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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Very nice. I really love the realism of your fic.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Awesoms, ouhh why are they seperated, look forward for your next update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Wow a lot has come out of this update.
waiting for the next.
pl update soon.
wanting to see how kabir reacts to ananya's decision
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Part 4


Kabir was silent.

Ananya: Kabir say something!

Kabir: I need to process this. You are saying that you want to move out? Over the small argument we had that night?

Ananya: It wasn't a small argument. It highlighted the fundamental differences between the ways we envision our future together?

Kabir: This is because of the marriage issue right? Give me some time. I'll force myself, I mean convince myself.

Ananya cupped his face in her hands. She had never seen him so vulnerable

Ananya: Kabir I am confident this space and time will help us figure out a common ground.

Kabir: What if it doesn't?

Ananya: Then the sooner we break-up the better. The longer we wait, the harder it'll get!

Kabir: Fine. GO! No. I don't want to hear another word. Leave!

Ananya didn't know what to take and what to leave. This house had become her home. Finally she decided to pack a bag with the basic essentials. She tearfully packed up and left.

Over the next few days Kabir calmed down. He realized that Anaya had been right. He had been trying to avoid the difficult question.

Kabir and Ananya tried their best to find a common ground. They tried professional counseling. Everything else was fine in their relationship. They loved and respected one another. But when it came to the issue of marriage, they were at a dead end.

Kabir was too badly scarred to get married again.

Ananya couldn't see herself remaining in a relationship that wouldn't end in marriage.

Kabir noticed that Ananya had started looking very pale and weak. He was very concerned about her. One morning Ananya came to his office.

Ananya: Kabir, I wanted to talk to you about something.. Its about us. I mean it's a personal matter.

Kabir: Let's talk right now. We can go to the coffee shop across the street.

Ananya: No I need to follow a lead right now. Let's meet at home.. I mean your home tonight?

Kabir nodded.

Kabir was waiting for Ananya. It was pouring outside. The bell rang and he opened the door to find a drenched Ananya standing outside.

Kabir: Ananya. No. You'll first go and change. Only then we'll talk.

Ananya went to the bedroom. She found that it was completely unchanged. Kabir hadn't moved his clothes to the empty cupboard. The clothes that she had left behind were still in their place.

Her eyes filled up with tears. She composed herself, changed and went out.

Kabir came towards her with a mug of coffee in his hands.

Kabir: Just the way you like it. Lots of milk and lots of sugar.

Ananya: Kabir.. I can't. I mean I have stopped having coffee.

Kabir: Ananya is everything ok?

Ananya: Kabir last week when I was on my beat I fainted.

Kabir: And why didn't either you or Sunny tell me?!

Ananya: Kabir calm down. I went to the doctor who conducted some tests. I got the reports day before. Here see them.

Ananya continued

Ananya: but before you open them just understand that this was as much as a shock for me. We have always been so careful and taken necessary precautions. I don't know.

Kabir opened the report and for the first time in his life he was at a loss for words.

Kabir: This says.. That you are pregnant.

Ananya: Yes. The doctor says I am 10 weeks along. I know this must be a huge shock...

Ananya's voice trailed off. Kabir had picked her up and was dancing around. Needless to say that Ananya hadn't expected this reaction

Ananya: Kabir put me down!

Kabir: I am sorry Ananya. But this is the news best ever! I can't tell you how happy and excited I am.

Ananya: Really?

Kabir: Why are you so surprised? And why did you wait two whole days to tell me this news?

Ananya: I didn't know how you'd react. Your failed marriage has made you weary of marriages. I wasn't sure if the pain of having lost a child in the past might...

Kabir: Not at all. I can't tell you how happy I am :)

He added anxiously.

You are happy, right?

Ananya: I don't know. It's all too overwhelming for me. Plus ever since I found out I have only been scared of your reaction.

I should get going.

Kabir: I'll drop you.

Ananya: No I drove here. I can go on my own.

Kabir was left thinking. Have I really blown away my second chance at happiness?

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
I am the first one to comment..

Yipee..
It is fantastic.
OMG!!! Ananya is pregnant..
Awesome update..
I have no words about it
And best part is that Kabir is happy about it.
Update next part soon.
Edited by KaYa_licious - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Too good paradigm, very well written!!
Salute your skill😉

Please keep more flowing, when possible!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
very well portrayed
kabir is happy with ananya's pregnancy
"Ananya: I didn't know how you'd react. Your failed marriage has made you weary of marriages. I wasn't sure if the pain of having lost a child in the past might..." this line makes me feel ananya was taunting him and putting forth her thoughts
kabir needs to understand before its too late
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Wooo dear all parts were awsm
It was like I m watching reporters future episodes
Thanks for pm

Plzz cont soon
Do pm me for next parts

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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Great chapter sweetie
Loved it
Kabir is feared about marriage
WoW! Ananya is pregnant
Update soon
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Part 5
Kabir tried speaking to Ananya the next day.

