Kaya SS : Beneath It All.. Ch2-3 Pg 15- 15/6 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Avantikaji.
Read the first chapter and just loved it. The storyline is gripping and the language is flawless. Read a good work after sometime.

Pl.add me to your PM list and send me your blog ID
Would love to read all chapters as soon as they are posted.

Thanks in advance.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Hi,
You have an incredible talent of creating a picture with words, I've just read the first part and I am floored by your writing. 👏 Please do add me to your PM list, would love to see you unfold this story...

Thank you!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Oh wow!!!!!!!! Different angle. Can U pls PM me?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Hey... this is awesome... loved the way you penned their emotions.. your selection of words is just too good...

want to see Ananya and Kabir's faceoff...

continue soon...

would love to read your work...

I have sent you buddy request... pls pm me your next update or blog link
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Hello... nice story..Loved how you portrayed ananya's emotions...
Please add me to your buddy list😊😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Hiii ..
When i read on forum that the story didnt progressed.. i was bit laid back while reading but Wao !!! For me the story just took leaps and bounds all together.
First update was more like a tip of iceberg and with this, one could actually feel the raw emotions from both the sides.
Obviously you hit the bulls-eyes with curiosity bubbling up inside the readers about the very 'Past'.
And yeah.. as always..I love the way you write - effortless !!
And yeah , missed in my previous comment - I love Khalid here, just the way in show - He is perfectly portrayed as Human. He is bitchy but at the same tym has a heart which tends to overlook the emotions on his own personal ground.
Loved it ! N thanx for the pm

Ruchi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Hi..
I just read the ss n trust me it was awesome...
Can u please send me the link for ch#2...
N i'll love to be in ur pm lost for future...
It was fantastic
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
avantika I got to know about this story just now and the first chapter has increased my interests!!!

please pm me the link of your blog so that I can read it.. And I've sent you a buddy request please accept that one..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Chapter 1 is superb!!!
loved their respective mental state..
what happened between kabir and ananya??
I'm intrigued to know that!!
pls pm me the link for the second chapter...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey.I am Ria . I am new to this indian forum . I have sent u buddy request just red ur beneath all part 1 . It was mind blowing . Perfectly written nd expressed what kaya felt. As I am new to the forum I don't know how to access to ur blog? Can u please help me to reach yo ur blog coz m eagerly waiting to read more parts of dis story so plzz help me. N plz pm me..plzzz...

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