SS: Second Chances Last Part Pg 27 - Page 11

Originally posted by: paradigm

I know that this part is going to be extremely painful to read. It was painful to write. But my attempt through the story is to show the ups and downs couples face and how some have the strength to overcome the obstacles.

Ouch.. that last part.. it was such an emotional update, please update soon,

no no no

It's so emotional..
I can't collect my words to praise this...
You are right
It is so tough to write intense story...
And you did the job amazingly...
U moisten my eyes..
I am not the individual who cry easily but you did the job...

Please update soon and Pm me next time.

Oh god!!

Very emotional update.
But I think both KA will overcome all this very soon.

Pm me when u update next

Love and prayer
Yogini

Such emotional part

feeling sad.
after so long they are so happy but their happieness has been snatched.
poor soul ananya and kabir.
both are in pain.
kabir was there for her but ananya...
she should be with him and trust his love.
super emotional part and beautifully written.
lovely.
thank u so much for pm.
update soon.

So goood and

Just started reading this and my god is it awesome. I love the story and what I like most is that it isn't the regular 'everything is wonderful' story you find everywhere but it reflects all the ups and downs of relationships and to a certain extent of society as well regarding the whole concept of marriage.

I love the depth you have put into it :) I read all of it in a day. The way you have etched out the characters is beautiful. As much as I think Ananya is behaving unfair to Kabir, you cannot fully blame her. She has just undergone the loss of a child, and this is the time that Kabir has to stand by Ananya unconditionally like she stood up for him in the past.

All in all, I say brilliant and do continue soon! It's a pleasure to read a story with a matured content. 😊