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shelly

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Posted: 19 years ago

#321

ohh god plzz post i want d next part 😭

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Aparna

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Posted: 19 years ago

#322

Oh man....Sindhuja.....this was a complete turnabout....amazing stuff.

I totally loved it. I think this is one of your best written parts ever.

"The Other Side of Love".......maybe its finally showing the other side indeed!!!!

I am simply blown away....awesome stuff girl!!!

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Eloquent

@Eloquent

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Posted: 19 years ago

#323

Cool chapter! Loved the adventure-ish feel to it! Hope u continue soon! N I wont mind some ashi-yuvi adventure in it ! 😉

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hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#324

presenting...my most fav part....out of every thing i have EVER written...i bet ull luv it...btw the fics not done...more 2 come...

all she remembered of the rest of the days was the same fright tht had gripped tht nite..
every step she took..she looked over her shoulder in fear...
every sound she heard haunted her nites...
her dreams were filled with masked men firin bullets at her...
she had thot she was brave.....but bullets were not wat she had xpected...
they had rattled her teenage nerves badly...
yuvi was her only support..
astonishingly...she had nvr seen him frightened...
his anger consumed all other feelings...
all xcept love...thank fully tht one was still very much alive...
years passed....ashis fears had faded...but sumtimes in the nite she still woke up with sweat pouring down her face

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it was a cold december morning..
the fire blazed strong..

magalyam kuru maho devh
magalayah tanojhoja
magalam kundali u kashka mangalya tanohari
mangalam tantu re mahe
tum jeev sharna shtam

they went seven times around the sacred fire...
exchanging vows of duty,love,fidelity,respect and a fruitful union..
the bride in red was glowing with happiness...
a wisp of red hair curled on her cold pink cheek...
she looked up at yuvi....his eyes reflectin the fire..
it was the simple wedding she had always wanted..
the temple was deserted...
a thick fog lay outside...
"ab dulhan go manglasutra pehnao"the pandit's voice echoed

yuvi smiled down at the most beautiful woman in the world..
he place a gentle hand on her red head to accept her as his wife for
better or for worse...in health or in sickness...
implying that though they r 2 individuals from tht day onward they were one in body,mind and spirit
they were now husband and wife..
together for life..... 😳😳

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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Ritwika

@ritz_ashiyuvi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#325

SUPERB SINDHU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

couldnt control writing in caps..

awesome....they hav finally got married...

i cant express my happiness and great fullness to u for writing this

the marriage scene was beautifully, excellently depicted...

SUPERB!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

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Ritwika

@ritz_ashiyuvi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#326

i just cant stop reading this part

i have already read it 10 times now..

its awesome sindhu...ur writing is superb....

btw did they get married while still in college....

whoi cares??..they got married..and it was wriitten excellently.....

i can visualise the whole scene in front of my eyes.....so gr8 & beautiful is ur writing...

and truly this is the best part till date....

but the part, where u had described the different aspects of the emotion-love was also excellent

even all these words fall short to express how much i liked this part 👏

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Nishi

@nishi

Dazzler

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Posted: 19 years ago

#327

wow !!!!!!
finally !! but does this mean the fic's ended 😭 😭 😭 plzzzzz haan mat bolo !! i wanna read more
very well written sindu!! 👏 👏 👏

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ashi_mania

@ashi_mania

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Posted: 19 years ago

#328

sindhu u tempted me to read the part by saying that u got ashi and yuvi married 😳 😳 😳.....and I must say that it was written brilliantly 👏 👏 👏 👏

but now there is a big task ahead of me...I gotta search the page from where i stopped reading it.......and believe I am cursing myself at this moment coz it was the stupidest thing I have ever done

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#329

no..nishi not ended..more 2 come....

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sonia ajit prasad

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Posted: 19 years ago

#330

oh! sindhu why do u write so beautifully tht i am unable to stop myself frm reading it again an again.this part was really very beautifully written. the words u've used means soo much, its jus a fic but it seems tht everything is actually happening, cud really feel it and yes cud not just imagine it but literally c it. i hope u get wht i wanna say cos jus saying tht it was the best part wud be an understatement.

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