Kaya SS : Beneath It All.. Ch2-3 Pg 15- 15/6 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Ok I admit I am a silent reader of FFs and all😆 I do try to hit like whenever I can but as I read your note I have to speak
you are doing an amazing job and its a beautiful stiry

Do keep it up👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
This one is also amazing story... continue soon... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
It was awsome
I just read it now
Sorry for being late
But it was just feb...
Loved it..
Nd mistry... Which u loved the most in your story ... A dark mistry...
I realky wabt to kniw how u solve all tge missunderstabdibg and getti g bacl kaya together
Just ignord spelling mistake...
Bd u sent u a buddy req olz acceot this nd p.m me wheb update nxt part
... Ty ib advanxe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
It was awsome
I just read it now
Sorry for being late
But it was just feb...
Loved it..
Nd mistry... Which i loved the most in your story ... A dark mistry...
I realky wabt to kniw how u solve all tge missunderstabdibg and getti g bacl kaya together
Just ignord spelling mistake...
Bd u sent u a buddy req olz acceot this nd p.m me wheb update nxt part
... Ty ib advanxe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Awesome update of Chapter 2 😳
Like the title of it is "Past and Present", it was a beautiful mix of several emotions such as anger, sadness, but especially hurt 👏
As usual, personally i could easily relate to your characters, that's the most important for a writer, to convey the right emotions to readers so that they can relate to the story 😉
Thank you for the pm, have a nice day 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
A Fab update...loved it to the core.you have managed to bring out exact emotions of the characters very lively.its as if we are watching it live...eargly waiting until you unveil the mystery behind their anger and hatred...i must say that this is one ff that i sense i will read till the end..lots of luv to you...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Hi i am new to india forums.ur story is awesome.i already requested u for PM.please PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Hiii ! .
Honestly i am floored by the first part and was compelled to comment here from my almost dead account.
I love the sublime expressions and the intricacy with which you manage to continue the track without any hiccups.
Ananya and Kabir, thanx to the show, are a dynamite combo but your first update showed totally new genre to their story. .I am hooked and please to pm me your blog link... I might not get sleep without reading it.

Cheers !
Ruchi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Hey please update the next part... I am waiting to read it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Hi Avantika,

Read the first part of ur fic. Its amazing.The way you have potraited the characters and their emotions is really worth reading. Would loved to be added to ur PM list.Please send me the link to ur blog from chapter 2

Love and prayer
Yogini 😊

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