Ananya; Kabir, let's not discuss our personal matters during office hours. We can talk in the evening?

At 7 PM

Kabir: Ananya let's go? You also mentioned that Aunty's out of town? I'll cook for you. Left to your own devices you'll just eat Maggi!

Ananya: I still have a couple of hours of work. You go home. I'll manage.

Kabir waited for Ananya to finish up. Finally when he saw her wrapping up, he came to her.

Kabir: Ananya madam done?

Ananya: You are still here?

Kabir:I am always at your service ma'am.

Kabir noticed that she looked worried. She was also walking absent-mindedly and almost tripped down the stairs. Thankfully Kabir was next to her to steady her.

Kabir: ANANYA! Please be careful. Especially now that you are pregnant.

Ananya: I am fine.

Kabir: No you are not.Now sit down and tell me whats wrong.

Ananya: What'll happen to this child?

Kabir: What'll happen? She will be the most loved child in this world. We'll give her all the love, support and nurturing in the world.

Kabir was so happy that ananya smiled despite her worry.

Ananya: You keep speaking of our baby as a girl.

Kabir: Because I am certain we'll have a daughter who'll be called her daddy's princess.

Ananya became serious.

Ananaya: Are you sure thats what they'll call her?

Kabir: Dont be jealous. They'll call her Ananya Kashyap and Kabir Sharma's daugher. Happy now?

Ananya: Really? I thought kids born out of wedlock were called b**tards.

Kabir: ANANYA! ARE YOU CRAZY? HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT?

Ananya: Kabir we live in a society and that's exactly what our child will be called.

Kabir: You are an educated woman. Why are you being so unreasonable?

Ananya: And why are you being so delusional? We are having baby together and you still don't want to marry me.

Kabir: I am tired of this word "Marriage"! I will be the best father to our child and the best partner to you!

Ananya: But you won't be my husband. I am going. And don't come after me.

Kabir was exasperated. He realized that he needed to come clean with Ananya about his first marriage. Tell her the complete truth. Tell her the incident that had scarred him for life.

He went to her house the next day. He saw her mother going out.

Kabir: Aunty you are back? Is Ananya at home?

AM: She's left for work. Anything else?

Kabir: You are angry with me?

AM: Kabir, I can't understand you. You claim to love my daughter and I tend to believe that. Yet, you aren't willing to marry her even when you are having a child together. I am tired of all this Kabir.

She had turned red and was breathless. Kabir helped her sit down.

Kabir: I am really sorry aunty. I love Ananya. But my previous marriage has eroded all beleif in the institution.

AM; I can't understand you. Anyways I need to get going. I need to pick up Ananya's reports.

Kabir: No aunty. you are not well. I'll pick them up and give them to Ananya in office.

Kabir insisted and finally Ananya's mother relented.

Kabir went to the hospital and picked up the reports. The envelope wasn't sealed properly and the report fell down. As he was picking it up he saw something that pushed him into a blind rage. He drove like a madman to the hospital and ran to Ananya's desk.

Before Ananya could react he was shaking her and yelling at her

Kabir: How could you do this??!!

Ananya: Do what?

Kabir: I just picked the reports and you...

Ananya: Kabir let's go somehwere in private and talk.

Kabir: No I want everyone to know. Everyone. Ms Ananya Kashyap found out some time back that she was pregnant with my child.

A gasp went around the room. But Kabir paid no heed to it.

Ananya: Kabir stop it.

Kabir: I was very happy and promised to be the best possible father to our child. But she wasnt happy. All she wanted was a societal certificate of being married. When I refused that, she decided to take away the thing I deemed most precious. My baby. She aborted my baby.

It was Ananya's turn to be furious.
Ananya: How dare you?!

Kabir: How dare you? All of you are exactly the same thing. You know why I hate the institution of marriage/ Because my lawfully wedded wife Shreya had done exactly the same thing. She had aborted my baby as a means to get back at me! She hadn't "lost" the baby. SHe had killed it.

And today you did the same thing. That was my flesh and blood and I had an equal right as you. I..

Ananya: Kabir. STOP. before you say more things that you'll regret in the future. Read the name on the report. I said read the name on the report.

Ananya Kamra. You picked up someone else's report.

Kabir's face went from anger to acute response.

Kabir; Ananya I...

Ananya: Kabir not a word more. I am genuinely sorry about what had happened in your previous marriage. If you had told me about the abortion earlier, I would have helped you work through the issues.But you didnt. Instead you allowed the shadow of your past destroy our presnt. You want to wallow in the past.

You don't want a second chance at life.

And I don't want a life with you anymore.







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