Kaya SS : Beneath It All.. Ch2-3 Pg 15- 15/6 - Page 8

Can you please send me pm of your blog...
I want to read your story further...
It seems interesting from a bit of glimpse of chapter 2

the banner is very artistic.it somehow plays a vital point along the border of the story line.

Superb part.
You are an amazing writer.
So much tension between them.
Very eager to know what had happened in the past.
Thanks for the pm,

Its fantastic,awesome,Mind blowing,...
I love the storyline.
Tragedy is often my favourite...
Love the way you explain KaYa's emotions. The story looks less fictional. Your writing give it a genuine look. Feelings and emotions you portrayed in story feels so real...
Continue soon.
Thanks for PM
Nd pm me next time too.

My dear Avantika,

Well, I have finally managed to locate your blog from your PM and have read Chapter 2 of this story with considerable pleasure. Though I must confess that I am still waiting for the day that you will write a light, fluffy, charming love story devoid of all this cartload of crushing angst, this one is coming along nicely.

You have managed to avoid making all this hidden anguish on both sides tip over into the OTT zone, though I still do not understand why Kabir has to be so vulnerable and so inert at the same time after Ananya leaves out of the blue for London (why not the US, surely a much more promising location for budding Indian journalists?).

It is not like him, as you have sketched him, to (a) give up on her so easily or (b) let his professional performance slide so fast and so badly. A hard core professional is not derailed so easily by a broken love affair, not even if he has the baggage of an unpleasant divorce on top of it. It is not convincing, to me at least. One has one's pride if nothing else, and that keeps one going. This one looks like a Devdas-lite!

As for your Ananya, she has of course to be super-successful and Ms.Fixit, for that is the unwritten rule for all heroines, bar our poor Riya, of course! 😉 Kritika is getting to be better by the day onscreen, and I can almost see her in your Ananya. Almost, for I hope Ms.KK is not going to start shivering and crying at the sound of her crush!

I shall look out for Chapter 3, and once again, it is very pleasant and appealing reading.

Shyamala Aunty


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So, I just read this today and absolutely loved it. The mystery of what made Ananya leave KKN in the first place and returning to that place now, to face him will be an interesting read.

hi there, i have just started reading your work, and its fantastic, i love how you are describing the feelings of the characters, and i would love to continue reading your work on Kabir and Ananya, so please add me to your pm list, for further updates. thanks!:)

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Hi! I loved the first chapter! It was very different from the story. How can I read the 2nd chapter? Please let me know 😊