TS:Mrs.Ananya Sharma V/s Mr.Kabir Sharma-PART2 SAGI'SPg5 MINE Pg10

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Yes, and that's where a domestic interaction would start. The cold treatment, the vessel banging, the cold dinner statement and kabir manaofying her finally in the bed.

Baki aap like Lena. I cannot imagine anymore.

Thank you so much honey for all your valuable suggestions...
I had thought in that line... Hope I can I write that properly... 😃

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Ranjani

@Gouri_Joshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Just great

Nice title

Really superb OS

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super_boy

@super_boy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Very nice os ... wud luv to read more stories abt mr n mrs sharma ...wud b fun to read their rom com n nok jhok

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Habiba

@_habiba_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Woow amazing! Loved Ananya and Kabir as a married couple.. Kabir's answer at the end was mind-blowing! Keep it up! 👍🏼

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awww...
I want to see his puppy face
"Saas Bahu aur Maachis" 🤣
The last line was perfect!
I was actually waiting to see what happens after they get home 😉
One of the best stories on the forum

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sonyjknum

@sonyjknum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Kya kya sapne dikha diye Aazeen

Mr and Mrs kabir sharma wow

Beautifully written loved every moment of it

It would be better if you take it to part 2

Ananya ne bola na ghar jaake batati.hoon well we are interested😉

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Hello Aazeen,

Loved to read your writing after a long time. It is very very good. Kabir has correctly said that we always try to improve over our previous performance. Competition with our own self increases our efficiency whereas with others creates jealousy and rivelry which is not healthy.

Keep writing but take care of your health. Love you.