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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

I love this story
And both their feelings ❤️
I hope he DOES drop her home
Update soon

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Just read the 2 chapters today and I really like the way Kabir is possessive towards Ananya already. Please do PM me when you update next, have sent you a buddy request for it.

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Anamika

@Impossible.Girl

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Ana...Loved it dear

It was so sweet

the POV's are very well written

I'm simply loving this story

thanks for the pm dear

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

@PrInCeSs_dIVa

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

That was simply amazing!!! Read both the parts and i am very impressed with the story line. Its quite descriptive which kept me hooked. And what i loved about it that it was not fast paced. I like slow and realistic stories and i can say this is a perfect one :)

Loved your writing. Looking forward to the next part if you continue writing.

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

waiting for the update

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Maria_TR

@Maria_TR

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

What an amazing update that was! Dear, be ready to be blamed for you are increasing the desires of seeing THE POSSESSIVE KABIR to SUCH level (And more..😆) in me..God! He couldn't even tolerate Ronnie's gaze on Ananya..😆 How hot will Mr. Sharma look in this avatar.. So, he is realising the changes in him and also has an idea of what his stupid reporter thinks of him. Really loving your work..😃👍🏼 Thanks a lot for the PM🤗