait for it.

One fine day, Kabir and Ananya were working sitting in their respective places, him in his cabin and her on her usual desk, as Ananya looked up from her file she saw Malvika walking into his cabin. She really trusted Kabir and she knew he wouldn't look at Malvika in any other than a colleague but she didn't know why she still didn't like Malvika near Kabir particularly because Malvika didn't know that Kabir was taken and she kept flirting with him, much to Ananya's annoyance and Kabir would just chuckle seeing her huff and puff, he enjoyed his possessive girlfriend because it gave him a sense of belonging, the feeling that he belonged to someone was a bliss!

Ananya saw Malvika standing beside Kabir and saying something smiling and she could make out she was asking him to have dinner with her and he agreed. She didn't mind that until she saw Malvika bend and kiss Kabir on his right cheek and then leave his office, smiling. And that was the final blow! Ananya stormed into Kabir's office as he was wiping the place where Malvika kissed with a tissue but she failed to notice that in her anger.



"Anany..."



Kabir was not even able to start his sentence properly when she started blowing him off.



"Aap samajhte kya hai khudko? How can you just let her kiss you and not react? You don't let me near you despite being your girlfriend and you let her kiss you!" she growled at him as Kabir stood up smiling trying to speak again, "Areh, Ananya suno..."



But she was in no mood to let him speak, her anger was on level hundred by now and she didn't know what she was saying, she just blurted, "You know I'm really thinking you are not even interested in me and that makes me wonder why are you even dating me! You behave so casually with me like I am only a friend of yours and you behave with her as if you guys are dating. Is that why you asked me to keep our relation a secret? So that you can flirt with her? Are you ashamed of me??" she instantly regretted after saying that but it was too late, she was already pinned to the wall behind the sofa in Kabir's office and he was dangerously close to her, his breathing hard, his left hand around her waist tightly and his right hand pinning her left hand to her side.

"What did you just say?" he asked dangerously, his voice rigid. "You feel I'm dating you for time-pass? You think I'm ashamed of you? You think I want to flirt with Malvika? You think I'm not interested in you Miss Ananya Kashyap!"

Saying that he used his right hand to rake his fingers through her and pulled her hair lightly making their faces one millimeter apart, he kissed on her chin and the area around her chin with butterfly kisses just where chin ended and neck started. In one moment, he pulled off the scarf (imagine Ananya wearing the clothes she wore in the precap) and he threw it away. He had become wild now and was kissing her neck and shoulders in a single breathe, he pulled one strap of her top down and nibbled at her shoulder.

Ananya was beyond shocked, she didn't expect this to be the result of his anger, she was shell shocked at the amount of passion she was receiving from Kabir now and in the next instant he left her. Ananya turned and walked a few steps away from him, still shy and shocked trying to register what just happened when he came and hugged her from behind, his eyes closed. His breathing was a bit normal now, Ananya could feel from the proximity but she could feel her own heart thud like thunder. His hug was gripping yet she could feel the warmth return in him and the next moment he spoke in a calm voice, eyes still closed, "Darr gayi na?"

Ananya was shocked yet again; this guy was driving her insane. He turned her around and with a slight smile he made her sit on the sofa and sat in front of her (just like they sat when she was crying in the kidnapping episode). Kabir held her hand in his and caressed the side of her palm with his thumb as he spoke, "Ananya what I did just now, was a plain trailer of what I feel like doing to you every time that I see you." He kissed her palm slowly his eyes never leaving hers as he said in a slow and seductive manner, "I feel like kissing every inch of your exposed skin with raw passion." This made Ananya gasp, if the proximity was not enough to kill her already then him admitting this would definitely make her faint!

He smiled at her innocence and began speaking again, "Yes, I have endless desire when I look at you but Ananya this is your first time and I wanted to take it really slow. You are new to all this and I am a man who has experience and I understand these feelings very well but you are still so nave and so innocent! I don't want you to lose that innocence ever because it's the innocence of yours that I fell in love with." Ananya was overwhelmed by what he said and more than guilty for her behavior with him but he was not done yet.

"Ananya you know the charm that you told me I have. I always knew I could use that charm and have you because you trust me blindly and you would have given in to me. But I never ever wish to exploit you to fulfill my desires. Yes, I admit I have a lot of desires for you but more than that I have love, care and most of all respect for you." Ananya was in tears as he continued, "And the reason why I asked you to keep this a secret is that, even though it doesn't matter to you but still I am a divorcee for the world and you dating me might bring a question on your character. That is the kind of society we live in and I didn't want anyone to do that to you. Our relationship has just blossomed and I wanted it to bloom beautifully and when we finally get to fully know each other and I officially propose you for marriage was the time I wanted to make our relationship official with all due respect so that even your mother wouldn't be questioned by the society for letting her daughter date a divorcee." he spoke looking at her softly, wiping off the fresh stream of tears from her cheek with his thumb.

He chuckled, "Call me old school but I wanted everything in our relationship to happen the traditional way, the right way, I want our extreme physical relationship to start after marriage and that is only possible if I keep my hands off you for now. Because you have no idea exactly how you affect me." He said the last bit in a low and seductive manner looking directly into her eyes. Then he smiled looking at her flushed expression and continued, "Ananya I don't want you to jump in your journey from becoming a girl to a woman. I want you take your own sweet time and understand things. I never want to exploit you because I am physically attracted to you as much as I love you."

He slowly adjusted the strap of her top as he spoke, "And last but not the least I am sorry for letting Malvika kiss me but trust me it came as a surprise to me and before I could say anything she walked out and mind you Miss Kashyap I was just wiping it off when you stormed in ready to prey on me..haha" he laughed earning a small smack and smile from her after all they crying.

He stood up and turned around when he suddenly felt Ananya hugging him tightly from behind, "I'm really really very sorry Kabir. I am really sorry. I shouldn't have doubted you for one second." Kabir smiled as he turned around in her embrace and hugged her back, "You don't have to say sorry Ananya because I know exactly how you felt, and when someone touches you I feel the same way. This feeling of possessiveness is mutual." He said placing his hand on her cheek and kissing her forehead lightly as Ananya closed her eyes in satisfaction. "You are mine and I am yours..." he ended as his forehead rested on hers.

"Now Miss Kashyap you might want to leave before I show you second trailer of my passion..." he chuckled as Ananya gasped and ran out but as he turned he found Ananya placing a kiss on his cheek exactly where Malvika had kissed erasing Malvika's mark from her man as she murmured, "Better now..." and she ran off leaving a smiling Kabir behind.

He thanked his lucky stars that she belonged to him and him only!

I hope you guys liked it and i am sorry if you didn't like the content. 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey you should definitely write more often...you have amazing writing skills

You penned down everything so perfectly

👏 ...totally loved it 😛

-Onie
Edited by onieloveian - 10 years ago
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Loved it 👏
Love it even more because I had the same idea of an OS.. Kabir and his raw emotions and his inabiity to control the desire in front of Ananya 😆
You have written it beautifully. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*blush**blush*
It was sooo good ...
Keep writing
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PM me about your next stories..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry it took me so long to comment dear but have been quite busy.

You are a good writer and have a very good grasp of your characters! You have a lot of potential so you should definitely write a lot more 😃
You have managed to portray Kabir and Ananya pitch perfectly! I can completely imagine Kabir behaving in this manner with Ananya. No matter how much he wants to be with her, he won't cross the boundaries until its the right time

You have bought out the maturity in Kabir and the youthful innocence iin Ananya quite wonderfully! 😊


It was a great effort! I really loved it and do write more! 🤗
Edited by .Rinnie. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Supern one.
Jealousy Ananya.
Matured. Kabir yet adorable.
You have written beautifully.
Write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazinggg...
passion, cuteness, anger...
everything in one.
full pack.
ananya's reaction was so obvious and kabir's reaction tho... 😳
awsome..

thank u soo much for this sweet gift and for pm.
do write more and pm me too 😉
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It was Awsome
You should write more stories dear
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Loved every part of it - especially Kabir's dialogue explaining his restraint and then the passion.
You write really well- please don't apologize - stories are gifts

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